So this here is a new original story and think I'll actually work on this one more depending on how well it's liked. it's about Atsuko as she makes her way through her life while dealing with her Aloof Big Sister Mayumi and her Smart Girl best friend Syumi. I hope you all enjoy this original work and please comment and tell me what you think!
Spoiler ShowCradle of Life
Chapter 1: Introduction.
This is the story of a young girl named Atsuko she lives with her mother and sister, she is 14 Years old.
“Atsuko! Atsuko! Wake up your gonna be late for school!” Atsuko's mother said pounding on the door to get her lazy daughter to wake up. Atsuko let out a groan as she tugged the covers over her head. “Eh, I say let her sleep late. It's not like she pays attention in school anyways.” Mayumi, Atsuko's silver haired older sister, said as she walked down the stairs. “Hey! I Do to pay attention!” Atsuko said as she poked her head out of the door. “It's about time you waked up Atsko. “ Atsuko's mother said with a smile. “Don't call me by that nickname Mama!” Atsuko said as she closed the door to get dress.
“I'm Going now” Mayumi said as she walked out the front door. A couple of moments later Atsuko was walking to school as she met up with her friend Syumi. “Hi Syu. I can't believe Summer Break is already over.” Atsuko said with a yawn as Syumi nodded while reading a Manga. “Indeed it did rather pass fast this year didn't it?” Syumi said as she put her Manga away and pushed up her glasses.
“You have gained weight Atsuko.” Syumi said rather bluntly “What! You mean you noticed!?” Atsuko said as she held her bulging belly. “Indeed it appears rather soft and squishy then before break.” Syumi said as she poked it. (Truth be told she didn't gain all that much. Syumi is just playfully teasing her)
and then Syumi pinched it with a smile. “Cut that out Syu!” Atsuko said slapping her hand away. “I Don't know about you sometimes.” Atsuko said blushing as fixed her Uniform up. Syu giggled. “Your just so fun to tease sometimes.” Syu said pushing up her glasses as she and Atsuko entered the school ground.
“Bout time you showed up lazy butt.” Mayumi said to her sister as she was in her track suit already. “Hey Mayumi. I Can't believe your already raring to go.” Atsuko said as Syumi smiled. “Of Course an Athletics mind never rests right Mayu?” Syumi said as Mayumi slightly blush. “Please Nigasa call me by my full name and not by that silly nickname.” Mayumi said as Atsuko and Syumi started to walk to there classes as the bell ringed. “See ya after school!” Atsuko said as they walked to there class.
Mayumi Karino
Age:16.
Height: 6'1”
Eye Color: Silver
Hair Color: Silver.
Unique Traits: Taller than the girls in her grade (And is quite sensitive about her height), and her hair color being different from her sister and mother.
Atsuko Karino
Age: 14
Height 4'9
Eye Color: Blue
Hair Color: Red.
Unique Traits : She's an Anime fan and gamer chick. Her knowledge of video games and Anime are astounding.
Syumi Nigasa
Age: 14
Height 5'0
Eye Color: Green
Hair Color: Black.
Unique Traits: She's a Manga and Video Game fan as much as her friend Atsuko, she likes to tease both Karino children about there flaws but she doesn't mean anything by it.
Later in the day as Atsuko and Syumi where in class Atsuko happened to be asleep at the desk as the class got done with there work early. “Hello Mayumi! How was your summer break?” A Young Blond Hair girl said as she came up to Syumi, who was in the process of reading another Manga. “Hmm? Oh it was fun Mitso. How about yours?” Mayumi said not looking up.
“I Had so much fun but I missed being around my darling Atsuko.” Mitso said as she blushed as she looked at the sleeping Atsuko. “It looks like some of us hasn't adjusted to being back to school yet.” as Mitso got a rather evil smile as she snuck behind Atsuko and pinched her butt.
“OUCH!” Atsuko shouted as she jumped up out her slumber making her desk fall over as she stood up. “Ehehehe. Sorry Atsko I just had to pinch that cute butt of yours.” Mitso said with a blush as made a pinching motion with her fingers. “You never change do you Mio?” Mayumi said with a giggle as Atsuko picked up her desk. “Geeze, why do you have to be so weird Mio.” Atsuko said sitting back down. “Hey, I've been meaning to ask Mayu. What have you been reading?” Atsuko said as Mio said down in the empty seat behind Atsuko.
“Knowing Syumi it's probably one those Ecchi series she likes to read.” Mio said with a smile. “In fact I have been reading Rosario + Vampire.” Syumi said as Atsuko said as she looked at it and just so happened the page she was on happen to be a shot of a girls in a locker room. “So it is one of those series!” Atsuko said shocked as Syumi glared at her. “Do not judge a series based on one panel of the Manga!” Syumi said as she pushed up her glasses.
As the bell rang for the girls go home
. This is just another normal day in there life. This story will be about the developments of these characters as they learn to accept themselves how the are. So I hope you enjoyed this first chapter of an original story.