one of the boys

[Artemis]

alright, i am pretty happy with how this turned out, for the most part
i know my right side is depressingly empty, and my left side is much too busy
but aside from that

CnC please?

 

[Charlie]

It lacks symmetry as a whole, not even in the abstract sense.
The stock's choppy along the sides, especially the stroke.
Brushes on the left hand side should be scattered a bit on the right. They should also be more intense :3
Text should be brought closer to Katy.
Ball for a light source should be its own layer, rather than just a *point* for a light source.


It's interesting in concept, but work on its execution to be more crisp and clean cut.
Even though the colors are bright, they look a bit bland against that lilac.