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a fan fic that includes

rikus walk of dawn

how riku got his blade

and what happens when he gets home to DI


Riku and Mickey walk down a plain dirt road that seems like it will go on forever,until they meet a familiar face

Riku: What are you making me choose now

DiZ: wich road will you take, the road to light or the path to darkness


Riku: Neither im taking the path inbetween

Mickey looks up in disbelief

Diz: you mean the road to dusk

Riku: no, the road to dawn

as the two walk down the track DiZ yells back

DiZ: altough your path is special you will not find many footprints

Riku: and why is that

Diz: its beacause no-one before you shared the power of two

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The two had walked for what seemed like days had only been a few hours, the cloaks on their backs taking a tole on their stamina.

Riku: im sorry Mickey but i have to rest

Mickey: it's alright Riku, you have been through alot, you need rest

Riku: Thank you

They both layed down on the grass and watched the sky as they counted the stars disapering before their eyes, with every star Riku could see the tears in Mickeys eyes

Riku: tell me Mickey why did you come with me, your part in this story is to protect the worlds not me

Mickey: Riku your story is dark and mysterious, as you see along time ago i found my light and i never let go of it, i shuned the darkness and never let it in, but you have done what i could not.

Riku turned over and saw eye to eye with the king imagining what he could be talking about

Mickey: you have alowed the darkness to sweep through your body but still be in control, and then you found your light and kept it close to your heart.

Riku: that still dosent explain my question

Mickey: well over all odds you have still come out on top and now we walk a road never walked and i want to be the one next to you when you finish this trial.

Riku: trial, what trial its just a long walk

Mickey: no, the walk to dawn is diffrent from the others:

in the walk to light you will become overpowered with joy and harmony but you will never leave the place you love like a jail in you dreams.

in the path to darkness you will become a slave to your power but forever sleep in eternal darkness

but with the path inbetween you find both we walk the path that seems like forever but at the end we will only see happiness.

but the trials you will face will be countless altough not physical they are mental and spiritual.

Riku: hhhmmm so i guess this means we are in this together

Mickey: hhhmm quite but we have already surpassed a large one, castle oblivion
to forget something is to gain something but we did not.

that was something not even the weilder of the keyblade could do
so thats what makes you special.

Riku: thank you mickey

Mickey: no riku i thank you


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as another day arose riku and mickey got ready for another long walk

Riku: c'mon Mickey lets go

Mickey: hold on im not as fast as you

the two ran as fast as they can down the road over countless hills until something made them stop.

riku standed still while mickey gasping for air catched up to riku

Mickey: why di you stop

as mickey started looking up from the ground he saw a large stone tablet

Riku: what is it

Mickey: hhhmmm, Riku did you ever have a dream that you thought was so real

Riku: yes once it was strange, it was like i was drowning in darkness then a light came out and grabed me, wait why do you want to know this

Mickey: hhhmm yes, in this dream did you hear a voice

Riku: yes it said......

as riku read the tablet he realised why mickey had asked him that question

the tablet read

do not be afraid....
for the closer you get to the light......
the larger your shadow will become.......


Riku: aahhh is this a trial

Mickey: hhmm yes i think it is, i had the same dream once, it was when i found my light but i never thought that someone else could have the same dream

Riku: it is strange yes but i have to figure out what it means

Mickey: hhhhmmm yes................... ah i got it

Riku: really what is it

Mickey: i cant tell you, you must figure it out for yourself

Riku: oh c'mon

Mickey: no just think about it

Riku: ok umm hhmmmm yes...no...hhmmm....maybe...nah...................................... oh i got it

riku though deep and hard about what he thought was correct

Riku: this tablet is to remind me not to stray far from my goal
the closer i get to it the more the darkness within me will grow.

Mickey: yes thats what i was thinking, the same goes for me for if i am to turn back and leave you i may wander from my own path of light into the path to darkness.

Riku: yes


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Altough a relative easy trial was finished another was soon to come as someone was brewing something a trial of great power

???(1): do you think he can do this

???(2): there is no doubt that the king can but wether the boy can is soon to be seen

???(1): hhhhmmm ok than ill make it happen

as ???(1) made a straight line across the road he spread his hands and the road split in two

???(2): good now one last thing

???(2) placed another stone tablet onto the half of the road wich our heros are on.

DiZ: hey you two what are you doing

the two dissapered

DiZ: this isnt good

DiZ dissapered in a flash of light
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hey chapter 1 is finished

now its my first fan fic so be nice ok

also english isnt my first language so im sorry for any gramma errors ok

wait for chapter 2 wich reveals another trial and also tells the story of why riku gave into the darkness
 
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ok then but who said no lol

ok chapter 2 is coming right now

Riku: Mickey why is it that not even you could weild soras keyblade

Mickey: hhhmmm this question is a hard one but i have a feeling that this path will enlighten you on this question

Riku: hmm ok i underdstand

Mickey: hey whats that

Riku: ahh its a heartless

Mickey: but why is there a heartless on this road they cant get on it

Riku: i guess that its one of the paths many questions but for now lets make a run for it

as the ray's of the sun got blocked by a cloud the feild went black, riku grabed mickey and started to run but all around him darkness grew, every blade of grass changing in the darkness.

Riku: c'mon Mickey theres to many

Mickey: dont you see riku its a trial this is your darkness

Riku: hhmm yes i understand no

Riku summoned his soul eater and got ready to fight
Mickey also drawed his keyblade
riku slashed and hacked the shadows but they still kept coming like the darkness in his heart its never ending

Riku: theres to many mcikey what do we do

Mickey: you thought the darkness once before but now its growing beacause your getting closer to your goal

Riku: and, what do we do

Mickey: hhmmm go into your dark form

in the heat of battle mickey jumped into the fray and kept the heartless at bay while riku turned into the dark being he had rejected

dark riku: it is done mickey

Mickey: good now use dark aura

Dark riku: fine

dark riku jumped into the air and out of his hand came a large ball of dark energy wich he threw at the army of heartless

Mickey: good

Dark Riku: what now

Mickey: look

the heartless were sucked into the ball and out came a monstross heartless

Mickey: its a darkside, its the shadow of your light you must destroy it

mickey stood back while riku ran at his foe, he jumped onto the enemys hand and slashed it, the hand fell to the ground but changed into shadows once it hit the ground

Dark riku: mickey destroy them

mickey ran head first into the shadows and with a few quick blows he killed the shadows

mickey: keep'em comin

Riku ran up to the other hand and slashed i it but also destroyed the heartless with a few accurate blows

Mickey: that was great keep it up

riku finaly went for the last hit he jumped through the heart of the enemy but the darkness went inside of him the whole darkside swept once again through his body.

Mickey: noooo riku you must fight it

mickey slashed riku with his keyblade until the shadow left and riku was back to origingal state


chapter 2 part 1 finished


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this is kinda confussing...

but good nonetheless...

U never replied to the pm...

did u read it?
 
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yeah i did but i didnt like you fan fic

im getting ready to write part 2

im sorry its confusing its meant to be hard to understand if u havent gone into the spoiler section of kh2
 
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heres part 2 of chapter 2

Riku: hu....hu.....hu....hu (breathing deeply)

Mickey: its alright its over now

a day had passed from the time riku and mickey had fought the heartless

Riku: i cant see whats happening

Mickey: i thought this might happen

Riku: what is it whats wrong with me

Mickey: you have been fused with a darkside something only one person has done before

Riku: hu...hu...hu hhhhhmmmmm ansem

Mickey: correct

Riku: day after day im becoming more like him i can feel it inside of me

Mickey: yes i can see it but now your blind

Riku: i dont know how much i can do this mickey, i've lost so much and havent gained anything i feel like im not meant to have the things i want

"but you do" said a voice

Riku couldnt see what was going on but he could feel the floor it was so cold

Riku: what....mickey whos there

no voice replied

Riku got up and then he could feel the pit pat of rain on the floor

Riku: what is this

"its a trial" said the same voice

Riku: a trial......then where is my friend

"he will be here soon enough" said the voice


goodnight its late so this chapters over

next chapter 3 the trials of darkness
 
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