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Fanfiction ► Crashing Waves -A Demyx Fanfic-



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tanhony43

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This is about when Demyx first joined the orginization. Enjoy!

Chapter 1: Dancing Water

I’ve been thinking a lot lately…where has my heart gone? I can’t feel the pain…
The blonde teenager opened his eyes and looked around at his surroundings. A cloaked figure stood in front of him.
“W-Who am I?” He asked.
The figure replied. “You are yourself. You are Demyx.”
“And who are you, freak?” Sneered Demyx. He noticed there were 2 other figures. One seemed about the age of Demyx, sitting down and reading a book, the other had blonde hair sticking from underneath his hood and wielded a blue shield.
“I said who are you? Listen!” Said the self-centred teen.
“I am all there ever was.”
“I meant a name, idiot.”
“My name is of no importance. I am the superior. Speak no more.”
“No way!” Said Demyx.
The one reading the book lifted his head and spoke.
“Better do what he says.”
He took of his hood, revealing grey hair.
“So you’re an emo, huh?” Laughed Demyx.
The emo scowled.
“N-No!”
Another cloaked figure jumped from the roof of a house.
“Don’t hide the facts, Zex.” He took off his hood. “Name’s Axel. Got it memorized?”
“Hothead.” Said Demyx, looking at Axel’s hair.
Now both Axel and ‘Zex’ were annoyed. ‘Zex’ started talking.
“Axel, stop calling me Zex. It’s ZEXION. Zexion!”
“Sizzle down, Zex.”
Demyx decided to break up the fight somehow, he looked at his hand. Huh? It was glowing? A sitar appeared in his hand. Ah, well. When life gives you lemons, make lemonade.
As soon as he played the first note pillars of water separated Axel and Zexion.
“Lucky. Good think bubbles here saved you.” Said Zexion.
“Stop it, you two.” Said the one with the shield.
“Vex, why should we?”
“Because you two are in the organization and you should behave.”
Axel turned to Demyx.
“Allow me to explain what’s going on…”
~-~-~-~-~
Axel had explained everything. Demyx was now in The Castle That Never Was. Zexion and Axel had calmed down and he got on rather well with them.
He sat on his new bed thinking about his odd day. He had been told about something called a ‘Keyblade’ and how he should destroy the wielder at all costs.
He looked at the city below and squinted his eyes. Who was that, running and…killing heartless? A keybearer! Demyx leaped out of the window and landed near the keybearer, on top of memory skyscraper.
The neo-shadows sure were giving the kid a beating. His armour could not take much more. Two more came to back him up. Demyx revealed himself.
“Well well, what do we have here?”
The tallest one looked at Demyx.
“Nobody!”
Demyx muttered something.
“Somebody.”
And with that, he grabbed his sitar and let out a battle cry.
“Dance water, dance!”
 

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8/10.

Dialogue is perfect, but, description is lacking. Still amazing though.

I an guarantee this fic will improve alot.
 
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