Re: Dusk's Dream [Prequel to Twilit Road to Dawn]
Before I started writing this story, I didn't really have any favorite Organization members. But Zexion has definitely become my favorite. The only person he's second to in the game is Riku.
As for the length, I was thinking about maybe only putting up a few sections at a time. Would that work out better? Because all of my chapters so far are about this length.
Well, I really don't cry that easily (I am really good at holding my emotions), but, seeing as Zexion is my favorite Org. member, I might cry at his death. Oh, and no pressure on getting the next chapter up, I can wait. Now, as for what I liked, disliked, and what needs improvements, I really like that Zexion more of a main character and not just a day player (he is my favorite member of the Org.). As for dislikes, I didn't like that it was as long as it was. I mean, I know you said that you were making up for the time between updates, but, when something is that long, I personally have a tendency to become bored and lose interest. Now, as for improvements, I really didn't see anything wrong with the story itself, just a few minor grammatical mistakes, so just watch out for that. All in all, it was a really good start to the story, and I look forward to more.
Before I started writing this story, I didn't really have any favorite Organization members. But Zexion has definitely become my favorite. The only person he's second to in the game is Riku.
As for the length, I was thinking about maybe only putting up a few sections at a time. Would that work out better? Because all of my chapters so far are about this length.