Awesome update!!!
Beating up the Organization sure is good entertainment:toungesmile:
Beating up the Organization sure is good entertainment:toungesmile:
Fanfiction ► The Return of Axel
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Excelent! Just as in other cases I find it hard to comment as there's nothing to critisize! Next chapter please!
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that was an awsome update! love the fighting scenes!
Awesome!!!! MORE MORE MORE!!!! *sits and waits impatiently*
Heh... That was funny. Hayner's just like -sits down-. lol ^.^ Keep up the good work!
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OMG! you've got ur self another fan! Btw are there any cookies left? lol
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*gives you a cookie*
Not my fic, but whatever. ^-^ Have a cookie.
*eats cookies while waiting for the next chappy*
Wow...Snow is my official cookie giver. 8D
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please post the next chappy! PLEASE?! not to rush you or anything...
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XD Sorry Oathkeeper I'm working on it x.x
-gives badge- or I could somehow make one. O_O
-gives badge- or I could somehow make one. O_O
Awsome Oath_keeper this could be the best one to date!
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lol Snow
Okay here's teh next chappie..
“How much longer do we have to do this?” groaned Sora as he avoided oncoming earthquakes as The Silent Hero sent shockwaves through the halls.
“As long as it takes,” muttered Axel, and shot waves of flame at Vexen, sighing at the thought of being at this for hours..
“And why do I feel like I’m being watched...?” asked Sora nervously, hating the thought that someone other than the organization was watching him.
“We’ll deal with it later!” sighed Riku and continued fighting Xigbar while Larxene and Zexion double-teamed against Lexaeus.
Zexion slashed at Lexaeus with a katana, then a kunai, trying to delay the constant earthquakes, but ended up getting thrown across the room. Larxene looked at Demyx and smirked, signaling him to shoot a geyser towards the middle of the room, which she shot a ray of thunder at, creating a huge electrical shock.
~*~*Meanwhile~*~*~
“Wow, things are heating up,” mused Hayner as he stared at the screen in awe.
“Yeah, who do you think is gonna go down next?” asked Pence as he eyed the screen with anxiety.
“I have my bets on that old dude with the shield,” pointed Hayner as he watched Axel throw flaming chakrams, weakening him easily.
“I hope Sora’s okay..” whispered Kairi, then getting a reassured smile from Olette, and looking at the screen to see him okay, she smiled.
“Wow, they sure look determined, I’ve never seen so much fighting!” piped up the King, watching with excitement.
“Yeah, I’m sure they’ll win!” squawked Donald.
“OH TOUCHDOWN!!! AXEL GOT RID OF OLD DUDE!!” shouted Hayner jumping up and throwing his fists in the air. “That’ll be ten munny Pence!”
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Zexion groaned and shakily got up, trying to recover from the blow from Lexaeus. He watched as Axel took out Vexen, and Larxene shot him a smile before continuing her fight with Xigbar.
Sora and Riku were trying their hardest to take out Lexaeus, Demyx helping Larxene with Xigbar. So what was Zexion supposed to do? He was pretty wiped out as it was, and he couldn’t help but feel like he too, was being watched, but by who?
~*~*~*~
lawl you all know the answer to that, but someone else is watching too.
Okay here's teh next chappie..
“How much longer do we have to do this?” groaned Sora as he avoided oncoming earthquakes as The Silent Hero sent shockwaves through the halls.
“As long as it takes,” muttered Axel, and shot waves of flame at Vexen, sighing at the thought of being at this for hours..
“And why do I feel like I’m being watched...?” asked Sora nervously, hating the thought that someone other than the organization was watching him.
“We’ll deal with it later!” sighed Riku and continued fighting Xigbar while Larxene and Zexion double-teamed against Lexaeus.
Zexion slashed at Lexaeus with a katana, then a kunai, trying to delay the constant earthquakes, but ended up getting thrown across the room. Larxene looked at Demyx and smirked, signaling him to shoot a geyser towards the middle of the room, which she shot a ray of thunder at, creating a huge electrical shock.
~*~*Meanwhile~*~*~
“Wow, things are heating up,” mused Hayner as he stared at the screen in awe.
“Yeah, who do you think is gonna go down next?” asked Pence as he eyed the screen with anxiety.
“I have my bets on that old dude with the shield,” pointed Hayner as he watched Axel throw flaming chakrams, weakening him easily.
“I hope Sora’s okay..” whispered Kairi, then getting a reassured smile from Olette, and looking at the screen to see him okay, she smiled.
“Wow, they sure look determined, I’ve never seen so much fighting!” piped up the King, watching with excitement.
“Yeah, I’m sure they’ll win!” squawked Donald.
“OH TOUCHDOWN!!! AXEL GOT RID OF OLD DUDE!!” shouted Hayner jumping up and throwing his fists in the air. “That’ll be ten munny Pence!”
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
Zexion groaned and shakily got up, trying to recover from the blow from Lexaeus. He watched as Axel took out Vexen, and Larxene shot him a smile before continuing her fight with Xigbar.
Sora and Riku were trying their hardest to take out Lexaeus, Demyx helping Larxene with Xigbar. So what was Zexion supposed to do? He was pretty wiped out as it was, and he couldn’t help but feel like he too, was being watched, but by who?
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lawl you all know the answer to that, but someone else is watching too.
Great! Good delivery and best of all...
I DIDN'T GET BORED WATING FOR IT WOOOOOOT!
Heh, lol.
I DIDN'T GET BORED WATING FOR IT WOOOOOOT!
Heh, lol.
OMG...that...was sweetness!! LURVE IT!! post the next chappie soon!
Uh oh... Who's watching them? =0
Someone's watching them. That's a scary thought... >.> <.<
Someone's watching them. That's a scary thought... >.> <.<
Look in the Back ground of the secret ending... see any thing familiar?
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Not the right place for that ^ But you're new, so I guess you didn't know. :3
That should be in the KH2:FM+ section.
That should be in the KH2:FM+ section.
Awesome new chapter cant wait for the next. Well actually i can and will.
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