Hello there. I had written this way back when, and found it when looking at an old forum that died. I edited most of it, and thought, why not put it up. I'm always open to all opinions and comments, as they help me to write better, so please, I'd like plenty of them. ^_^ I'll post the first chapter when I've edited it.
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Prologue
3478, City of Norgin
It was early in the evening that day. The sun was hanging in the sky, as Mr. Lidre went outside to get his paper that he’d forgotten to get that morning. The elderly man in his business coat and pants looked at the sun as it set to the north in all of its pride in the midsummer’s eve.
“What a beautiful evening,” he said as he gathered the paper. He stared for only a little while longer on his green lawn in front of his little yellow home. He looked to his neighborer on either side of his house, smirking at how much they looked like his own home. As he looked forward again, he felt a feeling of happiness overwhelm him. He'd just gotten a promotion, and had been moved to the edge of the city, right next to the forest. He couldn't wait to see what kind of animals he'd find nibbling on his lawn in the mornings. He soon retired to his house once more.
He sat down in his favorite chair and turned on the television. “It doesn’t get any better than this.” The screen turned to the news where it seemed panic had taken a visit to the newscast. There were people running in the background, and the anchor man looked like he was about to pee himself.
“We are sorry to report that the experiment from Hindori Labs has escaped this morning is still at hand!! We are still advising that everyone stay inside while this monster roams the immediate area. We are told that he looks human but can be identified. He has brown hair and eyes, looks to be around the age of 20, is wearing a white lab coat, and is also barefoot. Although he does look human we have been assured that he is indeed a monster that can posses a great danger to all who stand in this things path. If you do happen to see this monster at anytime please do not hesitate to call this number. Hindori labs is offering a reward for this creature, Dead or Alive!”
Mr. Lidre was not shocked to see that this had happened had a calm face upon his head. He thought back to earlier that morning when he had gone to get the paper. It was like any other morning, besides the fact that he'd just got done unpacking. Out of the corner of his eye, he had seen something that had ducked behind his houses wall. He cautiously turned the corner, to see a man, scared and shivering. At the time, he had had no knowledge that this was a beast of any sort. He had thought it to be a normal and homeless man.
He had invited him into his house, to which the man only shook his head, and stayed huddled against the wall. Mr. Lidre eventually had to drag the man by his feet, and was surprised to see no resistance from the man at all. Afterwards, he bathed the mute experiment, noticing that he had many wounds and smelled something fierce. As he did, he noticed that the man sat awkwardly, like a cat on a bed almost. He smiled as the man struggled, thinking how he never had a child, and how much this man was acting like one. He smiled, and finally got the man bathed and bandaged up. He brought him to the dining room, and began to prepare breakfast for the man. As he set the plates down, the man looked up at Mr. Lidre. He almost cried as he said the first words to the old man since he'd been let in.
“Thank you so much sir!”
He soon was able to get the experiment to talk to him, learning of his story. He was a lab subject, a warrior that was breed with attributes of animals and human. He was able to turn into what the scientists called a Blootine: A creature with extraordinary powers that could rip monsters to shreds. He was created to help kill someone, though he could not remember who it was. He was always stuck in a small room, always fighting in another room, and eating in another room as well. He always did the same thing every day of his life. He had grown tired of it. He was only living for the sake of their mission.
One day he had asked what would happen if he killed this person they wanted him to kill. He was told that when he killed the man they were after, he would be cryogenically frozen until the next time they would need him. He was also told that he was never created to live among humans. That it wasn’t possible for him to live a peaceful life with anything. He had then asked when he would be needed again. They told him that it would be well over 2000 years before they had another situation like their current one at hand.
The experiment would not stand for it as he had said. He had ripped apart the door to his room, and started to escape. He killed many people, almost anyone that tried to stop him. But when he had finally escaped, he stood by the wall where they wouldn’t look. And he cried. He had killed innocent people over his own freedom, while also draining them of all of their blood, leaving no chance of survival for those who had tried to stop him. He was ashamed.
Mr. Lidre was a tad frightened, but he was an understanding man though. He comforted the boy, holding him as he cried again. He then offered to take care of the man, telling him that he could teach him how to live among humans. But the man shook his head, and explained that he had no idea how to control his power on his own. He wanted to go to a place where he could learn how to train himself, and then maybe one day in the future, live amongst every other human. Mr. Lidre was disappointed, but he nodded and gathered some things for Jon. He had given him food, new clothes, and a pack that had a book inside. But most importantly, he gave him a name of his own.
“Jon will be your name, carry it with pride, and you will live a good life.” He had shown him the way to the forest, where he felt that Jon would be safe from others, and felt that he could live life well to a certain degree. He could still remember Jon's last words to him.
“Thank you, father.” Then he watched him leave.
He would hide Jon’s secret to his grave. He did not want Jon to be found and be separated from the outside world again. He was happy for the first time in months. He was happy because not only had he helped someone in need, but because he was a father. And that, he would remember forever.
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Prologue
3478, City of Norgin
It was early in the evening that day. The sun was hanging in the sky, as Mr. Lidre went outside to get his paper that he’d forgotten to get that morning. The elderly man in his business coat and pants looked at the sun as it set to the north in all of its pride in the midsummer’s eve.
“What a beautiful evening,” he said as he gathered the paper. He stared for only a little while longer on his green lawn in front of his little yellow home. He looked to his neighborer on either side of his house, smirking at how much they looked like his own home. As he looked forward again, he felt a feeling of happiness overwhelm him. He'd just gotten a promotion, and had been moved to the edge of the city, right next to the forest. He couldn't wait to see what kind of animals he'd find nibbling on his lawn in the mornings. He soon retired to his house once more.
He sat down in his favorite chair and turned on the television. “It doesn’t get any better than this.” The screen turned to the news where it seemed panic had taken a visit to the newscast. There were people running in the background, and the anchor man looked like he was about to pee himself.
“We are sorry to report that the experiment from Hindori Labs has escaped this morning is still at hand!! We are still advising that everyone stay inside while this monster roams the immediate area. We are told that he looks human but can be identified. He has brown hair and eyes, looks to be around the age of 20, is wearing a white lab coat, and is also barefoot. Although he does look human we have been assured that he is indeed a monster that can posses a great danger to all who stand in this things path. If you do happen to see this monster at anytime please do not hesitate to call this number. Hindori labs is offering a reward for this creature, Dead or Alive!”
Mr. Lidre was not shocked to see that this had happened had a calm face upon his head. He thought back to earlier that morning when he had gone to get the paper. It was like any other morning, besides the fact that he'd just got done unpacking. Out of the corner of his eye, he had seen something that had ducked behind his houses wall. He cautiously turned the corner, to see a man, scared and shivering. At the time, he had had no knowledge that this was a beast of any sort. He had thought it to be a normal and homeless man.
He had invited him into his house, to which the man only shook his head, and stayed huddled against the wall. Mr. Lidre eventually had to drag the man by his feet, and was surprised to see no resistance from the man at all. Afterwards, he bathed the mute experiment, noticing that he had many wounds and smelled something fierce. As he did, he noticed that the man sat awkwardly, like a cat on a bed almost. He smiled as the man struggled, thinking how he never had a child, and how much this man was acting like one. He smiled, and finally got the man bathed and bandaged up. He brought him to the dining room, and began to prepare breakfast for the man. As he set the plates down, the man looked up at Mr. Lidre. He almost cried as he said the first words to the old man since he'd been let in.
“Thank you so much sir!”
He soon was able to get the experiment to talk to him, learning of his story. He was a lab subject, a warrior that was breed with attributes of animals and human. He was able to turn into what the scientists called a Blootine: A creature with extraordinary powers that could rip monsters to shreds. He was created to help kill someone, though he could not remember who it was. He was always stuck in a small room, always fighting in another room, and eating in another room as well. He always did the same thing every day of his life. He had grown tired of it. He was only living for the sake of their mission.
One day he had asked what would happen if he killed this person they wanted him to kill. He was told that when he killed the man they were after, he would be cryogenically frozen until the next time they would need him. He was also told that he was never created to live among humans. That it wasn’t possible for him to live a peaceful life with anything. He had then asked when he would be needed again. They told him that it would be well over 2000 years before they had another situation like their current one at hand.
The experiment would not stand for it as he had said. He had ripped apart the door to his room, and started to escape. He killed many people, almost anyone that tried to stop him. But when he had finally escaped, he stood by the wall where they wouldn’t look. And he cried. He had killed innocent people over his own freedom, while also draining them of all of their blood, leaving no chance of survival for those who had tried to stop him. He was ashamed.
Mr. Lidre was a tad frightened, but he was an understanding man though. He comforted the boy, holding him as he cried again. He then offered to take care of the man, telling him that he could teach him how to live among humans. But the man shook his head, and explained that he had no idea how to control his power on his own. He wanted to go to a place where he could learn how to train himself, and then maybe one day in the future, live amongst every other human. Mr. Lidre was disappointed, but he nodded and gathered some things for Jon. He had given him food, new clothes, and a pack that had a book inside. But most importantly, he gave him a name of his own.
“Jon will be your name, carry it with pride, and you will live a good life.” He had shown him the way to the forest, where he felt that Jon would be safe from others, and felt that he could live life well to a certain degree. He could still remember Jon's last words to him.
“Thank you, father.” Then he watched him leave.
He would hide Jon’s secret to his grave. He did not want Jon to be found and be separated from the outside world again. He was happy for the first time in months. He was happy because not only had he helped someone in need, but because he was a father. And that, he would remember forever.