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The Karmatic Tragedies of a Normal Youth



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Edited for not liking them anymore.
 
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Dude, these are seriously clever and witty! Especially 'Game Over'. Your poems are really well done!

And the lines 'And what was once a peaceful crane; Became a great, big aero-plane!' was seriously clever and funny, too. Best. Poetry. Lines. Ever.

I can't wait to read more! :D
 
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These made me laugh, mostly.

The only thing I thought was a little odd, was the line 'So I took out my hand, and reached for its stem' in Game Over. I just thought it sounded weird, someone taking out their hand.
 
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