This is our Battlecry (FFXIII sig)

[Raynie]

More like... sig(s). : D; Anyway, this is the first sig (that I've put effort into) I've done in a very long time. Probably since 2006, but I've lost count. So, I'm trying to brush up on my signature making skills again and came up with this today.

It can be two sigs, worn separately. But I made them so they'll be wearable together. CnC please <3

One thing I did way back then: http://img441.imageshack.us/img441/5339/sinsintome2.png
Only one because I unfortunately lost all other sigs I did in a computer crash. -__o; Also, I did this one when I was 'HeartlessWhisper' on here just in case. D:

 

[Salty the Hero]

I don't really like the negative space in them. I think you should brush up on that a bit.

Also, try putting in some depth with your sigs. Great job, though.

 

[Vayne Mechanics]

Versus one is better, but it's lacking. The negative space works better there than in Lightning's tag. Work on that mass blob of shitty bright light.

 

[Raynie]

@Salty: Thanks for the critique. I'll definitely work on that. I had an inkling feeling I had left too much space on the sides. ;

@Ken: Thanks for the critique as well. I have that tendency to adding "blobs of light" as you put it, I'll also work on that, thanks again. : D

 

[Charlie]

The style in and of itself is interesting.
However, I'd also focus on taking those 'pow' elements that you've incorporate for the 'flare' that you have at the conflict points, and work on adding them to different portions of the sig.

They're good as they are now.
But just see where adding more of it will bring you.

As for anything else -
The lighting on the first is choppy, and looks more like a stain. You could fix this.
On the second, its a bit saturated. Try to make it more intense.