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XIII Nobodies

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This was a story I had originally started during my time on AF. I haven't been much active in the project lately, but I'm thinking about getting back on it.

I would like to state that if any "plagiarism" exists in this story, it is accidental. This is really my first work, and I will warn you now, I am not, nor have I ever been, an artist of any kind. Therefore, I cannot say if this story will, at all, be original. Also, please tell me if anything in this is offensive. You never know what kind of things people might find offensive, whether it's meant to be or not.

Prologue --------------------------

Long ago, in an empty space between the stars, eight beings came together to create the land. These being were known as the Gods, each one having their own unique ability. With each others' help, they created the world, and endowed the gift of life upon it.

First, Domare gathered together the other Gods. He presented them with a list of laws that would be enforced upon the world. With all agreeing to these laws, he created them, and made them possible. All existence would be bound to these laws.

Next, Eld, together with Ljus, reached out their hands. Eld, with her power of heat and flame, summoned what power she could into the tips of her fingers. She gathered together and enormous ball of heat, which emitted a faint glow. Ljus then put his hand upon the massive body of heat, and brought the brightness of light to the empty space. However, the great ball would not last long without something to support it. Luft came to them and offered her assistance. She was able to create a source that would keep the bright ball of flame burning ever longer. The Sun had been created.

Domare next called upon Jordart. Jordart used his power to create a solid foundation for all living this to exist on and inhabit. He had created a great, brown rock made of all sorts of minerals and metals. He made great mountains, and caves filled with glittering stones, and gave each type a different name. And then, he finished to give the name of his great creation, the name of Terra.

But the work was not done yet. Domare had called upon Luft, Vatten, Liv, and Skugga. Skugga put her dark hand upon the world, and created the shadow that hid from the light, giving birth to the time of night, when the sun would set with Terra's rotation. Vatten then poured hs great power onto the red planet, filling fissures and deep areas with water. Luft soared across the planet, bringing air to it, then, together with Vatten, they created the great, blue atmosphere which would give wind and rain to the great body. Finally, Liv came down to the surface of Terra. She pulled out a single strand of her hair and buried it in the soil. A tree suddenly sprouted from the ground, and began to grow. She then pealed of a single piece of flesh, and from is came creatures of all sorts, all running freely across their new home. The great land of Terra was now complete with the gift of life.

After their hard work, Domare had ordered the Gods to retire, and exist within the heart of the great planet. One final task was assigned though. Each of the Gods would have Children to inhabit the land. Many races of people would be born, each of them filled with Domare's great knowledge. And each race would be given a fragment of one God's power. These Children of the Gods were also known as Elementals.

The Children of Ljus were white-skinned, being granted with the ability to bring light into the darkest places, so long as one minor source existed. They would also be able to condense that same energy into a photonic form.

The Children of Skugga were dark-skinned. They were granted with the ability to manipulate and hide in the shadows. They could also use the power of shadow to block light, virtually blinding their opponents.

The Children of Eld had pigments of red, and possessed the power of heat and flame. So long as their was a source of heat, they could manipulate that heat, making it even hotter and expanding it. They are potentially stronger during the day, when the sun fills the atmosphere with warmth.

The Children of Vatten had skin of blue. With the ability to control water, they could even condense it to make ice, and gather what water was in the air. An advanced Child could even reach inside another being to control their blood, or even manipulate the water within plant life.

The Children of Jordart were brown-skinned, and could control the solid earth. So long as they have any form of mineral, they can manipulate it shape, and create a small, but dense ball of pure earth. If one could advance their talents, they can even manipulate metals. Some of the most advanced ones can even manipulate the minserals within another person's body.

The Children fo Luft had skin of a light bluer green. With the ability to manipulate the air, they could create air currents, and whirlwinds. More advanced users could lift their bodies with the air around them and fly or glide. And some can even control the air within another being's lungs.

The Children of Liv had green skin. These people could communicate with any form of life around them, even talk to trees and flowers. They can also manipulate plant-life to an extent, wrapping an enemy with vines and roots, and even using leaves and stems as lethal weapons.

Each Elemental had their own unique powers. Domare, however, did not have children. Instead, he granted all life with the innate ability to think, comprehend and judge. He also created another law that was not known to the other Gods, and it was not apparrant until the Elementals started to breed with one another. Should their genetics mix, the child's skin will become one of the color of which ever gene is dominant. However, the child would become a mere human being, possessing no power of any kind. Only if the child's blood is at least 87.5% pure of one race, should they be granted with the ability to manipulate the forces.

12,000 years....

The planet is inhabited by over 160 million people. Elementals have become a rare breed in this day and age. Even those that are found to be Elementals are often turned away and shunned. Those that are genuine Children of the Gods, those that were the original people to have dominion over the planet, no longer have say in any affair. And with such a low populous, the ways and teachings of the arts that were once passed down by each tribe are an incredibly rare find. Threrefore, even those who are pure of a God's blood are bound to have weak abilities. Many don't even discover their hidden abilities until they've reached their midlives. Domare is society's most accepted God. Anyone who is found to worship one of the other seven Gods is often stoned in public. For anyone to take pride in their Godly heritage, it has become a great sin. And no forgiveness is handed to those that oppose to the accepted ways.

Slavery has become a common practice in these days. The world seems to have hit a dark age. The population 20 years ago was actually around 240 million. over 80 million have died, and only few of those that are born have been surviving past two years of age. It seems like the younger ones are more susceptible to a Plague that hit our lands about 22 years ago. Some treatments have appeared, but it's only available to those that can afford it. Peasants aren't typically treated with enough kindness to get that treatment. As such, if a peasant is struck with the Plague, they are often taken away to suffer the remainder of their lives in the wilderness.

Most of the kings of this world have become corrupt. As they sit on their thrones, getting fat from all the riches they have at their disposle, many of the people in their kingdoms are suffering. The Plague has hit hard, affecting the animals on farms and the crops are no longer well-maintained because so many peasants on those farms die each day, and are replaced with other peasants who lack the knowledge of growing and harvesting crops. But that's not all, the beasts that attack people are also affected by it, but in a different way. A typical farm animal or a human often begins with symptoms of coughing up accessive amounts of mucus. After two days, the lungs start to rot, causing and immense amount of pain and difficulty breathing. Finally, 3-5 days after, the mind becomes delusional. the lungs soon begin to stop funtioning. The victim dies only a few hours after this symptom occurs. But with the beasts, they only show the first symptom. After that, they experience increased aggression. This aggression continues for about two months. After that, their nervous system starts to malfunction. 4-5 days after that, their nervous system completely fails, organs cease to funtion, thus resulting in their death.

Some people blame the Goddes, Liv for the Plague, saying that she is now trying to bring death to the people of Terra by poisoning them. Because of this, all those with green skin are being hanged and stoned in public for being visible descendants of Liv. The world is now undergoing a state of chaos. the nations of Yeta, Tamor and Frege have been undergoing a great war that has now been lasting for 9 years. And even those that aren't at war are suffering from the Plague and starvation.

Episode 1: Call Upon the Wind -------------------------

Elia was sixteen years old. Her skin was a light, blue-green color, depicting her obvious Wind Elemental descent. She had long, blue hair, green eyes, and a very proportionate face. She would be very beautiful, if only she weren't a peasant. She mainly served to keep the property looking tidy. Because of this, she was a rather skinny, and often dirty-looking girl. She was about 5'4" tall, but weighed in only around 80 lbs. Every morning was the same. Wake up before sunrise. Eat a single piece of bread and a small hand full of almonds. Then it was get yelled at by her master for taking five minutes just to get up and eat her food. After that, it was pull the weeds in the front yard and remove any rocks that made it look "ugly." After that, it was pulling the weeds in the back yard, and the back yard was big. The entire property was around six acres. It was a lot to maintain for one person. Everyday, a new weed would sprout. A new rock would appear, another branch would fall off the tree. If the property wasn't clean, it was a good scolding and ten whacks to the back. If a branch was there the next morning, "You didn't pick up all the branches yesterday!" another ten whacks. Just about everyday, she would get ten whacks, sometimes even twenty or thirty. The day was always miserable. Always the same dirty work, always getting blisters and cuts, always getting beaten and bruised on the back, just plain miserable.

Her master, Gord, was a wealthy man with red skin, indicating that he is descended partly from the Children of Eld. He inherited his property, and his money, from his late parents. He was set for life. Never did he have to work, never did he have to worry about paying taxes, and never did he have to worry about his house. It was always kept tidy by his maid, who he often harassed sexually. What a disgusting man he was. He was getting fatter by the day, his smell was unpleasant from the food that he ate, and from bathing only once every seven to ten days, even though he could easily bathe every day. He was a well-hated man by his two servants. Elia was always getting scolded and hit, while his indoor servant, Sera, was always getting sexually assaulted.

Sera was seventeen years of age. She had brown skin, a descendant of Jordart's Children. Her hair was black, and her eyes, also brown. And she was beautiful. In fact, Gord got her from a special auction. She was one of the Primary Model Servants, which cost about as much as five good acres of land. In fact, he traded five acres just to buy her. But Sera was also very suicidal. She never wanted to live a life without freedom. She tried to commit suicide a number of times, especially after being purchased by Gord. Eventually, he ended up putting her on a leash just to keep her away from the knives that she used to cook with.

Elia had finally finished her work, right when the first star appeared in the sky. Today was one of those few miraculous days. There was nothing that Gord could scold at her or beat her about. She did everything. The weeds were pulled, the rocks and branches were gone, and she had even brought in some squirrels that she had killed. Gord hated squirrels with a passion. The buck teeth reminded him of his delusional father, who had large front teeth. Of course, Elia still only got a poor meal. Every morning was bread and almonds. Lunch was a whole onion, and dinner was a small slice of salted pork, and a pear. Sera used sneak more food out to Elia, but Gord caught her, and had beaten Elia and Sera both, thirty times each. Elia decided she didn't want Sera to get hurt anymore, so she insisted that she stop.

Elia's room didn't consist of much. She slept in the attic. Sera dusted for her every week or so, but is was still an unpleasant place to sleep. The draft would come in, she slept on the hard floor, and she was only allowed one blanket. Every night, Elia would wish for something bad to happen to Gord. She would always wish that the Plague be brought upon him, without any treatment. She would watch and laugh at him as he suffered during the last few days, while she was sitting in his favorite rocking chair. She wanted him dead, but he was always watching. Gord knew Elia wanted him dead. She once tried to take a rake to his head. Gord was lazy, but he was clever. His uncle was a knight, and he taught him well. Gord always had his beating stick with him. And he would sometimes swing it as if it were a sword. Sometimes, he would still even practice. That's about the most physical activity he would get. Elia received a good fifty whacks for trying that, and had to go three days without food. Gord swore that next time she tried it, he would cut off all of her fingers, break all of her limbs, and chain her to a tree. If only she could have him killed.

The next day had come, and Elia woke up at the usual time. She ate the same piece of bread, and the same handful of almonds. Gord told her to go outside to eat her almonds, and then go straight to work. Sera was on her leash, as usual. Elia looked at her for a moment. She looked different somehow. Elia couldn't put her finger on it, but Sera had a different look on her face than she normally did. Usually, it was just the typical straight face, with just a touch of pout in her eyes. But her face looked serious, almost angry. Before she could put her finger on it, Gord shouted at her. "Elia, ya dumb bitch, get pulling those damned weeds!" Elia went outside.

The sky was clear and there was no wind. Elia started doing her usual chores, and she was thinking about the look on Sera's face. Although they didn't communicate much, Elia and Sera knew what the other was thinking just by the look on the other's face. It was a different kind of friendship from most. Elia tried to get it out of her head and focus on pulling the weeds. She felt a sudden wind. It started to wrap around her, like a whirlwind. Her thoughts were still on Sera, but she could tell there was a wind blowing around her. She suddenly got up to move to the next patch of weeds, and the wind disppeared.

The day was nearing its end, and Elia had just realized that she hadn't eaten lunch. She was almost done. There didn't seem to be as many weeds this time, and not so many branches had fallen off the trees. Squirrels weren't wondering around the yard as much. They must have realized by now that many squirrels that run on the property end up dead. Elia picked up her tools and walked slowly to the tool shed. She then turn to go into the house. As she stepped into the house from the back door, she saw that Gord wasn't in his chair. She then had a strange feeling. The atmosphere was different somehow.

Something was missing. She ran into the kitchen, nobody. She ran into the other room, still nobody. She then ran down the hall into Sera's room, and found the answer. Elia's eyes widened, and her blue-green face started to transition into a pailish color. She looked in shock as she saw Sera's body laying on the floor, and a puddle of blood around and underneath her. Elia's eyes started to water, and she stumbled backwards. She saw, next to Sera, one of the knives that she used in the kitchen. Gord was sitting next to her. He looked up and saw Elia in the doorway. "The dumb bitch finally did it." Sera had killed herself.

Elia started to cry. Gord was already pissed that his prized servant killed herself. He then turned to Elia. "Shut up ya cunt! Do you want me to beat you?!" Gord immediately grabbed his beating stick. Elia was trying to get up, but she was unable to under shock. Gord grabbed Elia's shirt by the collar and threw her on the floor. He raised his stick and beat her. Once, twice on the head. Elia covered her head. Three, four, five, six on the back. Seventeen, eighteen, nineteen, twenty, beating her on the arms and the legs. Finally, Elia got up and limped her way to the attic. Gord was about to chase her, but was to blind with anger.

Elia was in the attic and there was no draft. She was crying, hysterical. Sera, the only friend she ever had, was now dead, and Gord had hit Elia pretty good this time. "Gord," she thought. "It's his fault," she said to herself. "If he hadn't treated us like this, we wouldn't have been so miserable." Elia gritted her teeth. She tightened her fist and started to tremble, her eyes became full of pure anger and envy, and a strong, unnatural wind began to blow.
 
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Episode 2: Free -------------------------------------------

Elia was still in the attic, hysterical about Sera's suicide. She didn't understand why, but the air would start to circulate around her from time to time. Something like this had never happened, especially in the attic. She did remember it happening once before though. It was when she was little, about nine years old. It was the first time she had been beaten by Gord. All she did was make one little mistake, and just like that, Gord bashed her with his stick, and then hit her on the legs. She was forced to sleep outside that night. She curled into a ball, crying in pain. A strong gust of wind constantly blew during that time she was crying. Elia didn't remember much about her parents. All she remembered was that her father was neglectful, and her mother was the one who sold her to an auctioneer. Elia also remembered a story that Sera told her when they had first met. Sera told her about how long ago, everybody had special powers. But now only a few people have them. Could Elia be one of those few?

The sun started to rise, and Elia had only gotten two hours of sleep. Gord ended up waking her by grabbing her arm and jerking her to her feet. "Damnit ya cunt, how long're you gonna sleep for?! Still a worthless tree sloth, I guess," Gord scolded at her. Elia wasn't paying much attention to Gord as he was screaming at her. She was more focused on the pain in her arm and her shoulder from being jerked. Then thought again about witnessing Sera's dead body. She tried to think of something else before she got upset again. "Get your worthless ass in the field, unless you want a hundred whacks!" Gord shouted. "Yes, Master Gord," Elia responded politely. She knew Gord loved it when anyone called him Master or Lord. But it wasn't often that Elia ever called him that. It would feed his ego a little too much.

Elia went outside, and she wondered if the wind in the attic, and in the field really came from her. Iif it were, how could she control it? Of course, if she were to try, she'd have to make free time. She would also need to make sure that Gord did not catch her. Once she had finished cleaning up the yard in front of the house, she moved to the back. She remembered that she was in an emotional state in the attic. And when the wind surrounded her in the field, she was worried in deep thought. She tried going into deep thought again, because she did not want to feel the way she did last night. And she certainly did not want to think about Sera's death. Elia started to think. She thought and thought, and she worried. There was only a light breeze today, so she would be able to notice if something was happening. Nothing happened. She tried to work, and keep her mind perched on that. If nothing were to get done, Gord would beat her for sure. Suddenly, something popped into Elia's head. If worry and sadness were to trigger what power she might have, then why not any other emotion. So long as it is felt strongly, it may happen to trigger something.

Elia tried to think of something happy. Something that would make her so excited, she would leap ten feet into the air, or even start to cry. She thought about having a birthday. Elia did not ever remember having a birthday, even when she still lived with her parents. She thought as hard as she could. Good food, gifts, singing and dancing, just a joyous celebration especially for her. Elia made the thought so strong, she could almost see it before her very eyes. She could smell the fruit cake, hear the music and see everyone coming up to her. "Happy birthday," they would say, with the biggest smiles on their face, as if they actually cared about her. Elia then began to cry. But it was not because she was happy about her dream. She was sad because there was no longer anyone who cared about her. The thought was so painful, so full of anguish and heartbreak, Elia could not help but be sad. But something happened. The wind started to pick up. The air began to dance around Elia, as if trying to lift her up into the sky. It was a much stronger whirlwind than the on she had experienced yesterday. Elia felt the wind with pleasure. She put her hand out and tried to understand the power, to harness it. She then cleared her head and the wind slowed to a stop. Elia then began to move her hand gently, trying to imitate the movement of the air around her. She swung her hand slowly, trying to keep in sync with the air. Suddenly, the air moved across the ground in the same direction and the same motion. Elia tried the same thing again, but she moved both her hands in a circular motion. A small whirlwind was generated, and it swept the ground gently. Elia had done it! She learned how to use the power that was sleeping inside of her.

Elia started back at her work. There were small patches of weeds on the far ends of the property. Elia decided to pick those weeds first. She moved along, keeping a sharp eye out for any more weeds. She had finally finished her work right when the sun began to set. Elia worked harder today than ever, due to her excitement. She could now practice her new found ability and eventually escape Gord's bindings and have her freedom. Elia soon began to wake up earlier than usual. She woke up one hour before sunrise everyday. She would start to practice while Gord was still asleep. She would practice by moving leaves and dust, using light blasts of air to move small rocks, and even slice through some of the weeds with a sort of air blade. Her air blasts were only powerful enough to nudge rocks the size of her fist, and her air slashes were very short range, but she kept practicing. After several days, she was able to lift a fair amount of small rocks, pebbles mostly, with her whirlwinds. She learned to increase the effectiveness of her air blasts and slashes, increasing their range and power. She mostly practiced air slashes on the weeds, and air blasts on what large rocks she could find. Every night, she would always think "I will soon be free, I will soon be free." Her air slashes extended to just a little over a foot from her hands, and the were quite effective, too. Elia was able to cut through thick branches, and even some of the thinner tree trunks. Her blasts could soon thrust head-sized rocks over nine feet away. Elia's skills were improving day after day, and every night, she would go to bed satisfied with her power.

Twenty-four days had passed since Elia was able to control her ability to manipulate air. She woke up later this time, and Gord had to wake her up. Gord was not in a good mood lately because he didn't have Sera to cook his meals, and nobody to sexually abuse. Gord's scolding became more constant. They mostly over nothing. Elia went outside to do her work. There wasn't much to do this time. She would be done by just a little afternoon today. Elia was able to to get some practice done with her abilities. She went back inside about an hour after noon. She went into the shed and put her tools away. She then went inside to tell Gord that she was done for the day. Unfortunately, Gord wasn't just going to let her relax, not that easily anyway. Elia opened the door. Gord looked at her with a fierce look. "What the hell are you doing in here? Get back to work!" Gord snapped at Elia. "I've finished all of my chores for today. There's nothing left to do." Elia said in a mild tone.

"Oh? Nothing to do, huh?" "As I said, everything is done. I've removed the weeds, picked up foliage off the ground, put large rocks in the pile and raked the yard. What else is there to do?" Gord wasn't pleased. He had already been in a bad mood since his house servant decided to kill herself. He was ready to explode by now. "You want something to do?! I'll give ya something to do! Start by making me lunch! If it's not done right, it's 100 whacks, or death! Whichever comes first!" Elia froze for a minute. She didn't like the situation she was in. She did not want to follow Gord's orders anymore. And if he really wanted to beat her, then she would have to kill him first. "No!" Elia shouted. "What's that ya little wench?!" The vain on Gord's forehead was really showing now.

"I will no longer obey your orders, dear Master," Elia said with a grin. "Ya little cunt, do you wanna die?" Gord was not going to allow that kind of behavior from his servant. "I will not be the one to die. I am going to make you pay for your mistreatment. I am going to make you pay for poor Sera's death." Elia was getting serious now. Gord reacted with a frown filled with anger. "How dare you speak to your master that way?! I'll give you no mercy this time!!! Gord shouted with a voice like thunder.

Elia was ready to fight against Gord. Gord began by swinging his beating stick at Elia. Elia responded by using a blast of air to knock the stick out of Gord's hand. "What the... ya damn little cunt! I'll just have to cut you then!" Gord grabbed his sword from behind his rocking chair. Elia was starting to worry. She had never fought before. If she didn't fight well, she really would die. When Gord unsheathed his sword, he really meant to kill. Gord swung down, trying to hit Elia. Elia managed to dodge the swing, but just barely. Gord took a fighting stance. He held his sword firmly, and Elia was getting ready to defend. Gord thrust his sword at Elia. Elia was dodging each hit, but she was beginning to panic. If Gord's sword hit her, she might not live. Gord swung sideways and Elia ducked. He swung inward, Elia stumbled backwards. It was hard to dodge inside a well-furnished room. Gord was swinging without worry of breaking anything. If something broke, he could just buy another one. Elia was too worried, she could not fight back. Finally, Gord swung to the right. Elia was hit!. She received a good slice just below her right shoulder. Elia put her left hand on her wound, squeezing it in pain. She was getting tense with the pain. "Heh, what was with those courageous words a minute ago? Looks to me like you're still just a little shrew." Gord said with a satisfied grin. "If you want to talk like a big girl, then die like a big girl!" Gord was getting ready to deliver the final blow and end Elia's life.

Just as Gord swung down to kill Elia, she managed to collect herself again. Bwoosh!! Elia blasted Gord with a good ball of air, sending him back five feet, crashing into the dining table. Elia stepped up to Gord, still gripping her wound. Elia raised her left hand and Gord looked up at her with fear in his eyes. Elia swung down, releasing a blade of air. Sloosh!! "AAAAGGGGHHHH!!!!!" Gord began to scream in agony. Elia had cut off his right leg. Gord clenched his teeth and tightly gripped severed area. Elia was getting serious now. Gord began to shake in fear, so much that he began to pee his pants. "N-no... w-w-w-what the... h-h-hell?" Gord began to stutter. "What's the matter, wasn't I going to die like a big girl?" Elia was angry. She was so furious, and so satisfied with the site of Gord shaking before her with his blood spilling out. Her face turned demonic. Gord was still shaking. Elia raised her hand again, this time to the side of her head, and Gord screamed in fear, trying desperately to get up. "It seems you've become so fat, you can no longer get up with just one leg. Don't worry though. Where you're going, not even both legs will help you escape your deepest fears." Elia swung her hand across Gord's neck with a slice of air. Thwop! Gord's head was severed from his body and it rolled onto the floor. "Farewell... Master."

Elia went to look around the house. She found an old wardrobe containing some woman's clothes and selected an outfit. She then went to Gord's stash of gold and began rolling up coins and putting them into a bag. She could not carry everything, so she left the rest. Elia blasted the wood floor with air two times to make a hole. She pushed the chest into the hole. She covered the floor with lantern oil and ignited it. She took the road toward town and left the house in flames.
 

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Lol. I'm glad you enjoy it. I was actually a bit stoned when writing the second chapter, so it's probably a bit rough compared to the first one. Anyway, I'm gonna go through and revise the 3rd chapter sometime tonight.
 
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