I think the body should be blended into the background instead of the cutoff. The splatters on her face, mostly though the ones on the left, need to be behind her. I think if more 'bits' of the background texture where placed, even if lightly so, around say the red highlights it might look better.
I do like the touch on her face though. It's just one of those times where if some more work was put into it it'd be better.