Kairi work in progress

[S'SH of LIGHT]

Well it's been a while since Iv been here, anyways just a quick sketch of kairi be sure to check my sketch book to see the progression.
http://navir.deviantart.com/art/Kairi-129617730#
Send comment's, also i do know its not the best out their.

 

[Lancelot]

to tell you the truth... she's looking a bit too manly in this. The forearm seems to be too wide in comparison to the rest, and the protrusion and sharpness of her facial features don't really suit. Otherwise though, you've done a fairly nice job of it

 

[Orion]

A bit on the masculine side. Change her jawline, give her body more figure, and thinner legs. Oh and also the right knee isn't supposed to bend that way. The kneecaps also look wierd, have them stick out less and be smoother, and maybe a little bit larger.

 

[Unabomber]

her body is disproportioned.