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[Davy Jones]

I lost track of the story after all this crazy stuff happened. Is there any possible way to keep this fan fic...how should i put this...serious enough to be accepted by anyone, not a clumsy clownfest?

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alliteration

 

[giuocob]

Two words /=/ alliteration

 

[Thor.]

PEOPLE LET"S TRY TO KEEP THIS THING GOING!!!!

Thank you. . .now that that outburst is behind us I have a request, could you please post where this fic was before the three or four pages of arguments?

 

[Bebop Blues]

After the all of the odd random evnts ended the King explained to the group wat was going on. "There is a group of Keyblade weilders who were just discovered. There were three of them. One went off and used the keyblade for good, the other two began to wreck havok on other worlds. One of the to evil doers realized what they were doing was wrong and went to the good one for forgivness. She forgave her friend and they both set out to fight the other keybearer. The three keybearers fought for weeks but the evil retreated. One day I was taking a walk through the town out sied of the castle and i found two girls holding keyblade near the out skirts of the town." "They were fighting here?!" said Sora on the edge of his seat.

 

[Thor.]

"Well sort of. . ." King Mickey replied

 

[Bebop Blues]

"the fight ended here. The two girls were trying to protect me from the evil keybearer." "What are their names?" asked Riku.

 

[Bebop Blues]

YYYYYYYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!! WE HAVE OVER ONE THOUSAND VIEWS!!!!!:thumbsup:

 

[Riku's Twilight]

"Iliad and Rosaline" said the King.

 

[Davy Jones]

"And who exactly are Iliad and Rosaline?" Sora queried. King Mickey gave him a blank stare. "Have you been paying attention to the story?"

"No, No." Riku came to Sora's defense. "He means like where did they come from. Who they are in person."

Mickey sighed and stared out side. "To tell you the truth, I don't know. I didn't get to thank them either. They just left."

Sora could faintly hear something outside. It sounded like a word. then it came closer so he could here it. "FIRAGA!"

"Everyone Duck!" Sora yelled. The others looked at him odd.

BOOM!

A huge ball of fire flew through the wall.
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Hooray for kinda cliffhangers

 

[Riku's Twilight]

"Oops... sorry..." said one of the girsls, coiming toward them. "I'm still learning to use this thing..."

Sora turned to Mickey, and said, "THESE are KEYBLADE WARRIORS?!" in a hushed voice. "That's the thing," said Mickey, "They can't remember anything that happened."

"Wow..." said Riku.

 

[Bebop Blues]

"Did they have anything with them that could jog their memory?"asked Sora. "They both had their own journals with pictures and everything." replied the King. "Maybe if the y read their journals they'll remember everything all at once!" said Riku jumping off of the floor.

 

[Riku's Twilight]

"Let's find those journals!" said Sora. "Um.. one problem..." said the King. "What?" asked Riku. "They were scattered across the worlds." said Mickey. "Oh, so that's why you wanted us to go to the worlds! To find the journals!" said Sora. "No, I actuall was wondering if you guys would pick me up something from Wendy's... but there are more important things now!"

All except for the King chuckled.

"What?" asked the King.

"You like Wendy's?" asked Riku. "Dude, I got food poisoning form there twice!"

(And is Kairi here or not? I'm confused...)

 

[Bebop Blues]

Kairi is currently not there.

"To the Gummi Ship!" said Sora pointing a finger in the air. "Someone's excited." said Riku brushing himself off.

 

[Riku's Twilight]

(Where should they go next?)

 

[Bebop Blues]

uuuuuuuummmmmmmmm................Andy's Room!(Toy Story)

 

[Riku's Twilight]

(Okay, you should do this, i have no idea how to make them toys, or should they be humans?

 

[Bebop Blues]

uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm...................hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm............................u choose!

 

[Riku's Twilight]

Toys, but toys that look nothing like themselves. Like Kairi as a barbie or something.

 

[Davy Jones]

OOC: They should have some sameness, but they could still be toys. What would be the point in making them totally unlike themselves. They might get scared...

 

[Riku's Twilight]

(Exactly! blahblahfillingupspace)