I have been doing alot of writing and would like to share my Pokemon Fic I wrote with you guys. Before I contiue I would like to get good revies.
I got some reviews saying it was good and some ok. I''l try to work on the grammar if I get good reviews I'll start n chapter 3.
Tyson’s Journey
Chapter 1 Turtwig! Go!
The fresh scent of flowers filled air the as Tyson made his way towards Prof. Rowan’s lab on the outskirt of Sandgem Town. It was a beautiful day as many Pokemon were out today taking advantage of the good weather. Wild Bidoof were everywhere searching for food as a flock of Starly flew over head roaming the vast skies. Tyson continued to walk down the trail where he could see Prof. Rowan’s lab in sight.
Tyson could hardly believe that he was about to go start his on Pokemon Journey. He had read many magazines about trainers starting their journey and becoming expert Pokemon Trainers. His day had finally come to him obtain his first Pokemon and start his adventure. Tyson hurried along the trail to Prof. Rowan’s lab and finally came to a large white building. At the entrance of the lab was a tall elderly man with a white bread along with his bread he had white hair and was wherein a long white lab coat with brown pants. Tyson apache the man slightly scared of his appearance as he had a mean look on his face.
“Who might you be young men” said the guy with his deep voice.
“I’m Tyson from TwinLeaf Town” said Tyson nervously. “I came to get my starter from Prof.Rowan.”
“Well you came to the right place” said the man laughing at how nervous Tyson was. “I’m Prof. Rowan
Pokemon Researcher.”
“Your Prof.Rowan” said Tyson as he started to get more excited. “I read about you in books you look like nothing the books describe about you.”
A sweat drop appeared on the back of Prof.Rowan head as he heard Tyson go on talking.
“Let’s not waste time talking how about we get you your starter Pokemon now” said Prof. Rowan as he entered the lab.
Tyson quickly followed Prof. Rowan into the lab and was amaze at what he saw. Flashing machines were everywhere analyzing data and many of Prof. Rowan assistant were walking through room through room. Prof. Rowan led Tyson through many rooms as they finally came to what looked like a check up room for Pokemon. In the middle of the room was a small white table with three Pokeballs on it.
“Each of these contains Pokemon given to new trainers in Sinnoh” said Prof. Rowan. ”The Pokeball to your left contains Chimchar a Fire Pokemon.” “The Pokeball in the middle contains Piplup a Water Pokemon.” “Finally the last Pokeball contains Turtwig a Grass Pokemon.” “Each of these Pokemon have their own strengths and weakness so choose wisly Tyson” said Prof. Rowan
Tyson could hardly decide on which Pokemon to choose from as he looked aitches to choose one. Tyson wanted a strong and trustworthy Pokemon that would stand by his side. Tyson had finally decided he quickly pick up the Pokeball containing Turtwig the Grass Pokemon.
“I choose Turtwig Prof. Rowan” said Tyson happily.
“Good Choice” said Prof Rowan. “Through out adventures you will find many Pokemon through the region of Sinnoh. “So you will need these” said Prof. Rowan handing Tyson a small red device and 5 Pokeballs. “The Pokedex will help you Identify Pokemon you don’t know while Pokeballs help you capture them.”
Tyson place the 5 Pokeballs into his black backpack and his Pokedex into this black jeans left pocket.
“Well I better get going” said Tyson. “Thanks for the advice Prof. Rowan I’ll try my best to become a great trainer “said Tyson has he exited the room.
“Good Luck” Tyson said Prof. Rowan “Try not to get into any trouble.”
The sun was still shining as Tyson exited Prof. Rowan lab and was aitches to try out his new Pokemon. Tyson first stop was going to be Route 201 as he wanted to do so training there before heading to Sandgem Town. Tyson grabbed Turtwig Pokeballs from his pocket and tosses it into the air releasing a familiar white. When the light disappeared a small green turtle like with a brown shell and a leaf on top of its head was left in its place.
“Turtwig” said the Pokemon loudly. It quickly took notice of its surrounding as it seemed a little scared of where it was.
“It’s okay Turtwig there’s nothing to be afraid of” said Tyson. “I’m your new trainer.”
Turtwig started to get more relaxed as he was glad someone was with him.
“Turtwig” said the Pokemon softly.
“Alright Turtwig let’s get moving” said Tyson as he continued down the path to Route 201 with Turtwig quickly following behind.
I got some reviews saying it was good and some ok. I''l try to work on the grammar if I get good reviews I'll start n chapter 3.
Tyson’s Journey
Chapter 1 Turtwig! Go!
The fresh scent of flowers filled air the as Tyson made his way towards Prof. Rowan’s lab on the outskirt of Sandgem Town. It was a beautiful day as many Pokemon were out today taking advantage of the good weather. Wild Bidoof were everywhere searching for food as a flock of Starly flew over head roaming the vast skies. Tyson continued to walk down the trail where he could see Prof. Rowan’s lab in sight.
Tyson could hardly believe that he was about to go start his on Pokemon Journey. He had read many magazines about trainers starting their journey and becoming expert Pokemon Trainers. His day had finally come to him obtain his first Pokemon and start his adventure. Tyson hurried along the trail to Prof. Rowan’s lab and finally came to a large white building. At the entrance of the lab was a tall elderly man with a white bread along with his bread he had white hair and was wherein a long white lab coat with brown pants. Tyson apache the man slightly scared of his appearance as he had a mean look on his face.
“Who might you be young men” said the guy with his deep voice.
“I’m Tyson from TwinLeaf Town” said Tyson nervously. “I came to get my starter from Prof.Rowan.”
“Well you came to the right place” said the man laughing at how nervous Tyson was. “I’m Prof. Rowan
Pokemon Researcher.”
“Your Prof.Rowan” said Tyson as he started to get more excited. “I read about you in books you look like nothing the books describe about you.”
A sweat drop appeared on the back of Prof.Rowan head as he heard Tyson go on talking.
“Let’s not waste time talking how about we get you your starter Pokemon now” said Prof. Rowan as he entered the lab.
Tyson quickly followed Prof. Rowan into the lab and was amaze at what he saw. Flashing machines were everywhere analyzing data and many of Prof. Rowan assistant were walking through room through room. Prof. Rowan led Tyson through many rooms as they finally came to what looked like a check up room for Pokemon. In the middle of the room was a small white table with three Pokeballs on it.
“Each of these contains Pokemon given to new trainers in Sinnoh” said Prof. Rowan. ”The Pokeball to your left contains Chimchar a Fire Pokemon.” “The Pokeball in the middle contains Piplup a Water Pokemon.” “Finally the last Pokeball contains Turtwig a Grass Pokemon.” “Each of these Pokemon have their own strengths and weakness so choose wisly Tyson” said Prof. Rowan
Tyson could hardly decide on which Pokemon to choose from as he looked aitches to choose one. Tyson wanted a strong and trustworthy Pokemon that would stand by his side. Tyson had finally decided he quickly pick up the Pokeball containing Turtwig the Grass Pokemon.
“I choose Turtwig Prof. Rowan” said Tyson happily.
“Good Choice” said Prof Rowan. “Through out adventures you will find many Pokemon through the region of Sinnoh. “So you will need these” said Prof. Rowan handing Tyson a small red device and 5 Pokeballs. “The Pokedex will help you Identify Pokemon you don’t know while Pokeballs help you capture them.”
Tyson place the 5 Pokeballs into his black backpack and his Pokedex into this black jeans left pocket.
“Well I better get going” said Tyson. “Thanks for the advice Prof. Rowan I’ll try my best to become a great trainer “said Tyson has he exited the room.
“Good Luck” Tyson said Prof. Rowan “Try not to get into any trouble.”
The sun was still shining as Tyson exited Prof. Rowan lab and was aitches to try out his new Pokemon. Tyson first stop was going to be Route 201 as he wanted to do so training there before heading to Sandgem Town. Tyson grabbed Turtwig Pokeballs from his pocket and tosses it into the air releasing a familiar white. When the light disappeared a small green turtle like with a brown shell and a leaf on top of its head was left in its place.
“Turtwig” said the Pokemon loudly. It quickly took notice of its surrounding as it seemed a little scared of where it was.
“It’s okay Turtwig there’s nothing to be afraid of” said Tyson. “I’m your new trainer.”
Turtwig started to get more relaxed as he was glad someone was with him.
“Turtwig” said the Pokemon softly.
“Alright Turtwig let’s get moving” said Tyson as he continued down the path to Route 201 with Turtwig quickly following behind.
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