Fanfiction ► The Organization's Beginning (chapter 12 soon!)
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If anyone wishes to read any of my fan fics pm me and I'll send you links to my 2 stories.
If anyone wishes to read any of my fan fics pm me and I'll send you links to my 2 stories.
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YAY! Im really incredibly excited for this, I mean It's really depressing me not being able to write, So I can't wait to read yours!
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Well don't force yourself, but I am very excited to read it!
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lol You're excited about writing it? Getting people's responses?
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lol Ok... It doesn't really, only cause I think about when I read back over my stuff I see all my mistakes and It annoys me, I mean I probably should type it up on word, but it annoys me when I write sentences that aren't nessarily sentences and it gets all annoyed at me, or I get annoyed when I put names up there it doesn't like and you have to keep saying, It's ok, I like this word! lol
lol Ok... It doesn't really, only cause I think about when I read back over my stuff I see all my mistakes and It annoys me, I mean I probably should type it up on word, but it annoys me when I write sentences that aren't nessarily sentences and it gets all annoyed at me, or I get annoyed when I put names up there it doesn't like and you have to keep saying, It's ok, I like this word! lol
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No offense, but I'd read your story if you made more chapters....... The New Organization is a good story, but you don't seem to have been updating it.
No offense, but I'd read your story if you made more chapters....... The New Organization is a good story, but you don't seem to have been updating it.
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Hmm judging by that he's talking to ansemjafar... I think.... It's hard to tell whether he made a mistake saying yours was The New Organisation or whether it was an entirely new thread lol.
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Why thankyou good sir! It's a pleasure to be a Twilight 'K'night
lol to those of you who don't get it, Dw it was an in-joke lol
Why thankyou good sir! It's a pleasure to be a Twilight 'K'night
lol to those of you who don't get it, Dw it was an in-joke lol
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Sorry this ones a bit short, but i'll update earlier to make up for it, so here it is!
*Note: the new person is a known character, will be revealed iin next chapter!
Sorry this ones a bit short, but i'll update earlier to make up for it, so here it is!
Chapter 7: The New Enquiry
The "new" Dilan stood there, not flinching at all. His eyes were closed.
Even as the Darkside held his friends, he still just stood there.
"Dilan?" called out Xehanort.
But the unknown being just stood there motionless.
"He's chickened out!" yelled out Aeleus.
But still the figure stood dormant.
"This isn't good..." said Even, as he fought off another tentacle.
Then, suddenly the Darkside swayed forward, then lunged towards Dilan.
"Wind, release your anger" murmured Dilan.
And so it did. It released all of it's fury upon the Darkside. The first thing it did though, was cut the three loose of the foul smelling creature. Then it went all out.
The wind was prevailing over the creature, but eventually, it stood back against it. The Darkside then lashed out at Dilan with it's tentacles, but it was blocked by the six lances.
With two swift movements, Dilan grabbed two lances in his right hand and one in his left, while two formed an X infront of him, but slightly to the right, and the other floated along his left side.
Then, without notice, Dilan leapt into the air infront of the Darkside, and began to exchange blows with it.
They both exchanged excrutiatingly painful looking blows, but neither faultered. Dilan's blows were deflected by the Darkside's tentacles, and vice versa.
After watching for almost 10 minutes, Xehanort noticed some footsteps behind him.
"Is someone there?" asked Xehanort to the dark corridor.
"Mind if I give this a shot?" said a new voice on the scene
The "new" Dilan stood there, not flinching at all. His eyes were closed.
Even as the Darkside held his friends, he still just stood there.
"Dilan?" called out Xehanort.
But the unknown being just stood there motionless.
"He's chickened out!" yelled out Aeleus.
But still the figure stood dormant.
"This isn't good..." said Even, as he fought off another tentacle.
Then, suddenly the Darkside swayed forward, then lunged towards Dilan.
"Wind, release your anger" murmured Dilan.
And so it did. It released all of it's fury upon the Darkside. The first thing it did though, was cut the three loose of the foul smelling creature. Then it went all out.
The wind was prevailing over the creature, but eventually, it stood back against it. The Darkside then lashed out at Dilan with it's tentacles, but it was blocked by the six lances.
With two swift movements, Dilan grabbed two lances in his right hand and one in his left, while two formed an X infront of him, but slightly to the right, and the other floated along his left side.
Then, without notice, Dilan leapt into the air infront of the Darkside, and began to exchange blows with it.
They both exchanged excrutiatingly painful looking blows, but neither faultered. Dilan's blows were deflected by the Darkside's tentacles, and vice versa.
After watching for almost 10 minutes, Xehanort noticed some footsteps behind him.
"Is someone there?" asked Xehanort to the dark corridor.
"Mind if I give this a shot?" said a new voice on the scene
*Note: the new person is a known character, will be revealed iin next chapter!
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