Fanfiction ► FFVII: Shadows

[yado]

4 things.
1. No double posting
2.you spelt hand wrong. chapter 3 paragraph 6
3.Who is val? Chapter 3 paragragh 13
4.Those where really good. I hate how mysterious vincent always has to be.

 

[inferno232]

Sorry... Val was my first draft of my main character... Then I changed his name to Col. He ran his had through his hair? Thanks for tellling me, I want to get all the mistakes out pronto. I wish I hadn't made the plot move so fast... but my head was going 200 mph.
Glad you liked it... Wish more people would read though... Thanks for your comments!

 

[Winged Mirage]

Heh, of course Sephiroth knows just where the wedding is....XD

Your characters look interesting. I wonder what role they get to play in this big mess...

Take your time. If you rush the story too much, it won't turn out right.

Otherwisr, looking good!