Yuck

[saratp]

I know, I know.

What should I have done?

 

[Eric]

First, text should go. Second just add a little more creative brushing like past tags with this style.

Also I'm not to sure about those dupes near the top...unless your going to incorporate them into the background somehow.

I see your concept, it just needs a little more work. I'd consider it a WIP.

 

[Cloud_Unchained]

Could've added some vector shapes and the like. It just feels unfinished. Also, it could do without the text.

 

[Rix]

I do personally think it looks a bit too simple maybe? Like others have said, it doesn't really look finished so maybe you should do something more with it. I don't really like the text either

 

[saratp]

I probably should of never posted this, I wanted to try something new and it didn't really come
out the way I thought it would in my head. :/
Thanks for the feedback though, I'll try out some of the tips on here to make
my next one better.

 

[Dark Master]

compo is nice
Try blurring those dupes for some depth
Take that text out and add some smaller text of a different font

 

[Salty the Hero]

The text should be thrown out, and the background is boring.

Like others have said, throw on some brushes or effects to give it some flow/feeling.

 

[gitmadx3x]

ya it needs some major work, and definetely get rid of the text