Fanfiction ► I am

[iN{THInKR}Side]

"I am" soliloquy

I am mysterious with unrevealed clouded secrets
I wonder what will become of me
I hear voices uncover ahead of me
I see disgorged streets on every side
I want to feel careless and be in charge
I am mysterious with unrevealed secrets

I pretend to tone-down discover my true self
I feel heavy-hearted with provoked thoughts
I touch the one i'm passionately attached to
I worry about the selection I create
I cry about the thoughts of human races
I am mysterious with unrevealed clouded secrets

I understand how my feelings corner to an end
I sat how I feel about different discussions
I dream that I can do anything I desire for
I hope I discover what I feel the necessity for
I try to reinforce myself all that I can
I am mysterious with unrevealed clouded secrets​

PLease post what you think about it and rate it please

 

[hatemademe]

fairly righteous

 

[Dark Sephiroth]

wow thats really deep n mysterious is it exspressing ur feelings or did u just write tht

 

[iN{THInKR}Side]

well i was feeling really depressed when i wrote it so yea it was my feelings,but then again i am a good writer hehe

 

[Dark Sephiroth]

it sounds like me a little

 

[iN{THInKR}Side]

oh well i never thought you felt like tht before

 

[tidusora]

that is pretty good it took a while to read but I give it a 10/10

 

[iN{THInKR}Side]

well thnxs for being nice hehe.. no serious it took a while to write it i fekt different emotions but didnt know wht words to put themin i guess i found the right ones at the end

 

[Madam Doofie]

That's really good!!! Well done!!!!

 

[KingGabriel_VXI]

Yayyyyyyyyyyy ur better than i am!!!Good job!!!Publish it and get some cash!Yayyyyyyy!

 

[iN{THInKR}Side]

hehe very funny
no its just something i created

and its probably the only one that i will create im not real good but its just one of my creations that just came to me.. so it will probably take a while to right another one if i DO get to write another one

 

[Who Am I?]

It is great, very dark 'n mysterious. Perfect! 10/10 =) Make some more! =)

 

[iN{THInKR}Side]

well i don't think i'll be making more.. don't know why its just one time thing i think
n thnxs

 

[shrekdog]

Its really good, it really expresses your feelings, i reckon, I give it a 10/10

 

[iN{THInKR}Side]

Thnxs.. I really needed that for a first timer writing a poem..but its not my first time writing..
As when i was bout let say 5 years ago.. I wrote stories ,but now its a weak spot for me..I dont know what happened later on I just got bad at writing