The Keyblade War : Tactical Warfare

[Keechi Itano]

[Note: This will be like war. Anyone is welcome to join!]

It was raining the night it started. The keyblades rained from the sky like water. Everyone wondered what they were, until he came. The man in the jacket brought an army of.....well.... things. They attacked without mercy. We had no choice but to strike back with the weapons. That is where it all started.

 

[Q]

(...please, pleasepleasepleasePLEASE.

READ LoC'S GUIDE TO THE OMNIVERSE.

There. See? It's sticky'd. It has a section. It'll tell you about making a good roleplay.

Thanks.)

 

[Keechi Itano]

Sorry if there's any problems! It's supposed to be mysterious and stuff. Can you tell me what i'm doing wrong???

 

[Q]

Sorry if there's any problems! It's supposed to be mysterious and stuff. Can you tell me what i'm doing wrong???

You need a plot.
Which is at least a paragraph long, and detailed.

You also need rules to the roleplay. And a template example.
This is all explained much better and in much more detail in LoC's Guide to the Omniverse - it's in the list of sticky'd topics above. Just look at that and redo this.

 

[Keechi Itano]

Sorry! How stupid of me! I'm not new to this, i'm just hanging out with some friends and I wasn't paying attention!

 

[Q]

Sorry! How stupid of me! I'm not new to this, i'm just hanging out with some friends and I wasn't paying attention!

...umm, OK, but just to be safe, read the guide.
Hell, I'll even link it.

http://forums.khinsider.com/role-playing/78277-locs-guide-omniverse-its-back.html

Read it. FULLY. It pwnz.