C Cissy Bronze Member Joined Aug 4, 2008 Messages 2,605 Sep 9, 2008 #1 Edited away for obvious reasons. Last edited: Apr 28, 2010
Lancelot It's the only NEET thing to do. Joined Dec 23, 2007 Messages 9,638 Awards 3 Sep 9, 2008 #2 Wow... just... wow Thoroughly loved that, the next will be a fine piece, i can see
L LadyofShadow Captain L.O. Shadow Joined Jan 21, 2008 Messages 1,837 Age 31 Location On Board the my ship, Moon Rider. Sep 9, 2008 #3 Awesome, this story was beautifully written with such detail and good humor. I loved it. And yet, I can image this in the game.
Awesome, this story was beautifully written with such detail and good humor. I loved it. And yet, I can image this in the game.
C Cissy Bronze Member Joined Aug 4, 2008 Messages 2,605 Sep 9, 2008 #4 Thank you very much. <3 For the sake of critique, is there anything you guys think I should work on? Vocabulary? Flow?
Thank you very much. <3 For the sake of critique, is there anything you guys think I should work on? Vocabulary? Flow?
TwilightRiku_13 HIT THE DECK!!!!! Joined Aug 2, 2008 Messages 1,122 Awards 4 Location At my house with Riku, Saix, and Zexion, rocking t Sep 10, 2008 #6 Wow, that was a really great story; it had a great description and good humor. Cannot wait until your next story.
Wow, that was a really great story; it had a great description and good humor. Cannot wait until your next story.