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(Hay everyone I made changes to my story to better the story line so I hope you like it and I'm up for any tips and suggestions about my first Fan Fic, just please be respectful)
“430 meters to ground level” the ships computer said.
“We’re losing altitude fast!” cried Sora. Grabbing the guiding handle he thrust it back with all his might yet do the speed of there decent there was high resistance on the guiding handle. “AHHH! We’re gonna crash!” yelled Donald, covering his eye’s.
“Not if I can help it, Goofy help me with the handle!!?” yelled Sora. As Goofy and Sora pulled back on the handle, the ship began to loose altitude slowly but unless one of them thought of perfect place to land they would crash no time with explosive results. We can’t just land anywhere we need run way, Think THINK!! Sora thought to him self, They’d come this far, through so many hardships for it to end like this. With adrenalin kicking in Sora scanned for place to land.
“280 meters till ground level”computer said.
“Sora! how about that there bridge!” said goofy pointing visual screen. From a distance run way of land separating both left and right traffic was long enough but the question in Sora’s mind was if the bridge could take the impact without breaking .
“156 meters to ground point” said the computer.
“Got no choice, let’s go for it” said Sora.
“101 meters to ground point” said the computer. Sora grinded his teeth as trickle sweat ran down the side of his face, he breathed heavily. This was a crucial point, it was either ship would hold on impact or become a ball of fire, devouring all of them in an explosion. Easy... easy does it now, come on COME ON!!! Sora said to himself in the hopes they would pull through this. “46 meters to ground point” said the computer.
Kurosaki Ichigo lay back on his bed, bored while stairing at the ceiling. Rukia Kuchiki was in the room with him but she buissed herself with another of Don Kanonji mysterious spiritualist.
“SPIRITS ARE ALWAYS WITH YOOUUUUU!!!!!!!!!! Bwahahahaha!” said Rukia chanting Don Kannji famous punch line.
“Why do you waste your time with that kiddy crap, the guys a fake” said Ichigo
“Hay I like to live a little, its not that often you get do that at Soul Society, besides you need to lighten up Ichigo, have some fun for once in your life” said Rukia
“I don’t think chanting stupid punch lines made by lame fake actors is gonna put kick in my life”.
“No wonder nun of the girls at school are into you, your such an *** sometimes” replied Rukia, rolling her eyes at Ichigo
“HUMPF! Like I’m even into any of them” said Ichigo.
“We interrupt your following program to bring you this urgent message. A large unknown object has just hit the Tokyo Rainbow Bridge. Authorities aren’t sure what the object is nor if there have been any deaths in the matter, at this point the bridge has been closed off until further notice. We advice all viewers to stay calm and stay tuned as this situation progresses.”
Ichigo and Rukia looked at each other for a moment. Rukia got up quickly and dashed dashed to the closet, she rummaged through her bag to find her cell phone. She found it and quickly punched in the numbers.
“You think it might be Hollow?” asked Ichigo
“I don’t know I’m on it right now......come on......come on Urahara pick up” replied Rukia. .
At the Urahara Shoten(Shop) a phone had rang continuously in shops break room. Jinta Hanakari sat on the single sofa while flicking through channels, he’d hated taking customer calls and always left it to Ururu..
“Hay Ururu get that will you, I can’t stand that dame ringing UHHH!!! it’s driving my crazy”
Ururu Tsumugiya lay on couch fast asleep unaware that Jinta was talking to her .
“Ururu WAKE UP!!.... URURU!!!!” yelled Jinta
“I’VE GOT IT!” yelled Urahara
“Hello Urahara Shoten how may I help you? ”
“Hello”
“Aaaahhh Rukia how are you?”
“I’m good thank you... are you watching the new on television?”
“Not at the moment” Urahara snapped his fingers to Jinta to pass him the remote. “Is there something wrong Rukia?”
“Toon in on channel 3" Urahrah watched as the reporter stood in front of Rainbow Bridge which looked to have caught fire.
“Reports released by the authorities have said that the objects is fly craft of some sort which must have lost control in the air and crashed. Still no word if they’ve founded any survivors but S. W. A. T is standing by if the situation does get any dangerous...”
“Hhhmmm” said Urahara
“You think it might be Hollow?” said Rukia
“Hmm never heard ofa Hollow flying a craft of any sort before. I doubt it. But I guess we could check on it.”
“Should me and Ichigo go on ahead?”
“No no it’s quite fine, stay where you are for the time being. We can manage, but should anything happen I’ll contact you on the double”
“Ok.....Urahara”
“Yes?”
“Becareful”
“No need to worry, this is turning out to be quite the adventure. You take care now Rukia”
“Ok bye”
“Bye bye” said Urahara. Clapping his hands twice Tessi Tsukabishi came instantly.
“YES URAHARA SIR!” said Tessai
“We’re doing a little exploring tonight at the Rainbow Bridge. I suggest packing the usual just incase” said Urahara
“Should I wake Ururu”
“No need she can watch the shop till we get back”
“What about Jinta?”
“He’ll be tagging along....JINTA LETS GO WE HAVE LOTS TO DO WITH SO LITTLE TIME!!!”
“Aw man just when I was gonna call it a night old man sheesh” said Jinta switching off the Television..
“430 meters to ground level” the ships computer said.
“We’re losing altitude fast!” cried Sora. Grabbing the guiding handle he thrust it back with all his might yet do the speed of there decent there was high resistance on the guiding handle. “AHHH! We’re gonna crash!” yelled Donald, covering his eye’s.
“Not if I can help it, Goofy help me with the handle!!?” yelled Sora. As Goofy and Sora pulled back on the handle, the ship began to loose altitude slowly but unless one of them thought of perfect place to land they would crash no time with explosive results. We can’t just land anywhere we need run way, Think THINK!! Sora thought to him self, They’d come this far, through so many hardships for it to end like this. With adrenalin kicking in Sora scanned for place to land.
“280 meters till ground level”computer said.
“Sora! how about that there bridge!” said goofy pointing visual screen. From a distance run way of land separating both left and right traffic was long enough but the question in Sora’s mind was if the bridge could take the impact without breaking .
“156 meters to ground point” said the computer.
“Got no choice, let’s go for it” said Sora.
“101 meters to ground point” said the computer. Sora grinded his teeth as trickle sweat ran down the side of his face, he breathed heavily. This was a crucial point, it was either ship would hold on impact or become a ball of fire, devouring all of them in an explosion. Easy... easy does it now, come on COME ON!!! Sora said to himself in the hopes they would pull through this. “46 meters to ground point” said the computer.
Kurosaki Ichigo lay back on his bed, bored while stairing at the ceiling. Rukia Kuchiki was in the room with him but she buissed herself with another of Don Kanonji mysterious spiritualist.
“SPIRITS ARE ALWAYS WITH YOOUUUUU!!!!!!!!!! Bwahahahaha!” said Rukia chanting Don Kannji famous punch line.
“Why do you waste your time with that kiddy crap, the guys a fake” said Ichigo
“Hay I like to live a little, its not that often you get do that at Soul Society, besides you need to lighten up Ichigo, have some fun for once in your life” said Rukia
“I don’t think chanting stupid punch lines made by lame fake actors is gonna put kick in my life”.
“No wonder nun of the girls at school are into you, your such an *** sometimes” replied Rukia, rolling her eyes at Ichigo
“HUMPF! Like I’m even into any of them” said Ichigo.
“We interrupt your following program to bring you this urgent message. A large unknown object has just hit the Tokyo Rainbow Bridge. Authorities aren’t sure what the object is nor if there have been any deaths in the matter, at this point the bridge has been closed off until further notice. We advice all viewers to stay calm and stay tuned as this situation progresses.”
Ichigo and Rukia looked at each other for a moment. Rukia got up quickly and dashed dashed to the closet, she rummaged through her bag to find her cell phone. She found it and quickly punched in the numbers.
“You think it might be Hollow?” asked Ichigo
“I don’t know I’m on it right now......come on......come on Urahara pick up” replied Rukia. .
At the Urahara Shoten(Shop) a phone had rang continuously in shops break room. Jinta Hanakari sat on the single sofa while flicking through channels, he’d hated taking customer calls and always left it to Ururu..
“Hay Ururu get that will you, I can’t stand that dame ringing UHHH!!! it’s driving my crazy”
Ururu Tsumugiya lay on couch fast asleep unaware that Jinta was talking to her .
“Ururu WAKE UP!!.... URURU!!!!” yelled Jinta
“I’VE GOT IT!” yelled Urahara
“Hello Urahara Shoten how may I help you? ”
“Hello”
“Aaaahhh Rukia how are you?”
“I’m good thank you... are you watching the new on television?”
“Not at the moment” Urahara snapped his fingers to Jinta to pass him the remote. “Is there something wrong Rukia?”
“Toon in on channel 3" Urahrah watched as the reporter stood in front of Rainbow Bridge which looked to have caught fire.
“Reports released by the authorities have said that the objects is fly craft of some sort which must have lost control in the air and crashed. Still no word if they’ve founded any survivors but S. W. A. T is standing by if the situation does get any dangerous...”
“Hhhmmm” said Urahara
“You think it might be Hollow?” said Rukia
“Hmm never heard ofa Hollow flying a craft of any sort before. I doubt it. But I guess we could check on it.”
“Should me and Ichigo go on ahead?”
“No no it’s quite fine, stay where you are for the time being. We can manage, but should anything happen I’ll contact you on the double”
“Ok.....Urahara”
“Yes?”
“Becareful”
“No need to worry, this is turning out to be quite the adventure. You take care now Rukia”
“Ok bye”
“Bye bye” said Urahara. Clapping his hands twice Tessi Tsukabishi came instantly.
“YES URAHARA SIR!” said Tessai
“We’re doing a little exploring tonight at the Rainbow Bridge. I suggest packing the usual just incase” said Urahara
“Should I wake Ururu”
“No need she can watch the shop till we get back”
“What about Jinta?”
“He’ll be tagging along....JINTA LETS GO WE HAVE LOTS TO DO WITH SO LITTLE TIME!!!”
“Aw man just when I was gonna call it a night old man sheesh” said Jinta switching off the Television..