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Sugar Rush

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YAY!! ^^ another template!! ^^ lets see here.. dodo dum de dum. *looks it over* nice... *keeps looking* nothing wrong with it except for the weapon section! ^^ i can deal with the totem not being said and the armor not being said either, but hmm.... *thinks* then again... r you planning on receiving the weapon when you reach the keep? or you gonna pick one out later and just fill in the blank? o.o Just let me know! ^^ but all in all.....

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ACCEPTED!! :D time to add u to my small small list of members and hopefully those edits are made by the others and usagi posts her templates! ^^ and i should have my neutral guy template up by tomorrow!! ^^ should... XD being the key word.... >>
 

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Ah yes, a question i forgot to ask before,

As both the armour and totem would perhaps be given to her as she reached the keep. As a saw her as more of a civilian then anything powerful at the beggining.

As for the weapon, i was leaning towards a simple weapon that changes with suit her armor, but alas i forgot to ask previously if that was allowed or not?
 

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hmmm.... *thinks* not really.. >> it should be a weapon that they can have whether they are in armor or not.... considering the state of the world... XD they might need them at a moments notice and be caught unawares without their armor on..... XD but its up to you what the weapon is. ^^ just as you said, not something tooo powerful as she is just starting out. lol.

and mini update... XD i should have the template up sometime by the weekend or early next week... >> getting on this laptop is a little hard considering my work schedule and what not.... XD
 

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I added the infomation in regards to the weapon, as well as the armour. i will annouce the totem a bit later on, so i dont keep changing my mind and confusing everyone.

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Haha, you make me smile Sugar,

Also, will Darvin be controlled by all of us, or are we waiting for someone to take his role?
 

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srry for taking forever on this post... xD but it was all just a matter of getting enough time to put it together with my hetic army life... xD

Name: Chris Tigerin
Sex: Male.
Age: 21
What they look like:
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doesn't have the collar though, and the tatoo is actually a tiger. xD
What they look like in their armor:
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but doesn't have that giant sword thingy.... xD and no cape either... >>
Personality: Tends to be a little shy around women/girls but otherwise has a outgoing personality. Tends to slack a little when working, but pulls through with whatever needs to be done.
Bio: Chris wasn't sure exactly how old he was when the world had plunged into the chaos with the end of modern science, but he remembers losing both of his parents during the aftermath. Thus an orphan from an early age, he had to learn how to survive on his own until a loving family took him in. Soon after he became friends with Darvin and Ashley. Being the oldest out of the three, he was sometimes put naturally in charge of their little adventures until the plague struck their home.

What was strange about the plague from what he could find out was that it didn't leave any dead bodies around. But alas, as soon as somebody became ill with the disease, they were carted off to some random place outside the village never to be seen. Right around Ashley's 19th birthday, he overheard a couple of travelers talking about the war to the north, between the Darkling Lords and the Spectral Knights and how they used magic to solve their problems. Soon after, Ashley came to him and Darvin, pleading with them to go north with her to find a cure, for she had found out that some man could give out cures for plagues. Or something similar. He had agreed, somewhat curious about if indeed this Merklynn indeed was a wizard.

Totem(the mystical beast or animal they can change into): Tiger. :p
Side(Spectral Knights or Darkling Lords. The neutral one shall be controlled by me... >>): Neutral!! ^^
Ability(which is to say, if they have a banner or not.): he's gonna get a banner during the trials and he's going to get Flight... xD i will explain all in my posts. when we start. :p
Weapon(s): For now has nothing. xD will pick one up while traveling through the traps. :p

and hopefully now everybody else fixes their templates and whatnot... XD and also that we get a few more people... xD
 
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Name: Dariosal Penwat

Sex: Male

Age: 25

What they look like:
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What they look like in their armor:
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Except armor is red where green and black where yellow

Personality: Rather feirce, brave, and protective in battle, but outside is dark and gloomy. He doesn't get too attached to anybody. More of a leader than a follower. He despises those who pick on those lower than them. He strives to not let anybody die on his side in his presence.

Bio: When the great civilization was still thriving, he was a gaurdian/assasin. He used guns, then, not swords. Then the event happened. He continued doing that, picking up swordsmanship, which he had been in a swordsman club as a teen, so it was easy. For payment, he asked for not just money, but news.

He and his wife- Niemoto Penwat - lived safely in the forest in a burrow he dug with a drill he stole from a target. They bought food from Merchants who he found while he was doing his job.

Finally, they heared the news of the Great Kingdom of New Valarak, just 10 miles away, they set up camp in burrows he dug every night.

But they were attacked, on the first day. Somebody whose brother he had killed. The younger brother had been following him through merchants the couple had bought from. They fought until finally he killed the brother.

Two days later, the brother came back with another brother. This one looked the same. But neither had any injuries. "Triplets." Niemoto said.
"Run, Niemoto! Run as fast as you can, go straight to the kingdom" By now they were a mere mile away.
One of the twins spoke. "We all planned on taking you 3 on 1. But Niroji ran away at night. So incompetent."
"How 'bout one on one. I'll only use one katana this time."
"As you wish" The second twin went to the side.
Dariosal fought the twin for what seemed like four hours.
Finally, he ran into the forest and dug under a tree as fast as he could.
The twin figured it was simply an entry way to a Drill Monkey's hole.
Dariosal sprung up and hit the twin straight down the spine, killing him.

He returned to the clearing where the twin had been.

"Your turn!" He shouted.
Nobody answered.

He figured he ran away, so he ran toward the kingdom once more.

About half a mile from the kingdom, he saw a filled-in ditch. He saw blood nearby. His blood ran cold. The twin. Niemoto. He dug it up.

It was Niemoto.

He fell to his knees.

This was his fault.

He should have fought them 2 on 2.

He stayed there in silent vigil for two days.

He cried the entire time.

He realized he would make her death in vain if he didn't kill the twin.

He hunted and got water from a stream nearby.

Four days later, the man showed up. Dariosal could hear him right above him.
He dug a hole right under the twin, using a split to make it safe for himself. Under the trap he made spikes with his katanas.
The twin fell through and died.

Dariosal had buried Niemoto under the ice-cold stream to keep her from decomposing. So he dug her up and ran to the kingdom.

He told the king all that had happened and made sure she got a proper burial ceremony. He attended the burial and afterwards joined the Spectral Knights to make sure the rest of the kingdom was safe. He swore never to become attached to somebody again.....

Totem: Phoenix Griffin- A Griffin with phoenix characteristics instead of the characteristics of that of an eagle. It can breath fire, use it's tears to heal, and is immune to fire.
Side: Spectral Knights
Ability: Spontaneous Combustion- Dariosal's eyes turn to that of a Phoenix, he cries for the loss of his beloved wife, the tears of the phoenix making his clothes and himself fireproof for 15 minutes. His pores expand and all the unnecessary flammable chemicals in his body. (I.e. Methane, CO^2, Oils in the skin etc.) flow out and a strong neurological electrical pulse ignites it. The phoenix tears make it so all he gets is the equavalent of a major sunburn.
"As we grieve for those we've lost, we remember their sacrifices. We pray and act so their deaths were not in vain. But in truth and all reality, they are never dead. The phoenix bursts into flames and rises from its ashes. Humans die in a blaze of glory and rise from the ashes as memory, inspiration, and passion. That is the way of the circle of life!"
Weapon(s):
Tunnel Drill- Not for attacks so much as sneak attacks and traps. Not used much in battle.
Firefang- A katana that is made of a super-strong carbon-fiber-steel alloy - 100 times stronger tan steel- and is hollow with pores like the human skin so that he can fill it with gasoline and when it hits against another hard material, it sparks and bursts into flames.
 
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Alright finished my first template and will hopefully have the next one done soon enough. Oh but first, Ralor please make use of the spoiler function and hide those things so that they don't take up so much space.

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Name - Derek Kanter

Sex - Male

Age - 23

What they look like -
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What they look like in their armor -
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Personality - Derek isn't a hateful guy. Most of the time. For the most part he is content with simply following orders. He has never had the urge to be a leader and is content to allow others to make the difficult decisions that could potentially be disastrous. He is willing to take control of a situation if he sees the need is great enough or suits his means but otherwise doesn't see the point in it.

Derek has never been in love, and he doesn't see any reason to change that, love i just an emotion that ties one down. It presents opportunities of weakness that can harm ones efforts and endanger ones life. Derek has no living relatives and has no desire to find out otherwise, he finds family just as useless as love.

Derek has learned how to separate himself from his situation no matter how grave or dangerous it may be. He has learned that if one cuts themselves off from their emotions it allows them to fight and think more clearly without the hindrance of worrying about another or oneself. He has been known to make some rather risky choices in these instances which almost cost him his job. He does not however leave himself detached for long. Just long enough to remove himself from the situation which has deemed the need for such measures. He has found that prolonged detachment can cause him to make too many unnecessary chances which have led to his unemployment on previous jobs.

He has been known to have moments of kindness however. It is in the rather small things however, he refuses to do anything to large that is nice or else people might begin to expect it of him. Though he will rescue the occasional cat from a tree and bandage up a little girls knee after she fell.

Bio - Derek was born to a family of moderate wealth. They were by no means poor but they couldn't spend whatever they wanted, they could make ends meet with a bit extra left over for something fun. Derek was a happy child and enjoyed playing with the other children in the neighboring village. He was known for being one of the sweetest kids around.

Until, that is, everything went wrong. The Spectral Knights had decided that their borders should be grown to save the people that lived under the rule of Darkstorm. The fools believed that they were saving the "oppressed" and "mistreated", so in order to solve this problem they decided that Darkstorm and his Darkling Knights must be destroyed for "the betterment of the people". And in order to do this they were willing to do anything it took. Including burning their village to the ground.

The Spectral Knights came in the dark, they killed all the sentries and then started with the nearby outposts. They cut off all communication with the other villages and then started burning. The people fought back of course, who wouldn't? But the Spectral Fools didn't see it that way and so slaughtered them all in the name of "peace". Derek was one of the few survivors of that massacre. The Darkling Knights came by soon after when they saw the smoke and managed to fight the Spectral Knights off of their land. But by then Derek had lost everything.

He spent weeks barely able to live with himself, he couldn't eat or sleep, couldn't think about anything but the ones he had lost. It was then that he realized that the only way he would be free from this madness and be able to get his revenge upon the Spectral Knights was if he could fight. So he learned how to use a sword. It wasn't easy but it turned out to be therapeutic to him in a way, he could release his emotions while he fought making him feel less tormented. He fought in this way for some time as he honed his skills until he no longer felt troubled by his losses, in fact he felt good about them.

He became a mercenary for many years after that, learning to better his skills and make a name for himself. His fighting style often led him to disaster on some jobs, because he would be so unconcerned with anything except for the fight that the person he was protecting would end up getting killed. Later he came to join the Darkling Knights, the same group that saved him many years before. He quickly moved up in the ranks as he could follow orders to the letter but was able to improvise if the plan failed.He never questioned his masters and fought valiantly against the Spectral Knights, he is an invaluable part of the Darkling Lords.He ascended the mountain to the treacherous keep since he was told to. He watched many fall but he managed to keep himself alive due to his quick reflexes, speed, and his ability to dodge nearly anything that came near him.

Totem - A fox

Side - Darkling Lords

Ability - None

Weapon(s) -

Black Knight - A sword with a blade made of a black alloy. It never chips and seems to never need sharpening. It can cut through things that most swords can't even make a dent in. No one is quite sure where he got it and he does not plan on telling. Though some suspect that he acquired it on one of his mercenary jobs as part of a highly illegal reward.

Lifes Plight - A dagger that has an eery green glow to it's blade. The blade is coated in a deadly poison that can kill its victims in less then an hour if the antidote is not administered. Derek is immune to the poison as he used to get cut by it numerous times when fighting, the constant use of the antidote has built up an immunity to the poison itself. Many have tried to find this poison but none have succeeded. It is again believed that his supplier is far less then legal and found during his mercenary days.
 
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Name: Renn Gurski

Sex: Male

Age: 19

Appearance: Renn is a tall young man even for his age. Renn stands at about 5'8 and He has forest green eyes, Looking at him seems to remind you of a old forest while his eyes are a forest green his hair is colored like that of the deepest bark brown. His skin is a light peach and that seems to be a compliment to almost any color he wears but he usually wears a black T-shirt and a red hooded jacket his hood is almost always up... He also wears blue jeans and nice black and white sneakers...

Appearance W/ armor: Okay, When armored his hood comes off and his Jacket turns into a long Red Trench coat with black guards on the shoulders, and he wears black armored legs and shoes to match his black shirt that's now long sleeved. He also wears a Large arm gauntlet that extends all the way up his left arm and sleeve of his trench coat up to the shoulder guard, while his right arm is unarmored to allow flexibility to strike. His armored arm is for crushing and defending while his left is for decimation.

Personality: Renn's overly friendly and intelligent but his anger is pretty much unrivaled. You don't want to get this guy pissed off... He has a good sense of honor and dicipline, and tends to act like the right hand man or adviser... giving them the choice to how they should attack Etc... Sadly he's always felt lonely and is prone to being a playboy sometimes because he's so desperate...

Bio: He was an orphan taken in by one person who was though to be the greediest, most good-for-nothing, stupid person in the kingdom... he was the richest Drill miner in the kingdom, he's the guy who digs up gold, minerals, and gems and puts them up for sale for outrageus prices, he's made quite a bit of money doing it and Renn was his apprentice because if he did his work, he would expect all the love this man could give... Until the war struck... Renn's 'father' James was murdered by Darkling lords because he was a major supplier to the spectral knights, right in front of Renn's eyes. After that... The man who murdered James came up and said: "Time for you to join the family Business son." As it turned out both his Mother and Father were Darkling lords... in his rage Renn then picked up a nearby blade recently finished by James for the knights and killed both of them. But they were only servants of the real Darkling lords...

After James' assasination, Renn then went to join the spectral knights to ask his father to be buried... Shortly after he joined them to gain revenge on his Father's behalf....

Totem: Ambush Venom cobra, Theses snakes are about the size of a regular Cobra, but have venom that could kill you in a mere hour and a half and the only way to beat it is to have natural immunity from birth because the Venom attacks the Antibodies to prevent resistance to the poisoning bacteria alongside the venom. It's cobra neck is black in the center with Red surrounding it that crests onto the back of the neck as well. The lower parts below the neck are black and the hood over his head blends in over the eyes and around the mouth to make his head look red all around.

Side: Spectral knights

Ability: Fear-Serpentophobias:
If hit by the initial strike, the opponent starts to hallucinate that it's being attacked by a Basilisk... but the hallucination can be broken if the person suffering from the attack calls up the courage to strike the hallucination. This attack is only used for a distraction usually while Renn finishes them off...

Weapon: Cobra's blade, A blade that has a erie silver glow around the blade that is silver as well with a green snake's eye emerald in the pommel that is black with a red handle.
 
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aye aye aye... xD where the heck did all these templates come from? XD maybe i should've posted mine sooner... o.o lol. and more to come says usagi? XD oh boy.. >> i better find shelter if they come in three's... xD

but *ahem* let me see... first up is ralor... :D dodododum... *scans it over* bio seems good... but this part here...


Totem: Drill Lion (Panthera Leo Bohrus) - When food in the plains got scarce do to humans hunting again, Lions evolved Drills into their tails so they could hunt underground food like moles, prairiedogs, merecats, and other animals that adapted to living underground. The drills grow/shrink with emotional changes.
Side: Spectral Knights
Ability: Giga Drill Break- Tail Drill becomes a size that makes Dariosal pale in comparison. It spins, making enough energy to propell him through the air/water/earth toward enemies, can hit many enemies before stopping.

is not going to work sadly.. x.x maybe i should explain the span of time a bit more... xD From the time that the world sinks into chaos to the time the two sides go get their magic's is like... >> ten years or so... xD so yes, i applaud your effort in having an animal evolve... >> but in that short of a time period for the animals to do it naturally... xD is pushing it... and plus... >> leoric is already a lion in a sense, so we can't have two good lions running around and have the common folk get confused... xD and the banner magic isn't going to fly because their animal forms can't use magics... x.x so pick another one please... other than that. its good! ^^

next up is usagi! :D *scans her post* Everything is in order expect for the color of the fox.. xD as i had thought i had stated in a earlier post... the color of the animals is either blue or green. >> green if your apart of the darkling Lords, blue if your a Spectral knight... xD other than that usagi he's golden!! and woot! my first baddie! :D hope to get some more... xD

and lets see here... the third and final template is.. Shinra!! ^^ nice to see that you could find this rp! ^^ *scans it over* hmm-hmm... next time space out the template so i can tell the sections apart.. xD but lets see... *continues to read* everything looks good and this part though may have to go... >>

When Renn goes Viper... it turns into a tail blade to slice opponents.

having the venomous snake is cool with the poison and whatnot, but i can't also have a snake with a dagger attached to its tail... XD so the dagger will just remain being a 'human' weapon while the snake is cool as is without it!! ^^ so usagi, and shinra your both in!! ^^ those mistakes are pretty small, so i can let them be, just as long as you guys mind the corrections i have pointed out!! ^^

and ralor! ^^ just change the totem and the banner some and i give it another go! ^^ and where in the world did wolfe poof off to? XD i haven't seen hide or hair of that guy in awhile... xD and ugh.. xO this was a long post to type up... xD
 

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Wolfe got food poisoning from bad fish so he has been sick for a while.

And okk I go edit out the black part.

And yes there is more to come, I has a second template!!! Well I have a second template just as soon as I can find a way to make it without me feeling like it is just overly cliche.
 

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And thanks for the approval I changed the template to make it look clearer and modified the temp as you wished
 

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ur all welcome!! ^^ and that's good to hear about wolfe... xD i hope wolfe gets better!! ^^ and now... .i had just realized that a jubjub had posted a template... xD where the heck did jubby poof off to? XD gah.. >> along with axel for that matter... xD he had said he was gonna post one... xD but never did... oh well. he will sooner or later! ^^ and jub will come back sooner or later... :D

but alas!! ^^ i think i haz a possible start date... xD but i haz to think on when to announce it... xD more info to come!! XD
 

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I won't be posting as I expected I would so I won't post as much... I'm going up to my aunty's
 

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is not going to work sadly.. x.x maybe i should explain the span of time a bit more... xD From the time that the world sinks into chaos to the time the two sides go get their magic's is like... >> ten years or so... xD so yes, i applaud your effort in having an animal evolve... >> but in that short of a time period for the animals to do it naturally... xD is pushing it... and plus... >> leoric is already a lion in a sense, so we can't have two good lions running around and have the common folk get confused... xD and the banner magic isn't going to fly because their animal forms can't use magics... x.x so pick another one please... other than that. its good! ^^

the color of the animals is either blue or green
1. Fixed
2. D'aww but I wanted a red one with mah Phoenix Griffin. D:
 

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ok, shinra good to know! ^^

and ralor.. hmm... *looks at renewed template* much better!! ^^ though now im a bit confuzzled... :/

Ability: Spontaneous Combustion- Dariosal literally explodes

is this his banner ability that you wish him to use instead of a custom? ._. or r u still somehow giving him a magical ability to use while he's in animal form? XD please enlighten me on this... xD otherwise ur in!! ^^ if it turns out to be the magical ability thingy.. >> i'll let u use it as a banner type deal... xD but i would still rethink the ability itself unless you want your character to die really really early in the rp... xD cause all my mind keeps coming up with is him blowing up and not being reborn... xD but i could be wrong... << >>
 
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