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[KH_Fan_4_eva-2]

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Ive got the Idea Andi Kinda doesnt like me by the way she's been acting round me...

 

[Lectori Salutem]

Or she thinks the symbol Yunie used is just something you ought to know.
=/= means 'is not' btw.

And I'm really looking froward to the next chapter!

 

[princess namine]

I like you Lilli !!


I just mean to reread what she wrote to see if it will make sense that time.

 

[Rynxeh]

awesome chapter i kno im late but... u kno
anywhooo nice!

 

[Dealer_Camel]

Just got done reading this for the first time... awesome so far!

 

[KH_Fan_4_eva-2]

Andi, I looked at it the first time, Didnt get it.

How was I meant to understand it the second time if I had no clue what It meant the first time?

 

[Eternal Snow]

I know I'm closing this thread soon anyways guys, but please dont spam.

I'd rather close it then have a mod close it. Ok?

Thanks <33

 

[princess namine]

Okay Sammii, looking forward to new chappie.


Edit: I would like to add that only 215 more posts til I'm premmie.

 

[Eternal Snow]

Ok, Sorry guys you may have to wait awhile more. Because A - I'm busy and B - JJ has officially bummed me out about my writing. Wanna know how?

What I wrote -

“SHOWA!” Donald’s voice echoed through the small hallways of the Gummi Ship.

What he wrote -

"SHOWA!" Donald's quakced-up voice echoed loudly throughout the small expanse of hallways of the Gummi Ship.

So Yeah, after that I sent him a different paragraph (from Chapter 10) to see what he would do and -

Sora and Kairi were in Kairi’s pale pink room. Kairi was sitting on her bed with hot pink covers and dark pink pillows everywhere, and Sora was sitting on her dark pink almost red carpeting. You definitely couldn’t mistake Kairi’s room for a guy's room. The only part that wasn’t pink was the furniture. All of that was white. Mainly because you can’t fine regular size pink furniture. Kairi probably wasn’t that much of a pink freak anyways. Though she did have her moments.

His Version -

Sora and Kairi were in Kairi's spacious, pale-pink room. Kairi was sitting on her bed, her legs crossed, with FLUFFY hot pink covers and dark pink pillows stuffed with goosefeathers everywhere. Sora, sitting Indian-style, was on her dark pink almost crimson-red carpeting. Noone could most definitely mistake Kairi's room for a guy's room, but the only part that wasn't hot or dark pink was the furniture, every piece white, mainly because Kairi's parents couldn't find pink furniture small enough to fit in her room. Kairi probably wasn't much of a pink freak anyways, though she did have her moments despite her non-obession.

He makes me look bad, So I'm gonna go crawl in a hole for awhile. BBS ~<33

 

[Professor Ven]

I'm REALLY SORRY SAMMIZ!!

You told me to!! >_<'

(I think you dids..)

I'M REALLY REALLY SORRYS!!!!

 

[princess namine]

Wow JJ, you know how to make a person feel bad XD jk



waiting for the chapter the snail boy delayed (see I don't spam)

 

[Gullwing Yunie]

The grammar whore within me is urging me to point out that he spelt "quacked" wrong.

No, I didn't say that. It was my grammar whore, I swear! thoughthatwasmeanttomakeyoufeelbettermaybe

So don't feel bad! He ain't perfect, according to my grammar whore!

 

[Eternal Snow]

XD

Yeah, but then JJ tried to make me think I was the better writer.

Pfft, yeah right! *walks away*

 

[Abe]

If Jubby is so really smart, why dont he start his own fic?

 

[princess namine]

He did but the writing whore was getting some of his ideas off of books he read.


Well, that's what they say...


JJ's a writing whoreXD

 

[KH_Fan_4_eva-2]

Sammii, I feel for you.

I mean, Its Horrible knowing that a Dumbass Snail Band Boy like him is Better at writing than us....THE SUGAR YAY PEOPLE!

 

[princess namine]

He's a writing whore of a snail boy XD jk

 

[KH_Fan_4_eva-2]

No Need to Joke Andi, Its True XD

 

[Eternal Snow]

Fan Fic on the 4th page, not good. LoL

So I am bumping it XP

Bump.​

 

[KH_Fan_4_eva-2]

Eh, whatcha talking about Sammii?