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Golden_x_Heart

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Welcome to teh fic dark-diciple! im glad you liek it!
I KNOW, I KNOW! IM LATE UPDATING!
I just wanted it to be perfect, I told you!
So...don't be mad, 'kay? =D


Chapter 4: An Unexpected Guest


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I could hardly breath. Roxas…was shoving my face into his shirt/chest. “Fwat var fu fuing?” I muffled. I attempted to look up, and slightly saw the expression he wore on his face. It looked, from my point of view, scared and shocked. “He…he‘s coming…” Roxas said so quietly I hardly hear him. “But…how? How‘d he find me?”

I was suffocating and confused. “Vwoxas! Vi fant vreaf! Fwat are fu - ” He cut me off again, though a different way this time. He ever-so-slightly lightened his release on me, just enough for me to get a gasp of oxygen and for him to cover my mouth with a hand. He used his other free hand to gesture me to be quiet. Then, he told me to get on the ground. I wasn’t sure what was doing , but I listened. He then too got on the ground, and began to slowly slide across the solid earth. I followed. We eventually reached a patch of ground that had high grass.

Roxas had sheer panic in his voice. “Listen - stay here until I come back. Don’t ask questions, just do it. And if you see me doing anything suspicious, don‘t worry about it, I‘ll explain everything later.” I was dying to ask what was going on, but he motioned me again to keep quiet. Despite my curiosity, I nodded my head in agreement, and he nodded back in acknowledgment. He slowly stood up and took a good look around. He then began to walk towards the spot we had just been in with a look of bravado on his face. I managed to slightly poke my head up above the tall stems of grass and keep Roxas in my view. He went and stood in the middle of the dirt path for a moment, but then continued down the road.

‘What is he doing?!’ I thought to myself ‘He can’t leave me here!’ I had started to stand up, but then remembered that Roxas has said if he does anything suspicious to ignore him. I was debating if I should go follow him or not when another swirly portal of doom appeared in front of Roxas. “Gosh, how many is that now, four?” I said aloud to myself.

Suddenly, a man with spiky bright red hair and a long black trench coat emerged from the darkness of the rip portal. I didn’t have a very good view, so I scooted a little bit closer. “Ah, Roxas! I thought I’d find you here,” the man said.

Roxas? What does he want with Roxas?’ I thought. ‘Wait - I’ve heard that voice before…but where?’ It took me a second, but it suddenly hit me. That was the man that took me from Destiny Islands! I had an urge to go up and give him a piece of my mind, but I decided against it.

Roxas now spoke, with no emotion in his voice. “What do you want Axel?”

‘So this is Axel!’

Axel had a small smirk on his face when he responded. “Roxas, Roxas, Roxas! Don’t play dumb with me boy! You know exactly why I’m here.” He gave a small snicker. “Where‘s the girl, Roxas?” he said while putting his arm around Roxas’ shoulders. “Why wasn‘t she in the Pandorium when I went to check on her?”

‘Am I this girl? Is the Pandorium the glass room I was in?’

Roxas didn’t say anything at first, but eventually responded. “Axel, how do you expect me to know? I haven‘t been in the Pandorium!” He then shrugged Axel off of him and turned around, walking down the opposite end of the road.

Axel stayed in place, and I gave a quick glance at Roxas. He looked expressionless. I then heard Axel call out to him, “Okay Roxas. I can play that way, too.” Roxas stopped walking and turned around. I followed his gaze. I was shocked to see that Axel was no longer standing where he had been just a few seconds ago. I frantically looked around for him, not liking the thought of a strange man who had kidnapped magically disappearing. I then felt a tap on my shoulder. I quickly turned my head and saw the mysterious redhead looking down at me. “Hello,” he said with a smirk.

My eyes widened, but before I could call out to Roxas for help, he had created another portal (five now, right?) and covered my mouth. He grabbed my wrist and attempted to pulled me in. I stomped on his foot and bit down on his hand, causing him to release me and give a slight scream. Roxas turned his head and saw the scene. “Kairi!” he yelled to me. “Hold on!” He began running towards the two of us at a frightening speed with his hand extended. I reached out as well, but my attempt was futile. Axel was quicker, and grabbed my wrist again, pulling me into the darkness with him…


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MWAHAHA!!
You all thought Roxas kissed Kairi, didn’t you? =D
Well, he didn’t! :D
coughnotyetthathappenslatercough:
ANYWAYS,
Don’t you love cliffies?
I DO!!! :D
Sorry about the wait and about how short it is! I promise an awesome update tomorrow!


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And incase you couldn’t understand Kairi’s muffling -
“Fwat var fu fuing?” - “What are you doing?”
“Vwoxas! Vi fant vreaf! Fwat are fu - ” - “Roxas! I can’t breath! What are you - ”
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Haha! I really thought that they were kissing! ^_^

Anyways, awesome chapter golden! I can't wait to see how this all turns out and what happens between Roxas and Kairi. :D
 

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it was short but i liked it
poor kairi she couldnt breath :p
anyways plz update soon i really
wanna find out what happens next :D
 

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Some of you don't mind spoilers and some do - I don't want to lose fans for adding spoilers, so I'm trying to play it safe.
I'm letting you know now though guys, I may get to a point where I can't post anymore chappies until Kingdom Hearts II comes out, because I'll have to start putting spoilers in or else you won't understand what's going on.
But don't worry, it won't be for a little while, just giving you a heads up. =D
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You know what? You should just put any spoiler parts in boxes! THat way people who don't want to see them can read around them, and those who want longer chapters can look at them.
/then they can discuss the spoiler parts in spoiler boxes until KH2 comes out 19 days! No longer in the 20s!!!!!
 

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I forgot to criticize the chapter!
Ahem.
I would like to say that... it wasn't anything special, as in it is great, but not great on goldy's level... this is hard to explain... I mean that all of your chapters are great, but I was expecting this to be great!!

Sorry, but I'm being honest...
 

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Great chapter, goldie! even if it was short. i can understand cutting it for spoilers, but I have to agree with BHKiller, put the spoilers in spoiler boxes so we can know what happens. Plus, you won't have to go back and edit all the chapters later.
 

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Bad news guys...
I got a spider bite yesterday and I'm in the hospital - I get 15 minutes on the computer a day, but I'm not going to be able to post any new chappies for a while.
I know I promised you guys a new chappy today, but I can't help that the darned spider bit meh!
:silently curses the evil spider:
I'll be gone anywhere from 3-7 days, so...yeah.
I'm really sorry everyone!
And I know the last chappy wasn't all that great either - I didn't like it much myself, but I needed to post something, lol.
I'll be back as soon as possible!
Hugs, loves, and kisses!
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