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I also need criticism on all my fics. Particularly my new one XD
What I find is that most stories that have more popularity are written by popular writers, like Bel, regardless of the theme.
So keep writing and you'll probably reach the popular group XD I'm aiming for that!
What I find is that most stories that have more popularity are written by popular writers, like Bel, regardless of the theme.
So keep writing and you'll probably reach the popular group XD I'm aiming for that!
I'll look yours over right now. You're talking about the Pariah Sect, right? I read the first chapter a bit ago, and it seemed really good.
And yeah, it seems like popular writers get most of the attention. I'm struggling to find readers for my story, Kingdom Hearts D, too. Of course, the fact that I'm fairly new here and haven't updated in a week doesn't help anything. It just so happened that as soon as I started getting into my story, my teachers decided to start loading on homework.
Aye. Finding readers is the tricky part it seems.
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So, just want to say that I think people doing their dialogue/story in "script" format is rather lazy.
CHARACTERNAME: DIALOGUE
I mean. It can't even really be called "script format" because that's nothing like what real scripts are like.
CHARACTERNAME: DIALOGUE
I mean. It can't even really be called "script format" because that's nothing like what real scripts are like.
Me: I agree completely
"Script-fics" are also a lot less interesting to read than normal prose stories. With no transitions between dialogue and action, it is much more difficult to imagine what is happening. There is virtually no way to say that a character does something WHILE they talk. And nobody stops what they're doing to talk, so it seems much less realistic.
That's my opinion anyway.
GAAAAH.
I need to get inspired to write my Digimon/FMA/Hellsing crossover. But I CAN'T. >.< I want to get started on the sequel to the sequel to that story. I want to write about Kairi and Namine taking about fifty-six levels in badass and duking it out several hundred in the skies over London with giant laser beams! And Demyx getting befriended by Vivio... And Xion coming back from the dead (sort of) with a bunch of Digimon. And Nanoha reenacting her befriending of Quattro with Zexion.
I need to get inspired to write my Digimon/FMA/Hellsing crossover. But I CAN'T. >.< I want to get started on the sequel to the sequel to that story. I want to write about Kairi and Namine taking about fifty-six levels in badass and duking it out several hundred in the skies over London with giant laser beams! And Demyx getting befriended by Vivio... And Xion coming back from the dead (sort of) with a bunch of Digimon. And Nanoha reenacting her befriending of Quattro with Zexion.
I'm wondering, in this thread, is in inappropriate to plug my own story simply because I crave critique? I've been told I'm good, but really I'm not so sure, so...just wondering if that is selfish/egotistic or not.
The story in question is titled "Splintered Heart", so, yeah. I really want feedback on all sorts, because I'm always looking to improve. Right. Well. That's my blerb. I'll shut up now.
The story in question is titled "Splintered Heart", so, yeah. I really want feedback on all sorts, because I'm always looking to improve. Right. Well. That's my blerb. I'll shut up now.
^ Hmmm, I could look over it for you over. I'll give you a short critique of the first chapter a little later.
No, it's not selfish at all. If you look over the last few pages you'll see that a lot of people ask for critiques here.
And I stand by what I said before: Splintered Heart is probably the best written fanfiction I've read on this site so far. You character is very believable, and your grammar is pretty much flawless. I eagerly look forward to more (not to rush you, take your time).
As it is, I get antsy if I do not get another chapter up within a few days of each other.
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I can't keep to chaptered stories XD I used to when I was still in school and had the time to put into it, but alas :X only one shots for me.
But you pull them off so well.
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Hm? What of mine did you read? :3 I think the last one, no?
And, well, I've been writing fanfiction for a couple of years now. I'd be worried if I wasn't content with my skills or at least style x.x;
And, well, I've been writing fanfiction for a couple of years now. I'd be worried if I wasn't content with my skills or at least style x.x;
The talk between Namine and Sora, I believe it was?
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Yeah, that's the latest one :3~
http://forums.khinsider.com/fanfiction/136356-power-rangers-engine-squadron.html
Seriously, guys... Take at least five minutes to read my story. You really don't have to be a fan of Power Rangers to enjoy it.
Seriously, guys... Take at least five minutes to read my story. You really don't have to be a fan of Power Rangers to enjoy it.
it would totally sweet if i could get some critique of my fic, Kingdom Hearts: Heir to Truth. Cheers guys 
Hey, if someone has a lot of time on their hands, and could critique my story, Kingdom Hearts D, I would be extremely grateful. It's a bit long (more than 2200 words total), but even a review of a chapter or two would be great. Thanks!
There's a link in my sig, or the story is currently at the top of the second page of topics. Again, thanks to anyone who can help.
There's a link in my sig, or the story is currently at the top of the second page of topics. Again, thanks to anyone who can help.
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