Fanfiction ► The New Organization

[Nelo Angelo]

ha ha, i see you kept the best till last, Juxi-Maboro.
i loved the way you included my samurai sword in there. you got him spot on so far.
great chap man.

 

[Xidon]

The face is your comment?

The happy face, I love the chapter!

 

[ansemjafar]

no clue as to ch 4 and i wasn't expecting a face. but it's cool. thanks. actually nelo i had intended to keep you last cause of yatrox. that is why

 

[Xidon]

Ansem I want a Xigbar sig I made? I'll PM it to you.

 

[√]

I love you <3

I'm kidding.nyahahaha!!!

Chapter 4....help..i'm dying..

 

[Xidon]

^you already need a new chapter dose lol.

 

[ansemjafar]

not coming anytime soon. ch 3. was typed up less than an hour ago

 

[Gullwing Yunie]

Great story so far!
Nice descriptions, and I look forward to reading more! =D

 

[Sonja~Soulheart]

yeay! great chapter! nice gong on how you did with my character!! XD thanks and sorry if i was kinda bugging you on this thread with the chapters XD

all in all excellent!

 

[Deeman]

Yay, teehee, my character was in the chappy ^.^

It was great! Some missing punctuation and typing errors, but still awesome! Also, the ending was rather sudden; it could have ended on a more cliffhanging note. But who cares, it's still good! <3

 

[Sephy-kun]

that was so awsome!......only one problem, I don't think my character made an apperacne, did he? or is he gonna be in chapter four?

 

[Nelo Angelo]

it was sort of a cilffhanger i thought D. it was great.

 

[Constellations]

There was a flash of darkness and the next member arrived. She had short brunette hair and ice blue eyes. When spotted Jemxas she walked over to him.

"Why did you ask me here Jemxas?"

"The answer will be revealed soon."

"Well why can't you tell me now?"

"Because not everyone is here yet Catrixna." Catrixna's gaze suddenly shifted to Shiruix.

woot woot! goo Catrixna! lol

awesome chapter Ansem and i loved how you put my character! exactly how i thought she should act. can't wait for the next one!

 

[Sonja~Soulheart]

^ that was your character angels? awesome! no later chappies soon but hope it does get worked on somehow XD

Exandra's cold and speechless--> yes!

 

[Sephy-kun]

it should be good, I'm already pumped for it!

 

[Constellations]

gunblade: yeah that was my character lol yours was cool too lol

 

[Sephy-kun]

............I think my charcter was one of the only ones who did appear in this chapter

 

[Sonja~Soulheart]

^ what's his name or org. no?

 

[Sephy-kun]

Xanok, and he's number 6, he'll probally be in the next chapter

 

[Sonja~Soulheart]

oh ok... didn't feel like going back to check... well, hopefully he will. =3