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Yeah, they shut down the last thread because it was full of too much awesomeness. So, I guess we just continue from here.

Here's the current list of ranks (courtesy of The Lionheart):

1. Zaxeldion
2. Rextanse
3. Xowlin
4. Xana
5. Zixan
6. Kaarix
7. Xodyc
8. Charxai
9. Ruxel
10. Salix
11. Delacroix
12. DrBanxon
13. Zaverxi
14. Caxboj
15. Ojex
16. Daxic
17. Jynx
18. Xatsuin
19. Xishn
20. Zhymarx



Story Outline

PART/STORY/CHAPTER ONE Beginnings.

-Organization XIII is resurrected by an unknown being (Trinity), except for the traitors from Chain of Memories and KH2(Marluxia, Larxene, Axel, and Roxas).

-The empty spaces are filled with Rextanse, Xana, Daxic, Zaxeldion, and Xowlin.

-Over a severe difference in opinion, Rextanse and Zaxeldion decide to defect from Org. XIII. Xowlin and Xana follow with them.

- Daxic and Xigbar, who discovered this information, rat them out to Xemnas. Xemnas (along with Xigbar, Zexion, and Saix) confonts and assaults the four. Daxic's there too, but not to fight.

- During the battle, Zaxeldion attempts to fend them off alone, while the others escape. He gets poisoned by Zexion, just before Xana manages to tap into her powers and get everyone out of there. This is where Daxic's obsession with Xana's powers is born.

-Daxic is sent, as a mole for Xemnas, to join them.

-The recruiting of the first 9 of the Exiled takes place(this makes 14 if you include the original 5). This part should be a time lapse, that gives an overview of the other members.

-Daxic informs to Xemnas that the Exiled have grown too large, and need to be cut down (though he's telling them FAR too late, on purpose. He hopes the Exiled will end Org. 13 without him having to lift a finger). Organization XIII, along with an extremely powerful heartless, attacks the Exiled Order.

-The Exiled eventually end Organization XIII, and we reveal to the reader Daxic's plan to break down the Exiled in a similar fashion(none of the other members know he was a mole, but some just don't trust him anyway).

- Through a series of events that took place during the battle, Rextanse and a battered Jynx, enter "The Void" to attempt to bring Jynx back to the conscious world.

- A keyblader scout(Ricti), who has been spying on Org. 13 since their resurrection, returns to his base to report the past events the other Keybladers.

During the time Ricti is away, the Exiled recruit members 14-21, and Rextanse returns with Jynx from “The Void”.

-Assuming that the Exiled are attempting to use Kingdom Hearts, like Org. 13 did, the keybladers attack members of the Exiled Order separately (learning from Org. 13's mistake: not fighting as a whole group). While the members are off on a specific assignment (perhaps the recruiting?), the keybladers attack while they're scattered about.

-Each keyblader looses, save Liri. Though she won her match, she spares her adversaries because of her crush on Rextanse. Ricti, Jixah's brother, is killed by Daxic without Jixah knowing.

PART/STORY/CHAPTER TWO Weakness.

-The Mystic Order is introduced. A brief description of their past as a group is given. (The option of individual human pasts will be there, just before each Mystic Order member is defeated, though it take up too much time/prove unnecessary.)

-The Exiled continue to recruit members, adding members 22-30 (Or should this take place AFTER the Mystic Order?)

-The Mystic Order honorably challenge the Exiled to battle, in attempts to see exactly why Trinity shows so much interest in this group of nobodies. Each group of Exiled members is teleported to a separate place in time and space to fight their respective Mystic Order member. This is all just to show their strength. If they wanted, the Mystic Order could crush the Exiled Order without breaking a sweat, if they attacked as a group.

-In a bit of a Dragon Ball Z style (jump from fight to fight in order to make the battles seem longer than they are), each battle takes place. And, again with many casualties on the Exiled's side, the Exiled win and are taken back to the dimension they're used to.

-Do to the massive number of casualties, and the near victories ONLY gained by exploiting small weakness of the Mystic Order, some of Exiled get their wake up call of how weak they really are. Many of the members go off into solitude to train, while others do so as a group. This is when Jynx and Rextanse (Xatsuin sneaks in with them) re-enter "The Void", to learn to hone their powers. Upon which time, they are ambushed by Xemo.

-At this time, the Reverse Order's Exal shows his face and warns all the members of the upcoming "test", before leaving with a cocky laugh. He gives this warning in the form of a group of questions and riddles.

PART/STORY/CHAPTER THREE Conspiracies.

-(The battle with Xemo is carried over, and finished in this chapter)Most of the members are still training, some are done, The Order of Sin give their assault on each individual member. This takes place within their minds.

-While the attack is taking place, the Reverse Order hold a meeting, to discuss their goals and plans (this serves as their introduction). The details on the clone experiments that created them and Jynx are revealed.

-The results of the battles with the Order of Sin vary. Some win, some loose. Those who win become better for it, while those who loose become even more consumed by the sin they lost to. This event causes each of the members to realize that it's time to regroup back at The Castle That Once Was. This does not include Jynx, Rextanse, and Xatsuin, because they’re still struggling through “The Void.”

-They each arrive only to meet the Reverse Order standing at the gates. This battle causes the most tragedies of all, leaving about 8(give or take a few) members alive. During this battle, Jynx and Rextanse return from the void just in time to aid the wounded. After everything was said and done, (everyone beaten, battered, or dead, and the Reverse Order eliminated) the traitors ambush everyone else, and kidnap Xana.

PART/STORY/CHAPTER FOUR Betrayal.(or) Endings.

-Daxic reveals the full extent of his plans. That he plans to combine his and Xana's powers to create a beast of ultimate power. “The Eater of Worlds”, a creature made of acid, with Xana’s newly formed heart as its core. And it would be under HIS control.

-While Daxic begins the creation of his eater of worlds, the last of the knocked out Exiled come to. They realize what happened, and begin searching for Daxic and the other traitors. As they get closer and closer, they begin to loose faith in the idea that Xana's still alive.

-The finally locate Daxic when the creature is completed, and Xana is nearly drained of all of her energy. The final battle takes place, atop the roof of The Castle That Never Was (unless we can come up with a better location).

-At the end of the battle most everyone is dead. Jynx is able to destroy the world eater, and Daxic soon after. He joins the other survivors in a sigh of relief. That is, just to find out that Daxic wasn't dead. He couldn't be killed. He simply reformed from the acid.

-At this moment, Trinity finally reveals herself. With the simple phrase "Sleep, ye restless soul.", Daxic fades into nothingness. She tells the few survivors her role in the story. That she brought Org. 13 back to life, that it was her fault the Mystic Order attacked, and that the Order of Sin were her former disciples (and a gift given to the Reverse Order to do with what they will). She told them that this was all to give Jynx, the one of two nobodies ever to gain a heart, enough strength to seal Kingdom Hearts for good.

-Sacrificing his heart and soul, Jynx seals Trinity within Kingdom Hearts, and removes the lock. This prevents anyone, even a keyblade master, from opening Kingdom Hearts again. It's simply too powerful, and too pure to be tampered with. And Trinity's natural urge to send the world into nothingness is one that cannot be allowed to roam free. Eventually, she will erode from the inside out (being the mistress of naught), leaving Kingdom Hearts devoid of anything but what it was originally meant to have: Light.

-The remaining members band together, yet again, in attempt to recreate the Exiled from the ground up. There are signs, though, that some of the members thought to be dead might still be alive/return.
 
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Well, they can decide which to go to. It doesn't really matter, as long as we get some work done.
 
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too bad they closed the other one...oh well...
 
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I say we should use this one...

Dammit MasterMind you beat me to the overview xD

however, you should edit that post and put it as the first post, so everyone can see the story first thing.

or not..whichever you wish
 

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OF COURSE, EVERYTHING I DO IS USELESS.
Even though I got to it first, I get to delete my thread.
I see how it is.
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I'm starting to think we should make this a thread in the Fan Fic section and title it "Planning: The Exiled"

we post up the basic overview and add more ideas each time. So i guess that's for our finished product and add on's..
what do you guys think?
 

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Oogie: I don't like that idea :D

And just in case someone missed it,: Just, without italics xD

Chapter Twenty-Four – Two Days of Infamy​
Memories of a culprit…

Jynx, Daxic, Xodyc, Xemo, and Darthex walked on through the labyrinth of Infra-Ecclesia. They had run through the doors of Wüst Ecclesia only an hour before and immediately split up, looking through every room of the place, until Xemo found the shire of Diligo. He called for the rest and down they went, into the eternal maze that they believed would lead them to the Calx.
They stood at a passageway that curved to the right into a pile of rocks unlike the rock that made up the walls. It was like an avalanche blocked the tunnel. So they continued to the left and only Daxic noticed something that sped away from them through the intersecting channel ahead of them.
“Did anyone see that?” He said, cautiously. “I swear I just saw a blur run past us.”
“Dammit, Daxic,” Jynx said impatiently, “It was probably some beast of the dark. Nothing I can’t handle.” He added boastingly.
* * * * * * * *​
Bonus kept running until he saw a perpendicular passageway to the right and hid behind a wall. He was shaking head to foot in fear. He had just been close to being caught by a group of people he didn’t know. A group of people he didn’t expect.
‘Who were those people? THERE WERE ONLY SUPPSED TO BE TWO!'
He raked his brain as his heart pounded against his chest. How did they manage to sneak past him all this time?
Why didn’t he notice the third party?
“My plan…” He whispered, “But there’s still hope…” he said reassuringly.
He ran as hard as he could to look for another way to
the Calx.
* * * * * * * *​
Jynx’s anger with Daxic heightened at his stupid comment, “So do you really think the Calx is down here?”
Jynx thought is was extremely obvious that the Calx was here. He had the sudden urge to attack Daxic.
Just as he did years before.
* ~ * ~ * ~ * ~ * ~ *​
Jynx took off his Exiled coat, it would blow his cover when he murdered Daxic, Lord of the Exiled. He was one of Daxic’s highest ranking generals, so he would become Lord, and do anything he pleased.
He found a set of beggar clothes and slashed them up with his keyblades. Then he realized that those would give him away, too. He looked around his room for another weapon. When he didn’t find one, he went outside and found an old katana in a dumpster. It was extremely rusted, making it all the more deadly while at the same time it looked as though it had never been used. Back in his room, he went into a locked shelf and found a flask of dark purple liquid. He’d need it later.
‘This is it…’ He thought exultantly.
Jynx took the rusty sword and jammed it in his mouth. Coughing up blood all over his clothing, he also succeeded in rasping his voice. He cut his hair down and hid all his scars in makeup. He wouldn’t let anyone recognize him.

“Who are you?” Daxic yelled to the man. “What are you doing in my territory?”
“I am Niajx.” Jynx thought wildly, in a guttural, rasping voice that sounded faintly like someone DrBanxon, who was in the crowd around them, knew. They stood there for a few more minutes as though Daxic had expected more, while the crowd murmured loudly.
Lord Daxic was about to speak once again, but Jynx flew towards him as he took out a battered old sword that looked like it had never been used.
Daxic had his hand on his own weapon, but he was too slow. Niajx had impaled him, right through one of his kidneys. He coughed up blood and fell to the ground. Everyone in the crowd was too shocked and terrified to move. DrBanxon was the first to make a move. He ran forward and took out his wand, wanting to do the same thing as Jynx and impale him.
Jynx wasn’t about to let Baxon do that. He took up his sword and stabbed himself so brutally that he could not have lived.
But he did live, as he had slightly missed any vital organ inside of him. As he fell back, he removed himself from the place and transported into an empty field on the other side of the castle. They would think him dead, but he quickly removed the sword and took out the flask of thick purple liquid.
As he drank, his wounds healed and he felt much better.
After he fixed himself up, Jynx ran back and easily blended into the crowd of terrified members. But he soon realized, to his immense surprise, DrBanxon was standing at the pedestal at which Lord Daxic stood when he made his speeches.
“People of the Exiled Order.” Banxon said, his voice magnified by the wand he pointed at his throat. “Our Lord, our Daxic, has been what some believe to be mortally wounded. But fear not; he is safe in our hospitals. He will be back to us in a matter of weeks. Daxic has allowed me to substitute for him.”
Rage and hatred bubbled within Jynx. ‘This was supposed to be mine…’ But Banxon went on, after a long pause.
“Today will forever be known as the day of infamy. But as long as we can stick together, we can get through this. Me and my newly appointed Peak Generals…”
The speech went on for only a few minutes, but to Jynx, it felt like an eternity.
* ~ * ~ * ~ * ~ * ~ *​
The present-day DrBanxon, while feeling like a god back then, felt miserable and lonely now. This maze had proved to be extremely difficult; he had already walked into a dead end.
But finally he found it, a passageway that felt different than the others. He looked to his left and what he saw caught him off guard.
There, only a few yards away, in a large opening, was a golden light shining off of a small golden stone set atop a magnificent pedestal.
He walked into the room and to the pedestal and saw, for the first time, the Calx. The pedestal had the words: “Jère Bjost Dïr Calx”. Banxon did not understand this language, but he did not care. He looked at the breath-taking stone in front of him. It was shaped like a crystal shard, each of its ten golden faces a kite. It did not look like ordinary gold, which was soft and mendable, it was solid and powerful and gave an aura of extreme magical ability. He went to reach for it, when he noticed something out the corner of his eye. He looked ahead, beyond the pedestal, and his heart dropped into his feet as he witnessed Jynx, Daxic, and some other Exiled members he did not recognize staring right back at him. Then they all heard a shuffle to their left (Banxon’s right) and saw Atrox Ereptor and his group, or what was left of it.
All jaws in the room dropped slightly as, only a few moments later, Bonus barged into the room behind Atrox. They were all familiar with each other, until this stranger walked in. He was sweating bullets and noticed that all eyes were on him.
“I guess it’s time,” He said slowly, after finding his voice, “That you learn my tale…”
 

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good chapter banxon, i have managed to read the chapters when i can
 

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I'm not too crazy about that idea either b/c about 25%of the time, we have spam. That's why it's best we stay in Forum Insanity. Also, I'll edit my first post as soon as I get to a computer.
Banxon, can you give me a link to your story site?
 

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I'm not too crazy about that idea either b/c about 25%of the time, we have spam. That's why it's best we stay in Forum Insanity. Also, I'll edit my first post as soon as I get to a computer.
Banxon, can you give me a link to your story site?
Awww man I love those words.
The link is at the top of my sig.

And I talked to Ooogie, he meant both this thread AND a thread in the Fan Fic section. Yet I still don't like the idea xD
 

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Actually, I thought about naming it something along those lines, but I didn't know how everyone would react. So, CaM 3.0 was born....
 

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Good point, we can't really have new members, I guess me and AO were the last ones =D
Maybe we should get rid of some(not a lot, just some) of the Exiled 2 characters
Like Xyfejjer, he doesn't come here anymore soooo....

LOL I wanted to get to 1000, and then when we were just at that point...gone, LOL

EDIT: LMAO, I just was about to read the overveiw and then "The other thread was closed because it had too much awesomeness" LOLOL
 
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Well at least we passed 666. I personally wanted us to get to 1337, and THEN close it, immortalized on that page.

So what were we talking about again?

And I also agree that we shouldn't allow any new members. Maybe we should change the title to The Exiled Order. Or are you able to change the title of a thread?
 
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