Hey, it's me with my first Kingdom Hearts fan fiction! Comment, plz! :3 (chapters will increase in length as the story progresses, don't worry lol)
Prologue:
In a world, far, far away, a legendary craftsman created three Keyblades known as the ''Keys of Trinity''. Many said these Keyblades were superior, many tried to witness the awesome power of the three Keyblades, but the Keyblades were seperated, and therefore their power was limited. One day, a mysterious figure managed to wield all three of the Keyblades. The blades were meant for stopping evil. However, he grew into a terrible tiran, who created the ''Heartless''. Even Raph Shur, wielder of the powerful Keyblade ''Ultima'', wasn't able to stop him. The world continued to live in darkness. Once he passed away, the Keyblades vanished, and were never to be found again, however, a boy named Danny Stuivenberg, who wielded the ''Kingdom Key'' Keyblade, stepped up and went to stop the Heartless. But he isn't going alone. He brought Grouch Wicked with him, a close childhood friend. Could they be able to stop the evil who's lurking in the world? ...
Chapter 01: Two warriors
It was a quiet night. A soft midnight breeze blew through the deserts. A Neoshadow Heartless crossed the desert at high speed. Another Neoshadow was being launched towards it. They both vanished.
''Just try me!'' a guy said.
He swung the Ultima Keyblade, and the Heartless rushed towards him. The guy leaped towards the large group of Heartless. They where slain, one by another.
''Who's next?'' he challenged.
''Raph.'' A man called while walking off a hill.
Raph turned around, and he saw the man grinning, and walking towards him. He went in a battle stance in case the man attacked him as well. The man approached Raph, and stopped at 10 feet distance. He had long, blond hair and a grin on his thin face. On his shoulders rest a thorn cape, which reached to his heels.
''Who are you!'' Raph said.
The grin on the man's face began to grow bigger.
''... I'm Nexus, your equal... soon to become even more powerful then you...''
''Soon? Then what are you!'' Raph yelled.
''Is this your way of trying to ask questions? Proving to be tough? I'm more amused than startled...'' Nexus answered.
Raph lowered Ultima, and asked quietly what he was. Nexus explained that he was the controller of the Heartless that attacked Raph, and he demanded to attack him. Nexus then explained that he wanted to defeat Raph to grow even stronger. Raph shook, and got into his battle stance again, as Nexus' sharp, iron gloves lighten up. Nexus summoned the powerful Keyblade Fenrir, and closed in at Raph at high speed.
Raph skilfully deflected the crushing blow from the mighty Fenrir, and pushes Nexus off of him. He then approached Nexus in order to land a few hits, but Nexus blocked them with ease, and leaped high up in the air.
''I expected more of a challenge from the wielder of the Ultima Keyblade...'' Nexus laughed, as he looked up to the sky.
Raph panted as he got on his knees to recover.
''Humph. Tired already? Give me a break...'' Nexus said.
Raph closed his eyes. He let out a roar, as he launched himself towards Nexus. Nexus let himself being surprised and took in a huge hit. Raph sliced through Nexus, as he fell down to the ground. He slowly got up, and raised his hand. A great number of Neoshadows appeared out of the sky. Once they landed, they slowly approached Raph. He gasped, and bounced off everyone that dared to come close. Nexus got up, and he laughed in himself. He then disappeared.
''What the hell?'' Raph said in himself.
Raph was surrounded by hundreds Neoshadows. On a hill close to Raph's location, a guy holding the ''Guardian Soul'' Keyblade saw noticed and witnessed the brawl taking place in the middle of the desert. He saw Raph being pinned down, and needed help. The figure got up, and leaped in the air. Raph was exhausted, and didn't saw an attack coming from behind. The Neoshadow was being slain before he could even land a single scratch.
''Who the hell are you?'' Raph asked with clenched teeth.
''Rico,'' he answered. ''Rico Persie...''
''Glad you're here, but I don't need your help. I got it all under control!'' Raph said, when an aura lit up Ultima.
Raph lifted Ultima, and a great shockwave occurred, making all the Heartless vanish. It was quiet all of the sudden. Raph was exhausted, and had a hard time standing. Rico helped him recover, but Raph claimed he didn't need any help.
''It's okay, I'm feeling fine already. I have to meet someone again...'' He said, and ran away at high speed.
Rico then raised his shoulder, and also ran away, in opposite direction. When running, Raph thought:
''Where is he? I have to meet him again... I have to stop him!''
Prologue:
In a world, far, far away, a legendary craftsman created three Keyblades known as the ''Keys of Trinity''. Many said these Keyblades were superior, many tried to witness the awesome power of the three Keyblades, but the Keyblades were seperated, and therefore their power was limited. One day, a mysterious figure managed to wield all three of the Keyblades. The blades were meant for stopping evil. However, he grew into a terrible tiran, who created the ''Heartless''. Even Raph Shur, wielder of the powerful Keyblade ''Ultima'', wasn't able to stop him. The world continued to live in darkness. Once he passed away, the Keyblades vanished, and were never to be found again, however, a boy named Danny Stuivenberg, who wielded the ''Kingdom Key'' Keyblade, stepped up and went to stop the Heartless. But he isn't going alone. He brought Grouch Wicked with him, a close childhood friend. Could they be able to stop the evil who's lurking in the world? ...
Chapter 01: Two warriors
It was a quiet night. A soft midnight breeze blew through the deserts. A Neoshadow Heartless crossed the desert at high speed. Another Neoshadow was being launched towards it. They both vanished.
''Just try me!'' a guy said.
He swung the Ultima Keyblade, and the Heartless rushed towards him. The guy leaped towards the large group of Heartless. They where slain, one by another.
''Who's next?'' he challenged.
''Raph.'' A man called while walking off a hill.
Raph turned around, and he saw the man grinning, and walking towards him. He went in a battle stance in case the man attacked him as well. The man approached Raph, and stopped at 10 feet distance. He had long, blond hair and a grin on his thin face. On his shoulders rest a thorn cape, which reached to his heels.
''Who are you!'' Raph said.
The grin on the man's face began to grow bigger.
''... I'm Nexus, your equal... soon to become even more powerful then you...''
''Soon? Then what are you!'' Raph yelled.
''Is this your way of trying to ask questions? Proving to be tough? I'm more amused than startled...'' Nexus answered.
Raph lowered Ultima, and asked quietly what he was. Nexus explained that he was the controller of the Heartless that attacked Raph, and he demanded to attack him. Nexus then explained that he wanted to defeat Raph to grow even stronger. Raph shook, and got into his battle stance again, as Nexus' sharp, iron gloves lighten up. Nexus summoned the powerful Keyblade Fenrir, and closed in at Raph at high speed.
Raph skilfully deflected the crushing blow from the mighty Fenrir, and pushes Nexus off of him. He then approached Nexus in order to land a few hits, but Nexus blocked them with ease, and leaped high up in the air.
''I expected more of a challenge from the wielder of the Ultima Keyblade...'' Nexus laughed, as he looked up to the sky.
Raph panted as he got on his knees to recover.
''Humph. Tired already? Give me a break...'' Nexus said.
Raph closed his eyes. He let out a roar, as he launched himself towards Nexus. Nexus let himself being surprised and took in a huge hit. Raph sliced through Nexus, as he fell down to the ground. He slowly got up, and raised his hand. A great number of Neoshadows appeared out of the sky. Once they landed, they slowly approached Raph. He gasped, and bounced off everyone that dared to come close. Nexus got up, and he laughed in himself. He then disappeared.
''What the hell?'' Raph said in himself.
Raph was surrounded by hundreds Neoshadows. On a hill close to Raph's location, a guy holding the ''Guardian Soul'' Keyblade saw noticed and witnessed the brawl taking place in the middle of the desert. He saw Raph being pinned down, and needed help. The figure got up, and leaped in the air. Raph was exhausted, and didn't saw an attack coming from behind. The Neoshadow was being slain before he could even land a single scratch.
''Who the hell are you?'' Raph asked with clenched teeth.
''Rico,'' he answered. ''Rico Persie...''
''Glad you're here, but I don't need your help. I got it all under control!'' Raph said, when an aura lit up Ultima.
Raph lifted Ultima, and a great shockwave occurred, making all the Heartless vanish. It was quiet all of the sudden. Raph was exhausted, and had a hard time standing. Rico helped him recover, but Raph claimed he didn't need any help.
''It's okay, I'm feeling fine already. I have to meet someone again...'' He said, and ran away at high speed.
Rico then raised his shoulder, and also ran away, in opposite direction. When running, Raph thought:
''Where is he? I have to meet him again... I have to stop him!''