Yeah definitly tomorrow because it's a Friday.
Fanfiction ► The Heroine And The Villainess
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Bump, sorry didn't want to double post.
Chapter 1 ~ Nightmare To Go
“ Please God, strike me with lighting.” A girl of sixteen with midnight violet hair and grape colored eyes stared at herself in a mirror in an abandon house with two other girls, sitting in new couches about a week old.
“ They can not make us wear this stupid uniform five days a week!” The girl was stretch out on the couch, her flaming red hair falling of the end of the couch.
“ Guys, they’re not that bad.” She sat Indian style on the couch, sipping tea out of a porcelain tea cup, silver blue hair falling to her waist. All the girls were wearing black dress shirts, red miniskirts, burgundy knee high socks, and black loafers.
“ I still hate it. The guys have way better outfits. Don’t you think, Blackfire?” Blackfire ignore the comment and unleashed her’s.
“ Which reminds me, we have to meet Red, Slade, and the others at his office.” The pair of night blue and gothic purple eyes rolled at the previous comment with disgust.
Why can’t she call Xavier by his first name?
The red head spoke this in her mind so the other girl could read her thought.
‘Cuz she doesn’t want us to know she likes him, Tibby
Tibby response was simply, Like DUH, she practly drools every time she looks at him, Ava.
They carried on with their conversation meanwhile, Blackfire went up the stairs, opened the door and close it, then jumped on her bed. She laid on her pillow, memories from that night flashing in her head. She clenched her pillow and her muscules tensed to no end until her eyes grew hot. The gory night of the palace with blood, screams, tears, and painful memories filled her head until her eyes grew wet.
I will not cry, I will not cry.
She continued this chant until the nightmarous memories faded to a peaceful memory. It all focus on a beach with two children running around in the water, laughing and hurling water at each other. A little brunette girl with big brown eyes shouted, “ Stop it Ax, stop it.” Ax had, what looked like long, spiky, red hair and neon green eyes, yelling to the girl, “ I’m going to get you Amber-“ Blackfire bolted up in the bed in realization to the name.
Amber? Didn’t I know an Amber? How long ago was that memory?
All the questions kept piling up in her head when Ava knocked on the door.
“ B., shouldn’t we be getting a move on?” Blackfire stood up and faced her friend, “ Yeah.”
All day long, Blackfire kept asking herself, Who’s Amber and Ax?
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I promise you it will make sense when I post the KH chapters on IHP
Chapter 1 ~ Nightmare To Go
“ Please God, strike me with lighting.” A girl of sixteen with midnight violet hair and grape colored eyes stared at herself in a mirror in an abandon house with two other girls, sitting in new couches about a week old.
“ They can not make us wear this stupid uniform five days a week!” The girl was stretch out on the couch, her flaming red hair falling of the end of the couch.
“ Guys, they’re not that bad.” She sat Indian style on the couch, sipping tea out of a porcelain tea cup, silver blue hair falling to her waist. All the girls were wearing black dress shirts, red miniskirts, burgundy knee high socks, and black loafers.
“ I still hate it. The guys have way better outfits. Don’t you think, Blackfire?” Blackfire ignore the comment and unleashed her’s.
“ Which reminds me, we have to meet Red, Slade, and the others at his office.” The pair of night blue and gothic purple eyes rolled at the previous comment with disgust.
Why can’t she call Xavier by his first name?
The red head spoke this in her mind so the other girl could read her thought.
‘Cuz she doesn’t want us to know she likes him, Tibby
Tibby response was simply, Like DUH, she practly drools every time she looks at him, Ava.
They carried on with their conversation meanwhile, Blackfire went up the stairs, opened the door and close it, then jumped on her bed. She laid on her pillow, memories from that night flashing in her head. She clenched her pillow and her muscules tensed to no end until her eyes grew hot. The gory night of the palace with blood, screams, tears, and painful memories filled her head until her eyes grew wet.
I will not cry, I will not cry.
She continued this chant until the nightmarous memories faded to a peaceful memory. It all focus on a beach with two children running around in the water, laughing and hurling water at each other. A little brunette girl with big brown eyes shouted, “ Stop it Ax, stop it.” Ax had, what looked like long, spiky, red hair and neon green eyes, yelling to the girl, “ I’m going to get you Amber-“ Blackfire bolted up in the bed in realization to the name.
Amber? Didn’t I know an Amber? How long ago was that memory?
All the questions kept piling up in her head when Ava knocked on the door.
“ B., shouldn’t we be getting a move on?” Blackfire stood up and faced her friend, “ Yeah.”
All day long, Blackfire kept asking herself, Who’s Amber and Ax?
<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3
I promise you it will make sense when I post the KH chapters on IHP
Nice chapter Andi! ^^
Twas short but still good.
Twas short but still good.
I know, when I write chapters in my journal, they tend to be long but come out short on word.
Yeah Same thing Happens to me.....You think the chapters are Long when on paper, But when on word, Its Kinda short....(Happened to me when I first started writing fanfics)
Yeah, it sucks until you add things to extend the chapter abit like adding more describing words.
Yep,
Or put in more Scenes, Like in ELL, half the scene's in that were made up, JUST before I posted!
Or put in more Scenes, Like in ELL, half the scene's in that were made up, JUST before I posted!
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Okay guys, I'm in dire need of help with Villains for the story.
See there's like 35 heroes going to be in the fic and only 11 of them have an arch nemeis.(sp?)
So there's 24 more villains to be made and I know I can't make them all so I'm going to give you some people to make for it.
It be appreciated and they are going to be in it and no excuses from me why they are not.
I'll give you the list of the heroes and villains that are already paired up.
Robin - Xavier
Starfire - Blackfire
Raven - Ava
Terra - Tibby
Beast Boy - Storm
Carmelita - Neyla
Kagome - Kagura
Sora - Demxy ( weird rivals)
Kairi - Vanessa
Roxas - Axel ( that's going to be funny)
and
Namine - Larxene
so I'll tell you who I picked to create the characters.
See there's like 35 heroes going to be in the fic and only 11 of them have an arch nemeis.(sp?)
So there's 24 more villains to be made and I know I can't make them all so I'm going to give you some people to make for it.
It be appreciated and they are going to be in it and no excuses from me why they are not.
I'll give you the list of the heroes and villains that are already paired up.
Robin - Xavier
Starfire - Blackfire
Raven - Ava
Terra - Tibby
Beast Boy - Storm
Carmelita - Neyla
Kagome - Kagura
Sora - Demxy ( weird rivals)
Kairi - Vanessa
Roxas - Axel ( that's going to be funny)
and
Namine - Larxene
so I'll tell you who I picked to create the characters.
Eh, I dont get it, So what are we meant to do?
By the Way, Cant wait to see the Roxas - Axel momant XD
By the Way, Cant wait to see the Roxas - Axel momant XD
Well, I picked some of my friends to create a character because I thought they would be the best person to make a villain or villainess for that hero. Like I picked you to make a character for Sango to fight because I know you've seen Inuyasha before.
I know! It's going to be hilarious(sp?) XD
There's even something I think is funny. There's going a love square with 2 girls.
Whoa....How'd you know Ive watched Inuyasha Before?
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Because you told me. Remember, you were listing your favorite cartoon guys.
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Not many people remember these kinds of things I say ^^;
Not many people remember these kinds of things I say ^^;
Yeah and I'm forgetful.
I know you also like Gaara From Naturo.
I know you also like Gaara From Naturo.
.....
GAARA!!!!!
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GAARA!!!!!
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Maybe, I should have kept my mouth shut......
Yes, yes you should of....
I stopped writing on paper, I always just use MSword
Same, I used to ALWAYS write on Paper, but I always do it on Word Now adays.
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