This is my first fic, so it's probably going to suck or not be as good as the other Fan-Fic's. Please do not flame
“...” = Talking
‘…’= Thinking
[…]= My Commentary
Font= Disembodied Voice
~Twilight Hearts~
Intro:
“Zeph, Zeph. Wake up stupid!” A sudden pain hit the boy on the side of his head.
“What was that for, Regan?” asked the boy wearing a white, unzipped jacket over a red T- shirt and baggy pants. The boy arose to his feet to meet an angry looking girl wearing a bandana on her head and tang-top with flowers and regular jeans for pants.
“Do you always slack off? You were supposed to meet us by the beach on the other end of the island an hour ago.”
“I guess I just lost track of time”
“Is that the best excuse you’ve got?” asked Regan as she hit Zeph over the side of the head with her fist. “Whatever, just get your sorry butt moving. Your sister thought you went swimming and got eaten by a shark and we would find you mutilated body washed up along the shore.”
“Hph.” he chuckled “That would haft to be about the worst thing to happen on her birthday. I should just tell her that nothing will ever happen to me.”
“You know, you shouldn’t be so cocky”
“Why not?”
“Because, it makes for bad character, but then again no one cares about your character. Well come on, get your butt moving. It’s getting late and we’ve got a long walk across Dreamer Island.”
-1 hour later-
“Who knew that this island was that big” said Regan as she walked along side Zeph on the sea shore. “My legs are sore all over.”
“You better get used to it, because we’re going to be stuck on this stupid island for a long time.”
‘Man, he’s really sick of this island. He’s been stuck on this island all his life. I guess you can’t blame him.’
“Stop day dreaming Regan. We’re here.”
Zeph ran atop a giant pile of sand to see a boy in a T-shirt and jeans and a small girl standing with blonde hair standing right beside him.
“We didn’t think that you guys would ever get here” said the boy
“It’s only a small delay. You’re usually even later than me, Brendan” Zeph said with a hint of sarcasm.
Brendan wore a red T-shirt and baggy pants with lots of zippers. The girl wore a pink skirt with a yellow T-shirt.
“Big brother” yelled the girl. “I thought that you were in trouble”
“What kind of trouble do you think I would have gotten into on your birthday? You need to stop worrying Shelby; I’m always going to be there for you.” Zeph said in a sincere tone
“Sorry to ruin this moment, but thanks yours and Regan’s slacking off, it’s more than a small delay. It’s already sunset.” complained Brendan
“What did I do?” whined Regan while she was still trying to get over the sand dune. “You guys told me to go get him!”
“Not much we can do to change that so we might as well go home," said Zeph. "Mom should have dinner done by now. Come on Shelby, we need to get home before it gets dark.”
“Okay Zeph. See you guys tomorrow.” said Brendan in a now cheerful voice
As Zeph and Shelby began walking home, it got dark and they started talking.”
“So what does it feel like being seven?” asked Zeph
“I feel older and that’s about it.” Replied Shelby
“Really, because when-.”
“Look, look. A falling star.” Interrupted Shelby “Ooh, and another one, and over there. Man, there are a lot of falling stars tonight.”
“That’s odd. There are hardly any shooting stars around here. Whoa, we better pick up the pace.” He said while looking at his watch. He grabbed Shelby’s hand and started to run home.
-The Next Morning-
“Come on Zeph. We don’t want to be late again.” Said Shelby as she jumped up and down on Zeph’s bed. “Were going to be late again, and its going to be your entire fault!”
“Okay, Okay” moaned Zeph as he arose from his bed, took a shower, shoved a piece of toast down his throat; almost suffocated from choking on it, and then brushed his teeth. [He cares a lot about dental hygiene] “I’m ready. Let’s get moving before we get a scolding from Regan. You know how nasty her temper can get.”
“Yeah, I know. Once I think I saw her spit fire” yelled Shelby as the two walked out the door into the bright, summer sunlight of Dreamer Island. The two talked about this and that and a variety of things as they walked across the island.
“So that’s where you think babies come from? Babies fall from the sky?”
“Yeah, of course. Where else would they come from?”
“Man; you’ve got a lot to learn.”
“Fine; you believe what you want to believe and I’ll believe what I want to believe.” said Shelby in a persnickety voice.
“We’re only a quick sprint away from the docks. Race ya!” Zeph sprinted up and ran to the dock which was clearly visible.
“Don’t run so fast. I can barely keep up.” Shelby whined while trying to keep up with Zeph.
“Bout time you got here” said Brendan as Zeph walked onto the dock to meet bolth Brendan and Regan.
“Let me guess: You forgot to set your alarm last night.” Badgered Regan with glaring eyes. Zeph walked over to the side of the dock and leaned on the guard rail.
“Well you know how I am I like to take-” the old rusty guard rail snapped and Zeph fell deep into the bright blue sea.
To be continued…
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It may seem like I’m copying KH, but it’s supposed to be somewhat of a parallel to the beginning of KH, but then my story will branch out and be a complete opposite. It will only show 1 world that has appeared in the KH series. Please do not flame because of this. If there is something you think is wrong with my writing or story or i'm not writing in detail, please tell me
“...” = Talking
‘…’= Thinking
[…]= My Commentary
Font= Disembodied Voice
~Twilight Hearts~
Intro:
“Zeph, Zeph. Wake up stupid!” A sudden pain hit the boy on the side of his head.
“What was that for, Regan?” asked the boy wearing a white, unzipped jacket over a red T- shirt and baggy pants. The boy arose to his feet to meet an angry looking girl wearing a bandana on her head and tang-top with flowers and regular jeans for pants.
“Do you always slack off? You were supposed to meet us by the beach on the other end of the island an hour ago.”
“I guess I just lost track of time”
“Is that the best excuse you’ve got?” asked Regan as she hit Zeph over the side of the head with her fist. “Whatever, just get your sorry butt moving. Your sister thought you went swimming and got eaten by a shark and we would find you mutilated body washed up along the shore.”
“Hph.” he chuckled “That would haft to be about the worst thing to happen on her birthday. I should just tell her that nothing will ever happen to me.”
“You know, you shouldn’t be so cocky”
“Why not?”
“Because, it makes for bad character, but then again no one cares about your character. Well come on, get your butt moving. It’s getting late and we’ve got a long walk across Dreamer Island.”
-1 hour later-
“Who knew that this island was that big” said Regan as she walked along side Zeph on the sea shore. “My legs are sore all over.”
“You better get used to it, because we’re going to be stuck on this stupid island for a long time.”
‘Man, he’s really sick of this island. He’s been stuck on this island all his life. I guess you can’t blame him.’
“Stop day dreaming Regan. We’re here.”
Zeph ran atop a giant pile of sand to see a boy in a T-shirt and jeans and a small girl standing with blonde hair standing right beside him.
“We didn’t think that you guys would ever get here” said the boy
“It’s only a small delay. You’re usually even later than me, Brendan” Zeph said with a hint of sarcasm.
Brendan wore a red T-shirt and baggy pants with lots of zippers. The girl wore a pink skirt with a yellow T-shirt.
“Big brother” yelled the girl. “I thought that you were in trouble”
“What kind of trouble do you think I would have gotten into on your birthday? You need to stop worrying Shelby; I’m always going to be there for you.” Zeph said in a sincere tone
“Sorry to ruin this moment, but thanks yours and Regan’s slacking off, it’s more than a small delay. It’s already sunset.” complained Brendan
“What did I do?” whined Regan while she was still trying to get over the sand dune. “You guys told me to go get him!”
“Not much we can do to change that so we might as well go home," said Zeph. "Mom should have dinner done by now. Come on Shelby, we need to get home before it gets dark.”
“Okay Zeph. See you guys tomorrow.” said Brendan in a now cheerful voice
As Zeph and Shelby began walking home, it got dark and they started talking.”
“So what does it feel like being seven?” asked Zeph
“I feel older and that’s about it.” Replied Shelby
“Really, because when-.”
“Look, look. A falling star.” Interrupted Shelby “Ooh, and another one, and over there. Man, there are a lot of falling stars tonight.”
“That’s odd. There are hardly any shooting stars around here. Whoa, we better pick up the pace.” He said while looking at his watch. He grabbed Shelby’s hand and started to run home.
-The Next Morning-
“Come on Zeph. We don’t want to be late again.” Said Shelby as she jumped up and down on Zeph’s bed. “Were going to be late again, and its going to be your entire fault!”
“Okay, Okay” moaned Zeph as he arose from his bed, took a shower, shoved a piece of toast down his throat; almost suffocated from choking on it, and then brushed his teeth. [He cares a lot about dental hygiene] “I’m ready. Let’s get moving before we get a scolding from Regan. You know how nasty her temper can get.”
“Yeah, I know. Once I think I saw her spit fire” yelled Shelby as the two walked out the door into the bright, summer sunlight of Dreamer Island. The two talked about this and that and a variety of things as they walked across the island.
“So that’s where you think babies come from? Babies fall from the sky?”
“Yeah, of course. Where else would they come from?”
“Man; you’ve got a lot to learn.”
“Fine; you believe what you want to believe and I’ll believe what I want to believe.” said Shelby in a persnickety voice.
“We’re only a quick sprint away from the docks. Race ya!” Zeph sprinted up and ran to the dock which was clearly visible.
“Don’t run so fast. I can barely keep up.” Shelby whined while trying to keep up with Zeph.
“Bout time you got here” said Brendan as Zeph walked onto the dock to meet bolth Brendan and Regan.
“Let me guess: You forgot to set your alarm last night.” Badgered Regan with glaring eyes. Zeph walked over to the side of the dock and leaned on the guard rail.
“Well you know how I am I like to take-” the old rusty guard rail snapped and Zeph fell deep into the bright blue sea.
To be continued…
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It may seem like I’m copying KH, but it’s supposed to be somewhat of a parallel to the beginning of KH, but then my story will branch out and be a complete opposite. It will only show 1 world that has appeared in the KH series. Please do not flame because of this. If there is something you think is wrong with my writing or story or i'm not writing in detail, please tell me
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