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If your into the reality type stuff, then keep on readin' 'cause this that kind of story!
Note that you'll hear names of other companies and such. Please comment on this fanfic!

Chapter 1

Terra awoke in her tiny bedroom. She sat up and examined her room.

Terra had short blonde hair (recently cut) that was turning redder every day like her mother. She had a mix between a blue and green eye color.

She had been sleeping on a queen-sized bed. Her sheat was white with tiny, smaller than a penny, polka-dots. Her blanket was purple. Terra's favorite color. She jumped off her bed and examined the rest of her room.

She had a light brown wooden dresser. On it, was a TV, Gamecube, and Gamecube games. Such as Sonic games, Animal Crossing, Billy Hatcher and the Giant Egg, and Mario Party 5. Terra turned on the TV and turned it to the news.

She opened some of her drawers of her dresser and grabbed her uniform for a middle school called Fees.

Terra was in sixth grade and was in her second quarter of the school year. They had a uniform. She had to wear a plaid blue skirt. She had to wear an even darker shade of blue stockings with a white blouse (Think of Kairi's uniform in KH2).

Terra changed into her uniform, listening to the news. She threw her large green T-shirt and sweat pants that had monkeys on them into her laundry basket.

Terra sat on her bed, watching the news while putting her black Converse on. Once she was done. she watched the rest of the news.

"In other words, this morning it appears to be raining. Already at 6:30!!" the news anounced. Terra heard thunder and saw a flash of lightning. "And not just raining folks. But it has been confirmed to be a thunder storm!"

"No duh, Sherlock," Terra said quietly to the TV.

The news continued, "But don't worry folks, tomorrow is going to be sunny all day! And on Wednesday, it'll be a little cloudy. And that's it for today. And GOOD MORNING ARIZONA!!!!!!!!!!"

Terra turned off the TV. "Has it ever come to mind that 95% of the time you're WRONG when it comes to weather news?!" she screamed at the TV. But all of a sudden, there was a noise. Not the thunder. But a snoring type sound. She put her ear to the west wall. The snoring grew louder. "Oh my God!"

It was Terra's twin sister, Lilly snoring. They looked exactly alike (well, no duh!) but they behaved different. Terra got A's in everything, was in three sport teams, volleyball, swimming, and gymnastics. And she was in three clubs. A book club (Guardians of Ga'Hoole), a magic club (you know...MAGIC TRICKS!!), and was in an owl club where they basically learn about owls. She spent her free time studying. She only watched about 2 hours of TV each day (besides movies).

While Lilly was totally diferent. She didn't really study much like Terra. If fact, she didn't study at all! The highest grade she's ever gotten was a D...No sport teams or clubs were in her life. She spent her free time watching TV or playing video games.

In their writing class, they're spending all year writing their own books. To see how long it takes to write an actual book. And the best book got to be actually published. Terra's subject was Lilly. Her book was called, "My Evil Twin and Me," (like the fanfic! lol). So far, it's been doing pretty good. Terra's been taking notes on Lilly secretively.

Terra quickly grabbed a notebook from a wooden bookshelf and wrote, "The angelic daughter was awoken by the monster's roar that people dare to call it my sister's snores," basically writing, "Lilly snores."

She put her notebook in her backpack and exited her room and headed to the bathroom. There, she brushed her hair and entered the kitchen. Where her Grandparents sat eating a bagel and reading the newspaper.

"Hi, Grandma, Grandpa!" Terra greeted sweetly, sitting at the table.

Her grandparents lived with Terra's family.

"Why, hello there, Terra!" Terra's grandmother greeted. "Would you like a bagel?"

"Sure," Terra answered.

"I thought you'd say that! So I made one for you." Terra's grandmother handed her a plate with two pieces of a bagel.

Terra took the plate and put it front of her. "Thank you," Terra said, standing up. "I'm going to grab a yogurt and an apple." Terra walked to the fridge and took out a yogurt and apple. She walked back to the table and started eating.

The three of them heard a door open and Lilly appeared. They all stared at her.

Lilly looked just like Terra but at the moment her hair was messy and her shirt was both inside out and backwards.

"I was tired last night. I couldn't think straight," Lilly answered everyone's question before they even said it.

"You're up early, Lilly. Usually you wake up twenty minuets later than when you're suppossed to. This morning, you got up ten minuets later," Terra explained to Lilly.

"Oh darn. I coulda slept in..." Lilly said groggilly.

"Well, do you want a bagel, Lilly?" Terra's grandmother asked.

"No, I'll just have cereal," Lilly answered. She walked over to the cupboard with cereal boxes in it and grabbed Coco Puffs. She grabbed a bowl and poured Coco Puffs in.

"Uhh...Lilly? Should you be eating Coco Puffs?" Terra asked.

"It's the only cereal that keeps me awake for more than an hour," Lilly replied. After pouring milk and grabbing a spoon, she took a spoonful and stuck it in her mouth. "Ew...it's plain tasting!" she grabbed a sugar bowl and put a spoonful in the bowl. Then she tried it again. "Ew...still plain tasting!"

Terra stared at Lilly. How can Coco Puffs be plain tasting with sugar in it? she thought. it was too sweet even without the sugar! Terra watched as Lilly dumped the entire sugar bowl into the cereal and tried it again.

"Yummy..." Lilly said in delight.

"Ewww..." Terra whispered to herself. She finsihed her bagel just as her grandparents had. They all (except Lilly) stood up and threw away their trash. Terra then walked to the bathroom to brush her teeth.

Once that was done, Terra went back to her room and packed her backback. She went out the the living room to check what time it was. 6:30.

"Great! That means instead of having ten minuets to study like usual, I have twenty minuets!" Terra said out loud, not realizing that Lilly was already done getting ready and was in the living room too.

"And that means I have twenty minuets to annoy you by watching cartoons loudly!" Lilly said in an annoying voice, pretending to sound like Terra.

Terra shook her head and sat at the table studying for science, her worst subject. She once got a B in the fourth grade and was trying hard to keep her A+ averange.

While Lilly was watching Foster's Home For Imaginary Friends (no offence to people who like that show! i like too!) loudly to annoy Terra.

Terra knew what to do: she reached into her backpack and pulled out her iPod Shuffle. She turned it on and couldn't hear a sound. Lilly walked over and pressed pause on the iPod.

"What are you listening to, Motzart?" she asked.

Terra pushed pause again to play the music. "No, Green Day!" she answered loudly. As if to make sure she was saying the right thing. "I'm listening to it so I can't hear you or the TV!"

"Clever..." Lilly said, scratching her head.

"What'd you say????" Terra asked.

"Clever!" Lilly repeated.

"What?"

"Nevermind!" Lilly screamed and walked back to the couch.

"What?"

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After lots of arguing, the clock finally read, 6:50. The time the twins had to leave to walk for the bus stop (ten minuet walk) and ride the rest of the way to school.

Terra grabbed four dollars off the counter their parents gave them for lunch. Terra turned around and saw Lilly's hand outstretched.

"Can I have my money please?" she asked.

"No," Terra simply answered. She tried to walk to the door.

"Why not?" Lilly asked, following Terra to the door.

"Because Mom and Dad asked me to keep it until lunch becasue you spend your money on candy from the candy machine," Terra explained stopping until they were finshed with the conversation.

"Fine," Lily gave up the argument. "Let's go." she grabbed her jacket and umbrella and waited for Terra.

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At 6:58, they were at the bus stop and departed to talk to their friends.

Terra walked towards three girls. They notcied her and walked to her.

"Hey Mia, May, and Alex," Terra greeted.

"Hello," the girl named, Mia greeted.

"What's up?" asked the girl called, Alex.

"Not much, so what did you do over spring break?" Terra asked.

The girl named Mia had shoulder-lengh brown hair and green eyes. Her hair was in a ponytail and holding it up was a pink bow. And of course, she had the school uniform on. She was quiet and a vegeterian.

The girl named Alex had shoulder-lengh red hair with turquoise type of eye color. She had her in a ponytail too but it was held up with a rubber band. Though not easy to see. She was the sporty one in their group and often busy to do anything else. Except hanging out with her friends. Again, school uniform on.

The girl named May was always wide-eyed and curious like a new-born kitten (??? I do not know!). She had chin-lengh blonde hair and was kind of a dork. You never could guess what she was going to do next. Some people thought she was crazy, and she might have been! And you can probably guess what she was wearing. She was Alex's cousin.

"Well, May and I hung out at California all spring break," Alex explained. "We went to Disneyland one day and one time, we rode Space Mountain and then she requested that we should ride Matthorn. Even the line was super long. So we waited. After twenty minuets, it was our turn, but she suddenly decided to ride Space Moutain again! It was crazy!"

"Wow," Terra exclaimed.

"I went to Denver to see my Aunt," Mia explained. "While we were there, her cat had kittens, and I got to keep one! I named it Denver..."

Cool," Terra said.

"What did you do?" May asked.

"I hung out, practiced my sport stuff. And I read Guardians of Ga'Hoole again."

"Haven't you read that book three times already?" Alex asked.

"So?" Terra asked.

The bus came and opened the door as everyone scrambled in.

Lilly sat by her friends Matt and Dean.

Matt had spikey brown hair and turquoise eyes. He wore the uniform too. He had to wear a white shirt and blue shorts. He was goofy and carefree. He was always nice to people. He's Alex's twin brother and May's cousin.

Dean was in seventh grade. He had spikey brown hair too. But his had a little gold in it. He had greenish blue eyes. He wore the exact same thing Matt wore (obviously). He was more quiet and mature. He is Mia's older brother.

"You know that book assignment?" Lilly asked. Matt nodded. Dean was learning how to be an editor for books. His class would be editing the sixth graders' stories, and the eighth grade would have to take them home, read them, and make family members read them. "What are you writing about?"

Matt smiled the hugest smile Lilly and Dean had ever seen. He was dying to tell someone apparantly. "Well, my story's about this uhhhh..." he saw that no one was interested. "Fine! Be that way!" he said teasingly.

The bus parked in front of the school and everyone got off and entered the school.

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Chapter 2

Terra waved to her friends as she walked to her writing class. She sat at a table, got out her notebook full of notes of Lilly, and waited. Suddenly, the door opened and many kids rushed in. One that Terra hadn't seen before.

She had long blonde hair and green eyes. She had the uniform on and her black backpack was over one shoulder. She was looking around as if looking for a place to sit.

The teacher came in and escorted the girl to Terra's table.

"Terra, this is a new girl. She'll be sitting here, so introduce yourselves," she said as she walked to the front of the room.

The girl sat down. "My name is Paris Gellar (from a show I like). And your name is?" she asked.

"Terra," Terra answered. "Where'd you move from?"

"Connecticut."

"That's far. What school did you go to?"

"I went to a border school called, "Mein Schlechter Zwilling Und Ich."

Terra stared at Paris as she said the incredibly long name. "That is the longest name I have ever heard of. How can you remember it?"

Paris shrugged. "I actually don't know how I memorized it."

Terra blinked. "Well, anyway, right now we're using the entire year to write a book."

"Cool. What's your's about?" Paris asked.

"Mine's about my twin, Lilly," Terra answered. She showed Paris her notes.

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Lilly sat in her boring social studies class trying to look at the board but couldn't because of Matt's big head.

"Well, since she's just reading the chapter, I'll just read my book," Lilly whispered to herself.

She grabbed her backpack and was rummaging through it.

She grabbed something and took it out. It was crumpled piece of paper. "
There's
my math homework!" She threw it behind her. But it apparantly hit someone.

She turned around and saw that it hit a football player that gave Matt a black eye every Thursday for some reason.

FLASHBACK MOMENT!!!!!!

Lilly, Matt and Dean were sitting at a lunch table at the cafeteria eating spagetti with sugar (guess who's eating it! *wink*), pizza (Matt), and a taco (Dean).

Matt was making jokes about people at the school. He started making jokes about the football player (let's name him...JOEY!!!!!). Joey came up behind Matt and heard one joke about him.

"And what about Joey? He's like a Chihuahua. Excpet the ears are his shoulders and fists. MASSIVE compared to the rest of the body (I know, not funny. But bare with me)!" He started laughing at his own joke.

Lilly and Dean were silent for two reasons. One, the joke was not funny at all. And two, thewy realized that Matt was going to be practically murdered.

Matt stopped laughing at his joke. "Joey's behind me isn't he?" he asked.

END FLASHBACK MOMENT!!!!!!!

Oh, that's why... Lilly thought in her mind.

"Hey, Joey," Lilly laughed awkwardly. "Please don't kill me!!!!" Lilly begged. I didn't mean it!!!!!"

"It's ok, Lilly. As long as you do me two favors," Joey explained.

"I'm listening."

"One, tell Matt that I forgive him for calling me a Chihuahua, and I'll stop hitting him. Two, tell Matt to move his fat head. I can't see!!"

"You got it, Joey!" Lilly smiled happily and turned around. "Matt!"

Matt turned around. "Yeah?" he whispered.

"Joey forgives you!" she whispered back.

"For what, calling him a Chihuahua?"

Lilly nodded. "He says he'll stop hitting you!" she continued.

"Yes!" he acidentally screamed loudly. Everyone was staring at him. Lilly smacked her forehead embarrassingly.

"Yes, Matt?" their social studies teacher asked.

"Oh! Uh..." he tried to find an excuse.

"He's just really happy that we're back in school," Lilly answered.

"I am? I mean, I am!" Matt said.

"Ok, then." The teacher said and continued the lesson.

"Anything else?" Matt asked in a whisper.

"Nope," Lilly answered. "Just move your fat head."

"Oh! Sorry!" Matt scooted in his chair just enough for Joey and Lilly to see.

They finished the chapter just as the bell rang. "Eeryone's excused!" the teacher said.

Lilly and Matt walked to their next class.

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Terra and Paris walked through the hall to their reading class.

"It's weird how your schedule is the exact same as mine," Terra explained to Paris.

"Yeah," Paris answered. "Who's that over there?" she pointed to a girl waving at them.

Terra turned to the girl. "Oh, that's Mia. She has reading with us," she said as she waved back.

Mia walked over to them. "Hello," she waved at Paris.

"Paris, Mia. Mia, Paris," Terra introduced to two.

They walked in to their reading room and sat at a table.

Throughout their reading class, they learned about how to write persuasive essays ("I learned these in third grade in Mein Schlechter Zwilling Und Ich." Paris had said.).

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The three of them joined Alex and May and walked towards the cafeteria for lunch. They sat at a table towards the middle of the huge room with banners everywhere that read, "Fees," or, "Go Red Birds!"

Terra looked across the cafeteria to see Lilly eating spagetti with sugar. She quickly took out her notebook and wrote, "the angelic daughter watched as the beast ate her gagging meal that most people would call, "spagetti with sugar. Bleh," basically writing, "Lilly's eating spagetti with sugar! Gross!"

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The school ended and Terra, Alex, Mia, May, and Paris walked to the bus stop, waiting for the bus.

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Lilly and Terra walked into the living room. While Lilly sat on the couch watching Spongebob, Terra sat at the table and started her homework while eating a peach.

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UPTATES!!!!!!!!!!!

This is the new UPTATES!!!!!!!!!!! "Profile" for "My Evil Twin and Me." Here you can find out about what's going with the next chapter while you're waiting. I will post UPTATES!!!!!!!!!!! every Wednesday (It woulda been Monday but today's Wednesday sooooo...). Hope this helps!

Ok, first of all, I am about...1/4 done with the chapter. It's a lonnnnnnnnnggggggg chapter with devestating moments and twists! Maybe. Depending how you are. It SHOULD be done on Monday. If not, it's because I'm at my cousin's (aka Kingdom-Hearts-M) house.

Second of all, this has NOTHING to do with the chapter but, it was my birthday last Sunday!!!!!! Yay!!!!!! lol. Anyways......

So that's it for UPTATES!!!!!!!!!!! until I think of other news to put... eh heh? Comments or ideas for Fan fiction and UPTATES!!!!!!!!!!!
 

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bad news. Due to my dad's birthday yesterday and my cousin spending the night on Friday, the chappy won't be done until Wednesday at the most. I'm sorry for the confusion and I swear that it will never take this long again. Not used to this, y'know?
 

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Chapter 3 PT 1 (sorry it's so short. I felt bad for ignoring the forum)
(Note that Chapters 1 & 2 took place on a Monday & we’re skipping to Wednesday after school)

Terra had just finished her homework after an hour from getting home. She was throwing darts with Alex and Paris. Mia and May were outside too. Except Mia was reading while May was doing whatever it is that May does.

At the moment, Alex was winning their game.

Terra threw her third dart and surprisingly got a bulls-eye.

“Where is Lilly anyway?” Alex suddenly asked after a few minuets, which made Terra drop her dart.

“Sudden much?” she asked. “She went to go see some R-rated movie.”

“You didn’t go to stop her?” Mia asked.

“I could’ve. But even if I helped, she’d be in massive trouble. But she gets in more trouble this way,” Terra explained.

“But that’s mean! She’s your sister!”

“She doesn’t care! It’s the same procedure every time she gets in trouble. One, she pretends to cry and makes my parents feel bad. Two, they tell her they only punish because they care, and three, she gets in half as much trouble as she should’ve.”

All five of them turned to see Lilly walking inside and sitting on the couch.

“Let’s go watch,” Terra suggested as she went towards the backdoor. “We gotta pretend that we’re taking a break and getting some water.”

Terra and everyone stepped inside and walked towards the fridge. Terra poured five cans of Coke into five cups and handed them their cups. They then saw Terra’s parents walk in. “Three, two, one,” Terra whispered.

“Where have you been?” Terra’s mom asked.

Lilly slowly turned to her mom. “At the movies,” she answered.

“To see what?”

“The new “My Little Pony,” movie.”

“Really?”

Lilly nodded her head.

“Terra,” Terra’s mom turned to Terra.

“Yes, Mom?” Terra asked.

“What did Lilly go and see?”

Terra thought for a moment. “The new “My Little Pony,” movie.”

Everyone looked at her appalled.

“She really did go see that?” her mother asked.

Terra nodded.

“Well, we are going to dinner, then to the dart league,” Terra’s father explained. “I called your parents, Alex, May, Mia, Paris. They said it was ok for you to spend the night. They’re going to bring your stuff over in about ten minuets. You guys can order pizza and try not to stay up too late.” The two parents waved goodbye at exited the house.

Everyone listened hard for the car driving off. Silence…

The car was gone, and the kids relaxed. Lilly stood up. “Well I am going to my room.” She walked off.

“We’re going to order pizza!” Terra called after her.

“Call me when it comes.”
 
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