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Fanfiction ► Namine and Roxas



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Haku

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Great chapter alot of deep emotions going on in this part xD.
 

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I love the story so much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Where's the next chapter?
(hi, im new here . . . hehe)
 

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thx guys oh and welcome Racel im pretty new but yea ^^" ok guys no one is readin this aprt from u so im gettting a lil sad..... and wen im sad i get writers block and cant write so u have to wait a lil while.
 

Haku

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Well I hope that you cheer up because no one wants writer's block.
 

Haku

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I'm sure that if you keep writing and posting great stories some more people would love to read it xD.
 

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thx guys well i teryed my hardest and this is wat came our ^^"

Chapter 12:
We had been galloping for awhile now I looked to see where we were and saw we were in a field that looked familiar I looked up and saw the castle. My smile became a grin “ROXAS!” I yelled at the top of my lungs. I saw someone come out of the castle, they had their hood on. I waved they waved back. Memories called to his herd and I heard them slow then soon stop. We were nearly there. “Ready?” Memories asked I nodded. When he came close the person, he galloped to the side while I jumped from his back and landed with a thump. Soon I was embraced with a hug. I hug them back
“Your back” It was Roxas
“I promised!” I said hugging him tighter. I looked up and saw people behind us. I began to blush I saw Axel with a huge grin on his face, Sora also with a huge grin, Kairi looking ever so happy to see me, Demyx grinning, I saw Riku he was even smiling. Everyone was smiling even Saix and Zexion were smiling, even Xemnas seemed happy to see me “NAMINE!” they all yelled I was nearly blown backwards. “YOU’RE BACK!” Roxas turned but still had his arm around me.
“IM BACK!” I yelled so loud I surprised myself.
“LET’S PARTY!” Axel and Demyx yelled at the same time. Demyx started playing his sitar “Namine you sing!” Axel yelled and grabbed me and pulled me to the front “WHAT?! I CANT SING!”
“Give it a try” Axel said placing me in front of a big crowd.
“Namine what are you singing?” Demyx asked in a whisper. I walked over to Demyx and whispered the song. He nodded then began to play the tune.

Grew up in a small town
And when the rain would fall down
I just stared out my window
Dreaming of what could be
And if I'd end up happy
I would pray

Trying hard to reach out
But when I'd try to speak out
Felt like no one could hear me
Wanted to belong here
But something felt so wrong here
So I pray
I could breakaway

[CHORUS:]
I'll spread my wings and I'll learn how to fly
I'll do what it takes till' I touch the sky
I'll make a wish
Take a chance
Make a change
And breakaway
Out of the darkness and into the sun
But I won't forget all the ones that I loved
I'll take a risk
Take a chance
Make a change
And breakaway

Wanna feel the warm breeze
Sleep under a palm tree
Feel the rush of the ocean
Get on board a fast train
Travel on a jet plane, far away
And breakaway


Buildings with a hundred floors
Swinging around revolving doors
Maybe I don't know where they'll take me but
Gotta keep moving on, moving on
Fly away breakaway

I'll spread my wings
And I'll learn how to fly
Though it's not easy to tell you goodbye
I gotta take a risk
Take a chance
Make a change
And breakaway
Out of the darkness and into the sun
But I won't forget the place I come from
I gotta take a risk
Take a chance
Make a change
And breakaway

As I finished there was a silence. Then sudden cheering “YOU SAID YOU COULDN’T SING!” Axel yelled
“I can’t” I yelled back. After some time I escaped the crazy fan’s and went to see Memories. He seemed edgy
“Namine” he said nervously
“What’s wrong?” I asked placing a hand on his Neck trying to sooth him.
“Something bad is going to happen soon”
“What are you talking about?”
“That” he said his eyes wide with fear. I turned to see a dark cloud coming towards us. I could tell it was no any cloud I could feel the evil inside it.
“We have to get everyone out of here” I said quietly
“Ok” I heard Roxas say he was coming towards me.
“Can you feel it too?” he asked I nodded
“Memories, can u herd take all of us?” I asked with the slightest bit of hope
“yes” He said
“Ok Roxas can you get everyone over here?” I asked he nodded and walked away. I grabbed a piece of Memories mane and pulled myself up. Soon Roxas came back with everyone who was staring at me “Ok guys no time to explain. Just get on a horse” everyone shrugged. Each horse had about 2 people on them. Roxas sat behind me. “Ok follow us guys and hold on for dare life!” I yelled and started galloping. I heard some people squeal when their horse started galloping. “Roxas you ok?” I asked making sure he was
“Ya” he said but I felt him put his arms around my waist. I blushed
“Hold on Roxas” I said and told Memories to run faster and he did.
 

Haku

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I thought that this chapter was much different from the past chapters, I would like to see what happens next.
 

Ultima-Angel

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They were just happy i said i had a writers block so i managed to write this! so its gonna be a lil diffrent
 

Haku

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Well I still thought it was really good even though you did have writers block.
 

Haku

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How's the next chapter coming not that there is a rush or anything.:)
 
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