Chapter One: The Aven's Tale
Aggranorn, a world full of magic and races. The three main races of this world; Avens, large bird people who have a mastery over the skys; Elves a magic using race who are masters of the bow; and Humans a race that has a main specialty in hand to hand close combant, are begining to loosen their already broken ties. The Avens being betrayed by the humans long ago which cost their great leader, Zerooke, his wings. Zerooke made the Aven home, Sky City, with a gem that allowed him to shape the clouds to his liking. This gem also was what made the Avens themselves. Avens didn't always look and act like humans at one time they were normal birds. Starting our tale off is the back story of the Aven.
A small white and black bird is hoping around near an odd shaped stone. As the bird's beak hit the strange stone there was a flash of bright light and a loud chirp from the bird. Towards the end of the long chirp though it changed to accual words. When the light cleared there was the first Aven laying next to the stone.
"What am I?" the creature said to himself as he picked up the stone. On his left arm engraved in the language he would adopt has his own was the word 'Aven', "I will take up the Zerooke and take this stone for my own. I will make more of my kind and we shall make our way up to being the greatest race on this land."
Zerooke went to find more birds to turn into Avens like himself but was unsuccesful in using the stone to his benefit. Humans noticed this strange creature and tried to attack him. Zerooke faught for his life every time and managed to comeout on top until the humans decided he was a threat and sent a small army of 20 people to attack him. The one thing about this army is the fact they were trained fighters. Zerooke tried to spread his wings but was still knocked to the ground and lost both of his wings to a swordsman and the scar across his right eye. The weird stone feeling Zerooke's pain let out another bright light this time turning the humans into creatures known as soul eaters. Knowing that he wasn't safe any more Zerooke tried to flee but the loss of his wings made him near immobile. The stone knowing that it would be used for the humans if Zerooke were to die so it made an island toward the northeast in the shape of an eagle for the soul eaters and Zerooke to live on. Zerooke did not feel sastisfied with just the island so he made the wonderous cloud made city known as Sky City. The birds that flew by were turned into Avens and the city eventually became one of the best known cities in Aggranorn if it were because of the strange beasts that inhabited it or for the amazing way it was made.
Zerooke now has a cape that hangs over the left side of his body hiding the tattoo. There is one major thing, other than he doesn't have wings, that sets him off from all other Avens, he was the only one that kept his feathered tail.
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This is made from a comic that me and my friend draw/color/make so if it seems a little weird please take that into consideration. Please rate and comment and Chapter 2 will be here soon maybe...
Aggranorn, a world full of magic and races. The three main races of this world; Avens, large bird people who have a mastery over the skys; Elves a magic using race who are masters of the bow; and Humans a race that has a main specialty in hand to hand close combant, are begining to loosen their already broken ties. The Avens being betrayed by the humans long ago which cost their great leader, Zerooke, his wings. Zerooke made the Aven home, Sky City, with a gem that allowed him to shape the clouds to his liking. This gem also was what made the Avens themselves. Avens didn't always look and act like humans at one time they were normal birds. Starting our tale off is the back story of the Aven.
A small white and black bird is hoping around near an odd shaped stone. As the bird's beak hit the strange stone there was a flash of bright light and a loud chirp from the bird. Towards the end of the long chirp though it changed to accual words. When the light cleared there was the first Aven laying next to the stone.
"What am I?" the creature said to himself as he picked up the stone. On his left arm engraved in the language he would adopt has his own was the word 'Aven', "I will take up the Zerooke and take this stone for my own. I will make more of my kind and we shall make our way up to being the greatest race on this land."
Zerooke went to find more birds to turn into Avens like himself but was unsuccesful in using the stone to his benefit. Humans noticed this strange creature and tried to attack him. Zerooke faught for his life every time and managed to comeout on top until the humans decided he was a threat and sent a small army of 20 people to attack him. The one thing about this army is the fact they were trained fighters. Zerooke tried to spread his wings but was still knocked to the ground and lost both of his wings to a swordsman and the scar across his right eye. The weird stone feeling Zerooke's pain let out another bright light this time turning the humans into creatures known as soul eaters. Knowing that he wasn't safe any more Zerooke tried to flee but the loss of his wings made him near immobile. The stone knowing that it would be used for the humans if Zerooke were to die so it made an island toward the northeast in the shape of an eagle for the soul eaters and Zerooke to live on. Zerooke did not feel sastisfied with just the island so he made the wonderous cloud made city known as Sky City. The birds that flew by were turned into Avens and the city eventually became one of the best known cities in Aggranorn if it were because of the strange beasts that inhabited it or for the amazing way it was made.
Zerooke now has a cape that hangs over the left side of his body hiding the tattoo. There is one major thing, other than he doesn't have wings, that sets him off from all other Avens, he was the only one that kept his feathered tail.
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This is made from a comic that me and my friend draw/color/make so if it seems a little weird please take that into consideration. Please rate and comment and Chapter 2 will be here soon maybe...
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