K so this is my new fanfic.. in the beginning it's showing every thing that happened after the promise and the next chapter will be how all this happened so hope this doesn't confuse you..I was gonna write prelude instead of chapter one but then again it isn't a prelude...since it's what happened after..not before
Chapter 1: Escape
She ran…she ran like she had never run before…for you see, she was being followed. She needed to get away. She needed to hide. She ran down the extremely long corridors, through all the opened doors and through all the large rooms until she was trapped at a crossroads.
“Oh no, which way should I go… he’s catching up to me I need to choose quickly,” she whispered quietly to herself, as she started to run down the left corridor.
As she reached the end she saw she had gone the wrong way, the corridor ended with a dead end… well not exactly, it actually ended with a locked door, but right now she didn’t care. She could hear his voice now, “Kairi, where are you….. Come out; come out where ever you are!”
She felt disgusted. His voice was so evil; she knew the one thing she had to do. She had to run the other way.
“I only hope I have enough time,” Kairi said silently as she was about to run the other way.
Then, out of the corner of her eye she saw something dash behind her but when she turned around nothing was there, so she just started to run.
When she finally made it to the crossroads, she could see him, and he could see her.
“Oh Kairi, there you are my love, I was worried!” He said malevolently.
“Back the HELL away from me!” She screamed at him, feeling sick.
As quickly as she could she dashed down the right hallway hoping to make it to the door, but when she finally got to the door she realized that she had made a grave mistake because the was locked. She banged, kicked, knocked and tried to open the door but nothing was working. She could now hear His foot steps, she felt like she could feel his breath on the back of her neck but it was just her imagination.
Then out of the corner of her she saw that dash again, and this time when she turned she did see something, it was a boy about her age, a bit taller then her, he had brown hair, that reminded her of Sora, but it couldn’t have been him, that would have been impossible.
“Kairi, quickly this way,” the boy whispered to her.
“Wait, how do you know my name?” she asked, quickly realizing that she had never seen him before.
“There is no time for questions, I’ll explain everything later, and unless you want to get caught I suggest you follow me,” he said quite demandingly.
“Fine,” Kairi whispered, remembering who was following her.
She followed him through the door, that he had just unlocked and she followed him through the next door and down the last corridor until, without warning he stopped making Kairi bump into him.
“Hey, what was that for!” Kairi yelled at him.
“Shhhh,” he whispered as he put his finger to her mouth.
She went quiet almost instantly.
He whispered to her, “Someone is following us.”
“How can you tell?” she whispered back.
“Just listen…”He said.
Kairi listened, She listened for quite a long time, after a while she finally heard something, it was faint but she heard it.
“How is it? I hope it isn’t him,” she said pointing to the picture of the man who had been following her.
“You mean, Blaze, right?” he asked.
“Oh, so that is the name of the creep who kidnapped me.” Kairi said a bit innerved.
“Anyway,” he started, a bit scared of Kairi who had a very mad expression on her face, “we better start going before who ever is following us catches up.”
They started leaving. Then after a long time of walking, they finally reached the place he was taking her.
“Come on, down here,” He whispered.
“Wait, is that the sewer…there is no way I’m going down there!” Kairi said.
“Aww, is little Kairi afraid of the big bad sewer?” he asked in a little kiddy voice.
“No, I…umm…just don’t want to …umm...wreck my shoes… yeah that’s it!” Kairi said.
“Come on, you don’t want to get caught….” He began and before he could finish Kairi had already began to climb down the ladder.
When they reached the ground the boy began to explain.
“My name is sorax.” He said, “And I’ve been helping you out ever since the beginning.”
“Hmmm,your name it sounds familiar, well anyway ohh yeah, that’s right the beginning, this all started with a promise,” Kairi began, “Who could have ever thought all this could have happened with just one little promise…”
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So how was it comment plz.....give me some tips on making it better if you want
Chapter 1: Escape
She ran…she ran like she had never run before…for you see, she was being followed. She needed to get away. She needed to hide. She ran down the extremely long corridors, through all the opened doors and through all the large rooms until she was trapped at a crossroads.
“Oh no, which way should I go… he’s catching up to me I need to choose quickly,” she whispered quietly to herself, as she started to run down the left corridor.
As she reached the end she saw she had gone the wrong way, the corridor ended with a dead end… well not exactly, it actually ended with a locked door, but right now she didn’t care. She could hear his voice now, “Kairi, where are you….. Come out; come out where ever you are!”
She felt disgusted. His voice was so evil; she knew the one thing she had to do. She had to run the other way.
“I only hope I have enough time,” Kairi said silently as she was about to run the other way.
Then, out of the corner of her eye she saw something dash behind her but when she turned around nothing was there, so she just started to run.
When she finally made it to the crossroads, she could see him, and he could see her.
“Oh Kairi, there you are my love, I was worried!” He said malevolently.
“Back the HELL away from me!” She screamed at him, feeling sick.
As quickly as she could she dashed down the right hallway hoping to make it to the door, but when she finally got to the door she realized that she had made a grave mistake because the was locked. She banged, kicked, knocked and tried to open the door but nothing was working. She could now hear His foot steps, she felt like she could feel his breath on the back of her neck but it was just her imagination.
Then out of the corner of her she saw that dash again, and this time when she turned she did see something, it was a boy about her age, a bit taller then her, he had brown hair, that reminded her of Sora, but it couldn’t have been him, that would have been impossible.
“Kairi, quickly this way,” the boy whispered to her.
“Wait, how do you know my name?” she asked, quickly realizing that she had never seen him before.
“There is no time for questions, I’ll explain everything later, and unless you want to get caught I suggest you follow me,” he said quite demandingly.
“Fine,” Kairi whispered, remembering who was following her.
She followed him through the door, that he had just unlocked and she followed him through the next door and down the last corridor until, without warning he stopped making Kairi bump into him.
“Hey, what was that for!” Kairi yelled at him.
“Shhhh,” he whispered as he put his finger to her mouth.
She went quiet almost instantly.
He whispered to her, “Someone is following us.”
“How can you tell?” she whispered back.
“Just listen…”He said.
Kairi listened, She listened for quite a long time, after a while she finally heard something, it was faint but she heard it.
“How is it? I hope it isn’t him,” she said pointing to the picture of the man who had been following her.
“You mean, Blaze, right?” he asked.
“Oh, so that is the name of the creep who kidnapped me.” Kairi said a bit innerved.
“Anyway,” he started, a bit scared of Kairi who had a very mad expression on her face, “we better start going before who ever is following us catches up.”
They started leaving. Then after a long time of walking, they finally reached the place he was taking her.
“Come on, down here,” He whispered.
“Wait, is that the sewer…there is no way I’m going down there!” Kairi said.
“Aww, is little Kairi afraid of the big bad sewer?” he asked in a little kiddy voice.
“No, I…umm…just don’t want to …umm...wreck my shoes… yeah that’s it!” Kairi said.
“Come on, you don’t want to get caught….” He began and before he could finish Kairi had already began to climb down the ladder.
When they reached the ground the boy began to explain.
“My name is sorax.” He said, “And I’ve been helping you out ever since the beginning.”
“Hmmm,your name it sounds familiar, well anyway ohh yeah, that’s right the beginning, this all started with a promise,” Kairi began, “Who could have ever thought all this could have happened with just one little promise…”
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So how was it comment plz.....give me some tips on making it better if you want
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