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~Bonus Chapter Twenty Two - Simple and Clean~

When Efrone sent Olette home, he whispered "I'll see you later... And that'll be our light someday... My true love is waiting me on Sueño Land. I'll forget you but you're always in my heart." After whispered, Efrone continued "I'll come back to Twilight Town! I promise!". "I know you will!" said Olette. And the land separated each other...

Olette looked at the light and Efrone fading away... And she's a little sad... And then a light fall into her hand everything back to normal... She walk to the camp and saw Efrone's drawing... Olette smile and her tears roll on her face... She keep the arts safely and she's ready to start a new day...

宇多田光 - Simple And Clean

When you walk away
You don't hear me say please
Oh baby, don't go
Simple and clean is the way
that you're making me feel tonight
It's hard to let it go

You're giving me too many things
Lately, you're all I need
You smiled at me and said,
Don't get me wrong I love you
But does that mean I have to meet your father?
When we are older you'll understand
What I meant when I said "No,
I don't think life is quite that simple"
When you walk away
You don't hear me say please
Oh baby, don't go
Simple and clean is the way
that you're making me feel tonight
It's hard to let it go
The daily things like this
and that and what is what
That keep us all busy
Are confusing me
That's when you came to me and said,
Wish I could prove I love you
But does that mean I have to walk on water?
When we are older you'll understand
It's enough when I say so
And maybe some things are that simple
When you walk away
You don't hear me say please
Oh baby, don't go
Simple and clean is the way
that you're making me feel tonight
It's hard to let it go
Hold me
Whatever lies beyond this morning
Is a little later on
Regardless of warnings
the future doesn't scare me at all
Nothing's like before
When you walk away
You don't hear me say please
Oh baby, don't go
Simple and clean is the way
that you're making me feel tonight
It's hard to let it go
Hold me
Whatever lies beyond this morning
Is a little later on
Regardless of warnings
the future doesn't scare me at all
Nothing's like before


95.0% are similar to Kingdom Hearts ending and 5.0 are similar to Kingdom Hearts Chain of Memories ending. Thanks for reading and there still have Olette's Bonus Chapters.

Kingdom Hearts - Ultimate Light is KHEndless local story and belong to © Vista Golden Company.
 
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A LOT of grammar needs to be improved. Plus, don't post so many chapters like this over and over and over. You're double posting, it's against rules. Actually, that's like triple post x5. Anyway, you should post longer and more in-depth chapters. Other than that.... oh, the ending could have gone better. And the story in it's entirety could have gone on longer than twenty one chapters.

Told you I already mentioned opening. "I'm so sorry about the grammar I hope you'll forgive." And next time I won't post like that. I post like that is because I want story faster end. Because I'm busy lately... And I don think the ending will be better. It's sucks than the opening XD!
 
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