Fanfiction ► FF7 the end of the game

[Son of Sepheroth]

"I wonder to myself.am i wanted sence i already defeated Sephiroth.i wonder?''
CHAPTER 1
(Cloud is in the bed liying down,and Tifa comes in the room)

Tifa:Are you ever going to get out this bed
Cloud:.................................
Tifa: dose that mean a no?
Cloud:..................................
(Cloud sits up)
Cloud:For what nobody needs me anymore
Tifa: don't say that i need you
Cloud:.....what ever
(Cloud goes in the bathroom)
(Cloud goes in shower)
Cloud:"Dose she care about me?"
???:Yes she cloud
(Cloud turns off shower)
Cloud:Who's there!
(Tifa knocks a the door)
Tifa:Cloud who are you talking to?
Cloud:..........................
(Cloud turns on the shower again)

Cloud get's out the shower and thinks that he hered that voice before but i dosen't remember who's is it,so he get's out the bathroom .

(Cloud waked in the Kicthen)
Tifa:Are you hungry cause im cooking Eggs
Cloud:...........
Tifa:your still not answering me,look are you hungry before we go to Cid's Birthday party?
Cloud:.........No
Tifa:OK let me eat then and then we will go

Cloud and Tifa walks in cid house

Cid:Who in the name of green grass walk in my house,O it's just yall
Tifa:Happy birthday
Cloud:.........
Cid:thanks but what's wrong with cloud
Tifa:i don't know
Cid:let me talk to him
Tifa:....ok
Cid:so cloud some thing in your pants?...Ant's birds or something esle
Cloud:........
Cid:I know you been looking up nasty sites on the internet again
Cloud:Can i tell you something
Cid:Yea sure what is it?

Cloud,Cid it's Janova!

Cloud:No it's coming ture

Cloud,Cid,and Tifa run's out side

TO BE CONITUED

 

[Riku the law]

maybe its just me but i dont think fan fics work this way. but its pretty good

 

[Son of Sepheroth]

maybe its just me but i dont think fan fics work this way. but its pretty good

It's not .. but it'd good anyways

 

[Cloud_Unchained]

(Cloud_Unchained Reads the fic.)

(Cloud_Unchained spits on screen.)

(Cloud_Unchained wipes spit.)

(Cloud_Unchained clicks the back button.)

 

[Sir Jecht]

Yo SoS...I can that your trying and all..but its still not working..I dont know what type of direction you where going for in this one...but once again.it lacks a storyline(from what I can see)...what you need is a proof reader or and editor that can show you the flaws and how to improve to make the story sound like a story....I dont like begin the type of person who just says your work sucks and offers you no encouragement or even thoughts of improvement...I hope you take my advice...into consideration

**Fanfic's are usually not done like this for if they were....then in that joke thread I have alot of fanfics..lol**

 

[Zaraki]

i liked it better than the other ones but it still kinda sucked...

 

[scubasteve]

*Reads Fanfic*
*Laughs hysterically at SoS, not with him*

Fanfics aren't your thing..just give up.

 

[Zexilicious]

Uh you really should stop making FanFics

Constant Grammar errors

Some of the words are not spelled right

....This is not funny!

and one more thing do you really think that cloud's story would be like that after FFVII?!

 

[scubasteve]

SoS...do you just write these Fanfics out of the clear blue sky? That's why your stories suck. You need to start thoroughly thinking them out.

After four fanfics, you still suck. You phail. Stop writing. Please.