Kh pome

[sora'snobody]

Kh poem

I wrote this poem last night tell me wut u think.

Living on this tiny island is not enough for me.
Going out and seeing worlds is were I want to be.
Me and my friends shall build a raft and set it out to sea.
Waiting here for something big a light, a door, a key.
Then once apon a stormy night the place was here the time was right.
I fell into a darkness, in which there was no light.
I have been chosen by the blade I wield to find my friends and fight.
It happened quick, it happened fast.
Landing in a glowing town, a new world I've found at last.

 

[Dawning Twilight]

hmm ok it's ok some stuff need to be edited and words rearranged 8.9/10

 

[Riku123698745]

it could've been in the kh section of the forums, though.

 

[sora'snobody]

I tought it would get more publicity here though

 

[Dawning Twilight]

no it won't....

 

[sora'snobody]

well i'm hopeing it dose! :0

 

[ultima_keyblade]

its pretty good. better than what i can do at % 8/10

 

[RTP49]

1. You spelled "poem" wrong
2. I like it

 

[Josiah]

wow, i like!...are you gonna make it sorta like chapters???...i wanna read more like meeting donald and goofy, and ending all the way up to Hollow Bastion!

 

[sora'snobody]

I thought about doing that so be on the look out for kh poem 2

 

[Cloud_Unchained]

wow, i like!...are you gonna make it sorta like chapters???...i wanna read more like meeting donald and goofy, and ending all the way up to Hollow Bastion!

Please. Don't encourage him.

 

[sora'snobody]

Don't mind my poems. Riku's oficial fan boy. lol lol lol
ps. nice signature *snickers*