Kitax's artwork

[kitax]

I sketched a nice pic of my character from Ravi's Roleplay:
.:KH:A New Beginning:.

Her name is xafanna and she is the time witch of F.O.D.(followers of darkness) members.

 

[dr.korytco]

Cool . Your work is fairly clean. Head , shoulder is correct according to ancient egyptology measurement in sculptor 3 heads across, Im not couting thickness of hair., that is before people said the hell with it but they did not do so in Egypt but in Rome. I forget the sculptors name that went agaist the rules of cannon 1st. Anyways...Those rules were discovered in Rome by an egypt statue called MENKAURE AND HIS QUEEN

Anyways just some info, for you. hahaha. It is accurate.


I like it , do you have a deviant art I can visit ?

 

[Halibel]

Fairly nice, good looking character that you made there. Only concern is that the heart and star aren't drawn that well, you should fix that up.

 

[Ashley]

It's cool, but I'm unsure of what body gesture that is. Are her arms supposed to be straight, or she she pulling back or something of the sort? I'd recommend working on anatomy, but I think everything else is fairly good. The hair is creative; I like the piece coming out of her hair on the right. Great work. :]

 

[Kairi3.0]

Its a nice pic but it needs some color

 

[Aqua]

Very nice sketch. I really like how you drew her eyes. It would be interestign to see it in color, but it is pretty good as it is. Nice work!

 

[dr.korytco]

Its a nice pic but it needs some color

Yah...color is where it is at these days.

 

[iloveyou502]

WARNING: MAJOR HONESTY

Her hands look like....something--but it ain't hands.
Are those..breasts? It looks like she just has two dashes on her robe.
And the structure of her body just looks all wrong my friend.
You could use alot more practice. And also try studying other artwork.
Sorry if I sounds like a jerk. Im not looking to discourage anyone.

 

[~Lenya~]

Welll most of the oter critics were said already,I like her hair,her head should be a bit smaller though.

 

[kitax]

well,those hands are her hands but with gloves..kinda like winter gloves.the thing coming from her hair is attached to an indian like headband.i was trying to make her look more like a girl..i'm still working on it and i may add color to it.i have just been so busy lately with high school and i haven't took any art classes yet..it's most likely i'll take it in my junior year..(in 2 years).

here's a new picture of a new character that may go into the rp as well.the more i think about the F.O.D. group..the ore i wanna draw what the members may look like.oh yea,my deviantart account is here: roxas-kitax on deviantART

here's xonahhe's kinda drawn as a chibi..i wanted him to look little kinda like a puppy...since his zodiac gardian is a dog.plus,he's very young..probually 12 in the F.O.D)

 

[Maverick E.S]

Great stuff man im glad to finally see wat they look like

 

[Axel_Smex]

I like it. Keep up the good work. Practise makes perfect

 

[lightdark]

It's okay, you still need to work on a few things like their bodies. Keep practicing

 

[kitax]

here's some color versions of them,i did xafanna with crayola's color pencil twisters and xonah with brush pens and matalics.

Xafanna(colored)

Xonah(colored)

 

[Fatal_Blade]

Not bad but the problem is that you don't draw any curves on the body. Just keep trying.

 

[kitax]

I have been approving alot and trying to practice more since it is summer time.

Anyways, I'll show some of my organization Oc's that I have been doing stuff with...and the rest of my art you can find here: roxas-kitax on deviantART

Braixer
Braixer 2.0 by ~roxas-kitax on deviantART

Kuraxi

I'll protect you... by ~roxas-kitax on deviantART

 

[Maverick E.S]

I see improvement ^^, your doing good and your imagination is working well. Its good to see Braixer, I imagined him built more but probably only because of the name sounding body builder like ya know lol

 

[Fatal_Blade]

I too see improvement, you did a better job with anatomy this time.

 

[kitax]

thank you...I'm working so hard in my sketchbook to draw animals and more characters from my clubs. It means alot to me to hear these comments.