Fanfiction ► The Forgotten Warrior

[Nelo Angelo]

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[Lectori Salutem]

Don't worry, I still like it! So yeah, it was good!

 

[Destiny_Seeker]

This is a good start, you give some pretty nice descriptions. I'll be reading more.

 

[Haku]

Great start so far Nelo, I'll be keeping a eye on this one.

 

[Ultima Star]

Eh Nelo I still love it ^.^
So i'll read the remasterized version lol

 

[Nelo Angelo]

thanks guys. appreciate the comments. would love to hear some more.
the next chap will be up some time tomorrow.

 

[Suzaku]

Well written. Very good start nelo. I'm looking forward to how the new version turns out.

And you know how I love your battle scenes.

 

[Nelo Angelo]

thanks man suzaku. i wont let ya down.

 

[Nelo Angelo]

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[Lectori Salutem]

I'm sure more people will come! So write more!

 

[Nelo Angelo]

thanks man LS but....hmm...i'll wait then. hopefully there are more readers. i went all out trying to make this story better.

 

[Lectori Salutem]

For some people here (including me) school has started. It won't go as fast as the last few months....

 

[Nelo Angelo]

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[Haku]

Nice chapters Nelo sorry I'm late to commenting.

 

[Nelo Angelo]

no worries man haku. hope this fic stays alive at least.

 

[Suzaku]

This thread die? Not while I still post!! I liked the way you adapted the seraph part. T'was nice.

You're also putting us into the story faster than last time, which works well with your style. I shall wait in anticipation.

 

[Nelo Angelo]

thanks man suzaku. yeah i thought i might be rushin again. but thats the way i work. just puttin some final touches to the next chap. it'll be up today or maybe tomorrow.

 

[Lectori Salutem]

Sorry, I'm a little late...

It could've been a little longer, but it was good for the rest!

 

[Nelo Angelo]

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[Lectori Salutem]

I sure do like it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!