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A purple haired nobody (aka Riku's nobody) named Kurix and Akihike , a red haired female nobody of Kerry *aka The Lone Dragon* are stuffing their faces full of cookies made by snowdog.

"these are great man! thanks!" Kurix adds before downing a gallon of milk.
"We are here just to review for Kerry. and share gallons of milk to help down the cookies...KURIX! STOP HOGGING THE MILK!!!!" Akee grabs the milk and drags Rii to da corner with Riku.

"I told ya she would put ya here with me if you drang too much..." Riku muses...
" Update soon!" Akihike yells at oathkeeper_2u. Riku, Kurix, and Akihike wave their thanks, pleases, and goodbyes to all, until the next review!
 

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O.O My fic turned into a cookie eating charade? -looks around- Flying cookies..

Well thanks for keeping my fic alive Snow. xD

Chapter 24 (I'm putting this in smaller chappies cause I don't want it to end so soon)

Heart beating rapidly, Axel was starting to lose control of his anger, the flames getting bigger, at the slightest touch a person could be reduced to a pile of ashes. Of course, this wasn’t hard for his replica, considering they both could control fire, which made this even more intimidating. The pyro couldn’t grip the truth that he was really battling himself, on the inside, which was why he was losing control.

Shaking away his thoughts, he continued his violent attacks, the sounds of metal clashing against eachother echoed through the room. If this didn’t end soon, his fury would backfire, he needed to end this...right now.

~*~*~*~*~*~*~

“Who’s there?” called Sora loudly, looking around to find who threatened them.

Gliding down in front of them was no one other than the Superior himself. Smirking cruelly, he eyed the four of them with a calculating expression. As if planning how he would destroy each of them.

“Xemnas?!” they all cried in unison, preparing their weapons.

“That’s right, and you all are going to pay for destroying my members, not to mention having them turn traitor,” he glared at Zexion and Demyx, who determinedly looked back.

“What did you do to Axel and Larxene?”demanded Riku, determined to get some answers.

“That is none of your business, if I were you I would be more focused on your lives,” smirked Xemnas and summoned his laser-like weapons.

“Okay, but when we defeat you this time, don’t come back,” sighed Riku, and prepared for the final battle.

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

“Oh yeah! The final battles!” cheered Hayner, and scooted closer to the computer.

Kairi was worried for Sora, but knew he had defeated Xemnas before, plus he had more help this time. “I hope they make it..”

“I’m sure Sora and the others will, but I don’t know about Axel..he’s really losing control, he needs help,” sighed Pence, thinking of a solution.

“Maybe Larxene could help him...where did she go anyways?” demanded Donald, confused at how she disappeared so suddenly.

“Well, remember guys, this kind of is Axel’s fight considering he’s fighting himself,” pointed out the king, “And not just his replica, but his inside self too,” he added.

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

Gripping the hot metal of his chakrams, Axel swung with all his strength at his replica, who also attempted a fatal slash at him, both of the weapons hitting their targets.

Gasping in pain, Axel collapsed on the ground, gripping his chest, and panting heavily. He looked up slowly at his fading copy, who was staring at him with the same icy stare as he slowly faded away.

Axel’s breathing became shallow, everything turned blurry, his vision turning black as he winced from his deep gash, then everything turned white, ending with a painless nothingness...

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GASP! What happened to Axel san? DX

Oh yeah and HAPPY VALENTINES!! ♥ Lots of wuv from Oathy! XD
 
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"NOBODY ACCEPTED OUR MILK!!!! "Akihike screamed.
"Tis ok, Akee...nobody noticed the free milk...

hey, snowdog...you done with kookies? please bake more soon! twere really good!"
"Oathkeeer_2u! great chappie! please update soon! with Axel alive! He's died too many time is my book!" Riku, who just bounded in greets ya, only to wave good by...
 

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O.O!!!

I dont think I'll be able to get Axel back if I'm being mauled by my fans. TT_TT

And no, Axel is not dead, but in a bad coma/unconscious state, don't kill me Axel fans. x.x He'll be okay though, I'm thinking of some magical way to revive him.

And Larxene remembers the feelings she had when she was a whole person, so yeah.
 

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"WaaaaH!!!! I dropped my cookie!!!!" Kurixs cries.
"Quay, don't be like Sean Hannity wanting to go hug Liberals and sing "Kum Ba Ya". He just got creepier..." Akee gigles at herself for the comment.
"How'd that get into the conversation?" Riku asks.
"Kerry's listening to Sean Hannity because she's bored. That who wierd "your my other" talk in your head is sometimes not as useful as we (meaning Roxas, Sora, Namine, Kairi, Kerry, and I) can do. You should be able to with Kurix as well."
"Like I want to..."
"SNOWDOG! DO YOU HAVE ANY MORE COOKIES? I'll exchange it for some milk for everyone else to share!"
"Kurix just got crazier" Riku and Akihike say as their farwell...
 
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