welp here goes another one

[Zen]

c&c and all that

 

[Cloud]

I actually really like the first, if only there was better consistency colour-wise. They're all complimentary, but they come across as messy with there being so many of them. I'd love to play around with this

 

[Eric]

I agree with cloud on the first. Also needs to be more sharpened.

 

[Zen]

sharpened!

But yeah, gonna try to use less colors next time. :>