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GuardianOfHearts

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Ok WM. HOW twisted are we talking about here?
And what type of Digimon is it based on? The first, the second, the third, or the fourth? I personally, gave up on the fourth, but enjoyed the third. Bio-merging is cool.
Or will you do something totally original?

Anyway, I'm in the process of brainstorming. I only have a little bit left. Should post the third chapter tomorrow morning.
 
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okay cool

Actually, it's a merge of all the seasons, but it focuses most on the second and fourth. Don't worry though, I'm gonna make the chars from fourth much cooler and take the kids-to-Digimon concept to another level.

It'll mess with all the show storylines some, too. Third season will most likely be altered the most. And it'll be pretty dark, especially, when things really get rolling. Expect somewhere along the lines of MOLAD.
 

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Forgive my double posting, but I finished earlier than I thought. And changed it, which is why you have it now instead of tomorrow. Here it is!

I dashed out of my room, pulling Rhiannon along with me. Down the stairs, through the door, out into the cobbled street. Past the houses and shops, where villages peered out of windows or stood in doorframes to watch us run past, calling out threats or whispering amongst themselves, their voices like the rustling of trees before a storm. I looked back at Rhiannon as we passed a particularly vindictive looking group of people who hissed at us as we rushed by. Her face was emotionless and her eyes were set, tranquil as the sky. She was ready for the storm. The Keyblade was still gripped in her hand. Good. We would need it for the judgement. I turned sharply to the left and ran through a portal, stopping at the end of a passageway before an immense silver-and-bronze door. I gave Rhiannon and I a few moments to catch our breath.

"We’re here." I said, my heart racing from our sprint here and my nervousness.

"I guessed as much." Rhiannon replied, somewhat sarcastically.

I managed to smile at her wryness. But my smile slipped away as I gazed back at the imposing door. Behind it lay her fate, for good or for ill. My heart twisted painfully at the thought.

"Remember Rhiannon, tell them your story. About your world, when it was destroyed. Anything that you think will prove your light to them."

She gave a brisk nod. "I know what to say."

"Good. And don’t worry, I’m coming in with you."

Rhiannon smiled back. "Im glad." she looked down at her Keyblade. "I suppose I should give this to you for now?" she held it forward, slightly reluctantly.

"For now.", I agreed, accepting the weapon. "It would be a bad idea to walk in there with looking like you’re ready for a fight." taking a deep breath, I knocked on the door. A moment later, a voice rang out from behind it.

"Enter."

Immediately, the heavy door swung open. With a last glance at each other, Rhiannon and I stepped inside.

Beyond the door was a large lush arbor, the rays of the setting sun trickling golden through the vivid green leaves from the glass ceiling high above us. Silver runes shone from the surrounding walls, turning copper where the sun hit them. A stone path led from the doorway to the other end of the chamber, stopping a few feet in front of the long, carved granite table where the Council members sat.

"Not exactly where I thought I would be judged." Rhiannon whispered as we walked along the path.

"Those trees by the table are sacred. They represent the evolution of our world. But it is beautiful." I replied quietly as we stopped in front of the Council. With a significant glance in Rhiannon’s direction, I spread my arms out wide and bowed slightly. Rhiannon followed suite, watched carefully by the village leaders. Their old, lined faces reflected the hate and fear of years past. My heart drummed in my chest.

One of the leaders turned to me, a woman whose black hair was veined with frost. Semine was her name.

"Your name?", she asked curtly, her voice like that of a high-pitched crow’s.

"Amera, your Grace, daughter of the late Cylla and Deroc." I replied, lowering my eyes respectively.

Semine nodded and focused her attention on Rhiannon.

"And yours?", she inquired.

"Rhiannon, your Grace. Forgive me, but I have never known my parents."

I grimaced. Luckily, none of the Council noticed. But looking at the expressions on most of their faces, I could guess their thoughts. Probably born from the shadows, a parentless progeny of evil.

"You are here so that we may pass judgement on whether or not you threaten this world. You have been suspected of being tied to the Heartless and the Darkness. Have you anything to say in your defense?"

Rhiannon nodded politely. "I do, your Grace. I ask the Council’s permission to tell the story of my world’s destruction." She didn’t mention the fact that she didn’t yet know what Heartless were.

Several of the Council members exchanged glances before Byron, a broad shouldered man with thick grey hair responded, "Very well. Proceed."

Rhiannon paused to take a deep breath before she began her tale. I listened attentively as she told of prophetic dreams that had warned and guided her, and the night when they had come true, and how she had first encountered the shadowy creatures who had tried to take her heart. Heartless, undoubtably, though she could not yet name them. Like most refugees, she had never heard of such things before her world’s destruction. As she talked, I admired the way she held herself, standing straight and tall, head erect, voice ever strong. It took courage to retell the worst experience of her life to a group of critical strangers who wanted her dead, without faltering in the slightest. To the contrary, her pale face, framed by wavy brown-black hair, was expressionless, save for the determination in her dark, teal-grey eyes. yet as I looked closer, I could see that her shoulders, covered by a dark blue cloak fastened with a rayed star, trembled slightly. Her only current display of grief. As though reacting to it’s mistress’ pent-up emotions, I felt the Keyblade vibrate gently in my hand. I kept my face on Rhiannon, not wanting to draw the Council’s attention. But, as the sky above us darkened and Rhiannon’s tale came to a close, their gaze was inevitable.

"Is that the weapon which she was found holding?" queried Byron.

"Yes my Lord." I responded, thinking, What a stupid question.

"And is it true that she has not yet fought with it?"

"It is, my Lord. I took it from her while she was still unconscious. I returned it for a brief while when she awakened." I said, looking past Byron’s imposing face to gaze at the fire in the wall scones behind the granite table, as thought trying to find comfort in the flames. But they mocked me with flickering laughter.

"Great Council, I humbly request that you grant me the permission to speak freely."

The Council regarded me with intense stares, ever imperturbable. But I noticed that most of them looked more thoughtfully at Rhiannon and I than before, hostile expressions giving way into belief. Or so I hoped.

"Permission granted." Byron answered. I allowed myself a moment to feel relief before I began.

"I do not believe that Rhiannon is the successor for Darkness. I have only theories to support this, but I think that it is true. Everything has two sides. There are the Heartless, who are the embodiments of Darkness. Are not the ones who fight them Light? Twenty-seven years ago, someone came to bring Darkness. Today, someone has come who will bring Light. It is destiny. The proof of that is from her dreams. She was meant to come here to help us. Great Council, I give you a warning; try to kill her, and the forces of fate will stop you."

Out of the corner of my eye, I saw Rhiannon glance at me. She flashed a small, grateful smile. But, looking back at the Council, I saw that they did not look as pleased. Perhaps they thought I had been threatening them. Rhiannon and I stood silently for several minutes as the Council talked in inaudible tones. I shuddered slightly, knowing what would be next. In mere moments, Rhiannon’s judgement would be passed.

Finally, Semine spoke. "The Council has decided."

Rhiannon tensed up, waiting, and I watched the fires laugh.

"Our judgement is death."

DAMN FONT SIZE! O well. I hoped you liked it! THe suspense is killing me at this point.
 

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Okey-dokey then. So let's see.............dark, light, and evil?

Speaking of messes. *looks at fic with surprise* That really wasn't supposed to happen. But my Muse was like "Someone has to die!" And I was like, "No!", and she was like "Yes!" and I started typing and................................

And I thought this chapter was supposed to cure you of the suspense. Ha! That's what happens when you have a Muse like mine.
 

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Ah! That question will soon be answered. If you're lucky, by Friday, if you're not lucky, by Saturday. Usually, I've already started at least something on the next chapter after I finish one. But I mean, this time, it was so random. Rhiannon was supposed to be passed as innocent! Vilg oui, Muse.

Muse: I told you, somone has to die.

Me: But I already made someone die!

Muse: I'll never forgive you for killing off Jaxen. He was a good idea.

Me: I had to. If he had survived, do you KNOW what would have happened?

Muse: It's going to happen anyway. Because I will get him back.

You see what I have to put up with? *locks Muse in cage* AND STAY THERE UNTIL I FINISH THE CHAPTER THAT WASN"T SUPPOSED TO HAPPEN!
 

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O_Owo that is crazzzyyy but i luffed it!!MUST HAVE MORE!!!!*runs around like a syco and then drinks more of the water that i put pixie stick shuger in then runs around more*
whew that was crazzy..i shall now go listen to music untill i decide to do something else...MUST HAVE MORE STORRYY!!!!!!!!!!!!
*runs off to listen to music and try to think of whats gunna happen next in the story*
 

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Muse: What's gonna happen next? Wouldn't you like to know.

Me: Stop harrasing my fic's fans! If you haven't noticed, they're the only ones I've got.

Muse: If you would let me at the story.......

Me: NO!

I'm trying very hard to think of a suitable name for an upcoming character. (Namely, Amera's barely-mentioned brother. He will be important.)
 

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Trying my best to finish crucial chapter. Very hard.

Dammit! My fingers still smell like bleach! (I was bus-ing tables all day) Now my keyboard will smell bad too. Oh well.

My Muse and I have come to an agreement with the whole death/no death thing. We've decided to meet halfway. You'll see. *sighs* Not a happy chappie. (It rhymes!)
 

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Here it is! But don't worry, the BIG thing happens in the next chapter........


Rhiannon-

My breath caught in my throat. A tremor ran down my spine and left me rigid. Thoughts tumbled wildy about my head, so many of them in turmoil that I could barely understand. So many of my feelings were trying to break through all at once.

My defiance was shouting No! No, You can’t! The darkness couldn’t stop me and I won’t let you either!

Anguish, crying, Why is this happening? This can’t be my fate.

Courage, reasoning, There has to be another way. I have to try.

Despair, countering, but what can I possibly do?

And yet everything that I heard myself say in my mind seemed to melt together, blending to form a single sentence before flowing from my mouth in a regret-filled whisper.

"Im sorry, Jaxen."

Amera, though, was not so accepting as me. Besides me, her words erupted powerfully, her voice panic-stricken and near hysteria.

"NO! You can’t do this--I won’t let you do this! She is innocent of any crime! You cannot condemn her to death when she has done nothing!"

"It is the Council’s will.", Byron said in his booming voice, "And it cannot be deterred. She is tied to the Darkness, and death is what she deserves."

Amera’s eyes blazed, golden as fire. "Rhiannon isn’t tied to the Darkness! She has chosen Light! You will be destroying our only hope in the fight against the Heartless!"

There was that word again. The word which struck a cord deep in my mind and reverberated throughout me, and I remembered the sharp pain in my heart and the reach of long, black claws. But my heart would be safe, it seemed. I was to meet my end by the hand of those that I was meant to protect.

I can’t fight against them. I am a Guardian, even if I don’t yet know what it means. I will not spill innocent blood, no matter what.

Yet despite my thoughts, my Keyblade suddenly vanished, leaving Amera empty-handed. As looks of shock rippled through the Council, it just as suddenly materialized in my hand, the smooth metal warm against my skin.

"You see?" it was Semine this time. "She calls the weapon to her. She is a Destroyer, and cannot be trusted! Guards!"

At her command, roughly a dozen soldiers entered through the doors behind us. Amera and I whipped around, but before either of us could act, I found myself being roughly grabbed by strong hands that held my arms in vice-like grips. I struggled, but all in vain, and my Keyblade was pulled out of my hand. The moment it was taken away, I felt a strange sense of loss shudder through me.

"No!" Amera was shouting. "Stop it! You can’t do this--"

Her voice was abruptly drowned out by Byron’s roar:

"Seize her as well, until the execution is done."

Without hesitation, two more soldiers stepped forward, this time to hold Amera back. I saw her wince in pain as her shoulders were held in what I guessed were equally strong grips. In desperation, I tried to twist away from the guard’s grasps, but I succeeded only in making them grip me tighter.

"Stop struggling, fool." one of the soldiers hissed in my ear. "This is your punishment for what you’ve done to us. I will watch you die, and I will laugh." he shook me slightly and spit in my face. I growled in anger and frustration, and shook my head wildy as the soldier’s saliva and words burned into me. Biting back my rage and my tears, I looked up to catch Amera’s gaze as we were led from the courtyard, the Council trailing stately behind us. Her topaz eyes were glassy with tears, and tracks of silver glistened their way down her cheeks. She mouthed a silent "I’m sorry.", and I answered with a slight shake of my head. None of this was her fault. On the contrary, she had undoubtably saved my life before. If I was going to die, I was glad to have known her, brave and headstrong, compassionate and kind, with rosy cheeks and a sweet smile. If only I could have been given the chance to know her more....................

My eyes filled, with tears and with lost hope, and I heard the clear ringing of a bell.





We were marched through the cobblestoned streets, hands tied behind our backs. The soldiers no longer held my arms, but instead surrounded me in a semi-circle, the points of their sharp spears pressing into my back as they urged me on. It was the ultimate defeat. I grimaced, throwing them frustrated scowls.

"You’re making a mistake." I hissed at them.

Quick as lightning, a soldier flipped his spear around and struck the side of my head with the butt of his lance. I winced and glared at him.

"You will soon regret that." I whispered. He snorted, and glared back at me.

"I regret nothing, you foul succubus."

Succubus. The soldier would rue the day he accused me of being a demon. Because I had decided to ignore my tears and focus instead on what was important: Getting out of this mess.

Help me. I whispered mentally to destiny. I don’t know what to do.

The darkness is deepening.
Came the reply. You will be given the chance to fight.

When?

Soon, my Guardian. Very soon. There is something you need to learn.

What is it?

To learn, you need to See.

As destiny’s voice echoed in my mind, I suddenly felt a rush of power flow through me, a kind of power that seemed to open my eyes like never before, expanding my sight above and beyond all that I knew. I faltered for a moment, stumbling, trying to comprehend as the very skies themselves were made clear.

Amidst my stunned thoughts, I felt a few drops of blood trickle down my shoulder as I was once again jabbed by a spear point. "Keep walking." a soldier grumbled.

I politely obliged and made no comments. But I smiled to myself as I listened to the whisperings of fate.





The whole village was assembled at the gates in the Village Square. The bell’s ringing had summoned them, specially for my execution. This was what Amera had whispered before the soldiers pulled me away. The villagers were gathered around a large stone platform, which was adored by a man swathed in black and a single wooden block. I grimaced. Lovely: they planned to behead me. I caught a glimpse of his sword in the light of the torches that had been erected around the square. The stars shimmered above us. I looked up at the pale face of the moon and wondered what destiny had in store for me; I had been promised that I would not die here. I had also been cryptically promised that something momentous was supposed to happen. But when? This was what I anxiously pondered as the soldiers led me roughly up the platform’s stairs.

It’s getting a little late here. I thought, slightly irritated.

I was grabbed by the shoulders and pulled to the wooden block. My hands were untied, but held down.

What’s supposed to happen?

Amera was crying silently in the front of the crowd. To the left of me, the soldier that held my Keyblade had jumped back, dropping my blade to the ground as though it had burned him. I saw it glow slightly where it lay. A now familiar sixth-sense of foreboding filled me. For the second time in two days, I felt that darkness approached. And this time, I knew what was coming. I struggled against the soldier that held me as he tried to draw me down. I longed for my Keyblade.

I’m ready to fight.

No sooner had I sent my thought out, than I was answered with an enormous crash, and the sound of splintering wood. I, and the entire village, turned to the gates in time to see them break open. Through the gap in the stone wall, what looked like shadows came through, black as remnants of midnight. Shadows with long claws and glowing yellow eyes.

I knew what they were.

Heartless.


Stupid font size. But anyway, hope ya liked my cliffhanger, next chappie in a few days........
 
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