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Dead Ascension

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Ok.I was bored so I decided to do this.Tell me if tis good or not k?It's about kingdom hearts and stuff.

It was a sunny day on Destiny islands

Sora = Ok who's idea was it to name the theme for this day "black"?

Riku & Kairi = YOU!!

Sora = oops :p

Riku = Man I sure go for a swim......and maybe I will!!

Riku jumps in the water but after a few minutes comes back out all red.

Riku = You don't wanna get in there it's so hot it could melt cheese.

Sora = Cheese?Hmm.........be right back!

Takes a pot and jumps in the water.

Kairi = SORA!!*runs to the edge of the shore*Riku he'll die if we don't help him out!!

Riku = *after much serious thought*......so?

Sora jumps out of the water holding the pot.

Kairi = Sora!!You ok?

Sora = I made some fondue for us!

Kairi = ........fondue?YOU JUST WENT IN THE WATER TO GET FONDUE!?*takes pot and pours the cheese on sora*

Sora = ARGHHHHH!!!IT BURNS!!

Riku = *Touches fondue and licks it*Mmmmm needs more salt......

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Tell me what do you think about it?
 

GuardianOfHearts

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Were you not the one that said, "Tell me what you think about it."? Yes, you were. And so I was respectful enough to read through the first 'chapter' ((it only took three seconds)) so that I could tell you my opinion, instead of flaming you for no reason. And this will most likely be my last reply, since your posts- I will not count it as a story, not in script format -are hardly enough to waste my time here.

~This has been another public service by the Flamers of the Muffin Army
 
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