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    Fanfiction ► The Forgotten Warrior

    Interesting story, I didn't read it all (>_<) but keep up the good work.
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    Fanfiction ► // Dreaming \\

    I don't really like poems that much but I thought yours was pretty good. Keep it up.
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    Most disturbing anime/manga

    I was watching Higurashi and it had a lot wtf moments in there. Like that girl stabbing herself in the head (O_O) I was wondering what’s the most disturbing things you guys have seen in anime/manga?
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    Fanfiction ► K.h.a

    Awesome chapter. Keep it up..
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    Fanfiction ► Kingdomhearts: Dawn Of Sorrows (DOS)

    Good start but I noticed the lack of punctuation like quotation marks when they're speaking I think you should add that in.
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    Fanfiction ► Friends Forever

    It's good so far, keep it up
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    Fanfiction ► The Roxas Identity

    It seemed rushed; I saw a lot of mistakes in there. I think you should proofread it again add more description and maybe make the chapters a bit longer.
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    Fanfiction ► The Tale of a Villian

    I think you just left some letters out, it wasn’t even that noticeable anyway. Thought I'd just mention it in case you might want to go back and correct it. :)
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    Fanfiction ► The Tale of a Villian

    Interesting story, I noticed some spelling mistakes but other than that it was pretty good.
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    Fanfiction ► Symphonic Darkness

    It’s alright, but I think you should use more description in your story it would make it a lot better.
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    Fanfiction ► ~Into the Mind of Zaine - {An Original FanFic}~

    This would make an awesome movie I'd watch it... it's kinda messed up that he ate his own mother though anyway good chapter 10/10.
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    Fanfiction ► K.h.a

    Star wars...o.o Good chapter, keep it up
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    Fanfiction ► ~Into the Mind of Zaine - {An Original FanFic}~

    O.o ...that was disturbing, anyway I liked it keep it up
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    Fanfiction ► K.h.a

    Great chapter, Sailor Moon was also one of my first anime.
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    Fanfiction ► Poetry In Motion

    I can relate to some of these too, their good
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