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When I was making this I was like 'Wow this is going to be so good', I look at it now and i'm like '....... it's not terrible'.
 

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could I bother you for the psd.

btw, you kick started with momentum, but your foreground and middleground don't really need changing. I really like your use of cool reds, and blues in this piece. Your background is way too negative and doesn't present a color that makes the existing FG and MG pop bro.

Remember color temperature & value are your friends, and powerful ass tools.
 

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theres definitely potential for a great tag here but right now it looks unfinished tbh.

The black background kinda takes me out of the general 'feel' of the tag(if that makes sense).I suggest you blend it more with the foreground effects.
The smudging has a good flow but right now it's very basic.Lightning,clipping mask and displacement layers would help alot.
 

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I find some parts to be over saturated, but it seems to be the style you want in this. So do what they said, they pretty much nailed it.
 

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could I bother you for the psd.

btw, you kick started with momentum, but your foreground and middleground don't really need changing. I really like your use of cool reds, and blues in this piece. Your background is way too negative and doesn't present a color that makes the existing FG and MG pop bro.

Remember color temperature & value are your friends, and powerful ass tools.

I'll upload the PSD later when I get a chance for you. :)

You should definitely implement some depth into this
but yeah more depth would work here

But i'm so bad at depth D:

i like this a lot. fabulous contrast :3

Why thank you :)

The smudging has a good flow but right now it's very basic.Lightning,clipping mask and displacement layers would help alot.

Believe it or not but there's actually some displace and clipping masks already in there.
 
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