cant wait to see what happens next keep up the good work.
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No it doesn't say,but in the last chapter that I did about Riku,Kaze had knocked him out but you dont see it,but kaze said to Riku that he hadTaokityxTheaxGem said:Awsome chapter! But wait!.. Did you see Kaze knocked him out?
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Oh, okay then!=^_^= Sorry about getting confused!
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Sorry about double poting >.> Compuer messed up..
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its ok.........It happens to me tooTaokityxTheaxGem said:
if you cut your hair in the same way then you would have to dye your hair the same way or not it's your decision not mine.
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yeah but my sister said to me like when im say.......ummm.......33 or somthing and I have that colour hair,and I dont want it that colour any more,the only way to get rid of it would to dye it black.....so i dont no what i should do!Keyblade_King said:
omfg, just read every single post in here. i love your fan fic untill know, and thanks for the support you give me on my fic.
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Im glad you like my fan fic!Your's is really good I think!(You should keep the colour code on it i think....it makes the fan fic look more colourful!)dark_dutchman said:
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In this chapter we are going to have two new people coming in so......YAY!
Chapter 11: New Hearts
A 16 year old Girl was running through the streets of Dead or Alive as fast as she could,
Behind her was a army of Heartless trying to get her,
She had ran away from toby's castle.......
......Yes,she knew Toby.
She was his Sister,Lilli
Once he had Killed There parents she was the one who had some how called other people and had told them,
He was taken away from Dead or Alive and she was left to rule,
But he was back, that was why she was on the run,
She could not let him push her around like he used to,So she ran away as soon as she heard he was back,
As soon as Toby had heard that she had run away,he had sent these heartless to bring her back,
Yes......Toby was evil,
Before he had killed his parents he had gone to darkness,
So now he could controle heartless.
As Lilli ran she could sence that the heartless were getting closer,
she knew she didnt stand a chance.
But out of nowere,a guy apeared,
He looked around 17,
He had one black wing and one white wing,
He was wearing all black,
As he was fighting the heartless Lilli could see that he had long silver hair,
He got out his sord and started slashing the heartless apart,
Soon all the heartless had disserpeard,
The guy walked over to Lilli,
Lilli said in a kind tone"Thanks,Im Lilli by the way"
The guy looked back at her"Im Ziphiroth"
Lilli looked into his eyes,some how she couldnt look away.
It felt like hours she was looking into his eyes but it had only been a few seconds.
Lilli looked away,
She could hear someone calling her name,
She turned around to see Sora running towards her
"Sora?What are you doing here?"Lilli said
"Lilli,I need your help!"
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What will happen next?
Chapter 11: New Hearts
A 16 year old Girl was running through the streets of Dead or Alive as fast as she could,
Behind her was a army of Heartless trying to get her,
She had ran away from toby's castle.......
......Yes,she knew Toby.
She was his Sister,Lilli
Once he had Killed There parents she was the one who had some how called other people and had told them,
He was taken away from Dead or Alive and she was left to rule,
But he was back, that was why she was on the run,
She could not let him push her around like he used to,So she ran away as soon as she heard he was back,
As soon as Toby had heard that she had run away,he had sent these heartless to bring her back,
Yes......Toby was evil,
Before he had killed his parents he had gone to darkness,
So now he could controle heartless.
As Lilli ran she could sence that the heartless were getting closer,
she knew she didnt stand a chance.
But out of nowere,a guy apeared,
He looked around 17,
He had one black wing and one white wing,
He was wearing all black,
As he was fighting the heartless Lilli could see that he had long silver hair,
He got out his sord and started slashing the heartless apart,
Soon all the heartless had disserpeard,
The guy walked over to Lilli,
Lilli said in a kind tone"Thanks,Im Lilli by the way"
The guy looked back at her"Im Ziphiroth"
Lilli looked into his eyes,some how she couldnt look away.
It felt like hours she was looking into his eyes but it had only been a few seconds.
Lilli looked away,
She could hear someone calling her name,
She turned around to see Sora running towards her
"Sora?What are you doing here?"Lilli said
"Lilli,I need your help!"
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What will happen next?
another great chapter, i see you're working together with someone, can't wait for the ext one!
yes i see all! wahaha ooh a penny!
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.....................You two are scary
KH_Fan_4_eva said:
So i hear, but i'm always scary when i'm writing.
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..................Im gonna do another chapter later on today
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