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The Originals



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Puddle Jumper

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The Originals
In the beginning of time, there was but one universe. A universe of energy which was nearing its peak. But a sudden increase of energy at a single point created a burst. A massive explosion followed and multiple universes were created in its wake.The Universe known as Origin was forgotten and assumed never to have even existed. By organisations overlooking this Multiverse, it was assumed that the Big Bang only severed the connections between these universes.

Billions of years passed and several other Bing Bangs came afterwards, creating even more universes. One of these universes was Universe NX-5841. Our universe. Beings of Energy, spawned inside Origin, chose this universe as its starting point. The planet they chose as the beginning of their invasion was one named Earth by its inhabitants. Calling themselves The Originals, the creatures came into our world invading the humans with them not even knowing it. They drew their power from the humans life energy, eventually becoming strong enough to leave the body of their hosts as flesh and blood creatures.

But they had not expected one thing. That the frequency of some humans on earth cancelled out their souls, if that is what it could be called. So those humans obtained the powers of these Originals without having to die in the process. These Homo Sapien Originals obtained the abilities of an animal on their planet. They are the greatest foe to stand against these Originals.


Okay, I want some bad ass critics to review this story. See where I went wrong and how to improve it. I've been dissapointed with my "mad skills" *Cough* lately and I need to get back on my feet. So if you would please be so kind as to aid me, I'd be very pleased.

I've gotten the idea of this after watching The One and Alone in the Dark. I had a The One story prepped too, but I went with this one ...

And if someone wants to join by any reason:

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