This is my first fan-fic, so I'm going to post the intro and wait for feedback before I post Chapter 1.
Intro:
Erik woke up. He was having a dream that felt so real that reality seemed fake. He was in a dark room standing on a bizarre stained glass floor that dipicted godlike beings, many in black cloaks. Suddenly, a bunch of dark, bug-like creatures appeared and he was holding a sword that looked strangly like a large key. The creatures attacked him and suddenly knowing how to fight with the key-sword thing, went crazy on them and defeated them easily.
He got out of bed and got dressed, he was skinny and a little tall, with dark brown hair and green eyes. He walked into the den and saw his brother, Jason sitting on the couch, reading.
"That's odd," Erik mumbled to himself, "Jason never reads. He sat down next to his brother. "Whatcha reading?"
Jason showed him the front of the book; it looked old and was titled, "THE BOY THAT OPENED THE DOOR."
"What's it about?" Erik hated it when Jason wouldn't give him a complete answer.
"Some kid named Sora saved the world with a sword called the keyblade and stuff."answered Jason.
"Discriptive, can I see it?" Jason handed Erik the book and went into the kitchen. Erik took the book into his room and read it. It showed a picture of the key thing from his dream, the keyblade. Supposedly in an alternate reality, some Sora kid used it to save the world many times and all the trouble came from some guy named Xehanort. In order to finally save the world, Sora went back in time fifty year to defeat Xehanort once and for all and prevent the Heartless, creatures born from darkness, from being created. The Heartless were the dark creatures in the dream. The book mentioned many other things, The Princesses of Heart, Keyholes, Nobodies, and the thing that most interested Erik, a group of Nobodies called The Organization XIII.
Intro:
Erik woke up. He was having a dream that felt so real that reality seemed fake. He was in a dark room standing on a bizarre stained glass floor that dipicted godlike beings, many in black cloaks. Suddenly, a bunch of dark, bug-like creatures appeared and he was holding a sword that looked strangly like a large key. The creatures attacked him and suddenly knowing how to fight with the key-sword thing, went crazy on them and defeated them easily.
He got out of bed and got dressed, he was skinny and a little tall, with dark brown hair and green eyes. He walked into the den and saw his brother, Jason sitting on the couch, reading.
"That's odd," Erik mumbled to himself, "Jason never reads. He sat down next to his brother. "Whatcha reading?"
Jason showed him the front of the book; it looked old and was titled, "THE BOY THAT OPENED THE DOOR."
"What's it about?" Erik hated it when Jason wouldn't give him a complete answer.
"Some kid named Sora saved the world with a sword called the keyblade and stuff."answered Jason.
"Discriptive, can I see it?" Jason handed Erik the book and went into the kitchen. Erik took the book into his room and read it. It showed a picture of the key thing from his dream, the keyblade. Supposedly in an alternate reality, some Sora kid used it to save the world many times and all the trouble came from some guy named Xehanort. In order to finally save the world, Sora went back in time fifty year to defeat Xehanort once and for all and prevent the Heartless, creatures born from darkness, from being created. The Heartless were the dark creatures in the dream. The book mentioned many other things, The Princesses of Heart, Keyholes, Nobodies, and the thing that most interested Erik, a group of Nobodies called The Organization XIII.
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