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Oh boy, what happen to the humor?! Joking aside, I love the latest two chapters. :D I feel bad for Axel, having to fight Saix like that. Especially being lied to, when it comes to being a nobody, who isn't said to have feelings. I'm actually surprised Saix apologized about the fight beforehand too. However, I'm extremely impressed to hear he got the scar from Axel of all people.

Unfortunate for Arlene to suffer the loss of her own sister. I like the way you told it, because it suits Larxene so well. If only she hadn't made such a small mistake. I wonder if, anybody could ever break the ice around her heart now?

Will you be doing Marluxia next?
 

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Oh boy, what happen to the humor?! Joking aside, I love the latest two chapters. :D I feel bad for Axel, having to fight Saix like that. Especially being lied to, when it comes to being a nobody, who isn't said to have feelings. I'm actually surprised Saix apologized about the fight beforehand too. However, I'm extremely impressed to hear he got the scar from Axel of all people. Unfortunate for Arlene to suffer the loss of her own sister. I like the way you told it, because it suits Larxene so well. If only she hadn't made such a small mistake. I wonder if, anybody could ever break the ice around her heart now?Will you be doing Marluxia next?
Haven't thoght about it yet.Next chapter should be up this weekend or Friday.
 

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Chapter VIII-Hollow Radiant​

"Lenzo, get back inside it hasn't been safe since those wretched creatures showed up." Even said to the young boy.

Dilan walked up to Lenzo and began to escort him back into the castle.Lenzo was a rather quiet and shy boy at time.Ansem the Wise was basically his guardian that watched over him after he lost his parents. Lenzo began to make his back to the castle.

"Ansem, we found Lenzo wandering outside the castle again." Dilan said.

"Ah, my youngest apprentice.How did you manage to escape my grasp?" Ansem said.

Ansem took a deep breath of fustration.He was just in the middle of doing some research.

"If I may ask, is there something troubling you?"

Ansem didn't respond.He was distracted by his research.

"Ansem?Lenzo, go to your room." Dilan said.

He left and so did Dilan to leave Ansem alone.Meanwhile, Apprentice Xehanort began to conduct experiments on the Unversed and Heartless.

Dilan came in and saw what he was doing and stared at him in shock.

"Didn't he tell you to abandon this research?"

"Well." Xehanort said with a grin on his face.

He summoned a keyblade and injeced it into Dilan's heart.

"Whyyyy?" Dilan moaned.

He reached for his lance but Xehanort saw and kicked it out of his reach.

Aeleus, Even, and Ansem came rushing in.

"What have you done?" Ansem asked.

Xehanort only smiled took the keyblade and did the same to Aeleus and Even.

"Why, isn't it Ansem the Wise.The Sage of Radiant Garden, the professor of many, the I-know-it-all, it's best.I have always wondered why you haven't let me go on with my research and experiments."

"We can't risk anything."

"This research could lead to extraordinary things!Where does the heart come from?What does it take to lose the heart?How much damage can be taken until the heart is shattered?We might get these things to serve under our control!"

Lenzo began to come in.

"Lenzo get back!"

Which life would you live Lenzo? A life of being controled, told what do, trapped in this castle?Or a life of your own control and your life?" Xehanort questioned.

Lenzo looked at Ansem then Xehanort the Ansem again and Xehanort.He began to walk to Xehanort.

"No, you foolish, ignorant boy.My foolish apprentices!"

Ansem soon blacked out.

"Braig, finish it up."

Soon Xehanort's head began to ache and he passed out.He woke up 5 minutes later.

"Hey! Is this how you wanted it?Xehanort, wanna fill me in?"

Xehanort summons his keyblade.

"Do you remember now, or....Wait, did you never lose your memory?"

Xehanort ran up to him and injected his keyblade in his heart.

Braig made a panicked look.

"That's not my name.I'm not "Xehanort"."

Braig fell to the ground.

"My name is...... Ansem."


"Malfunction. Malfunction. Lockdown detected."

Ansem dissapeared.Xehanort rushed for the exit.When he got their he took his keyblade, poined it at the castle and began to partly destroy it.

The heartless and unversed Xehanort had been experimenting on began to summon and call in for some help.Not too soon a few Darksides came and began to destroy the world.Sides of buildings and monuments are destroed.Soon the Darksides begin to leave and the Unverses are gone for now..... but the Heartless stay.

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End of Chapter VIII​
 
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Chapter VIII-Hollow Radiant​

"Lenzo, get back inside it hasn't been safe since those wretched creatures showed up." Even said to the young boy.

Dilan walked up to Lenzo and began to escort him back into the castle.Lenzo was a rather quiet and shy boy at time.Ansem the Wise was basically his guardian that watched over him after he lost his parents. Lenzo began to make his back to the castle.

"Ansem, we found Lenzo wandering outside the castle again." Dilan said.

"Ah, my youngest apprentice.How did you manage to escape my grasp?" Ansem said.

Ansem took a deep breath of fustration.He was just in the middle of doing some research.

"If I may ask, is there something troubling you?"

Ansem didn't respond.He was distracted by his research.

"Ansem?Lenzo, go to your room." Dilan said.

He left and so did Dilan to leave Ansem alone.Meanwhile, Apprentice Xehanort began to conduct experiments on the Unversed and Heartless.

Dilan came in and saw what he was doing and stared at him in shock.

"Didn't he tell you to abandon this research?"

"Well." Xehanort said with a grin on his face.

He summoned a keyblade and injeced it into Dilan's heart.

"Whyyyy?" Dilan moaned.

He reached for his lance but Xehanort saw and kicked it out of his reach.

Aeleus, Even, and Ansem came rushing in.

"What have you done?" Ansem asked.

Xehanort only smiled took the keyblade and did the same to Aeleus and Even.

"Why, isn't it Ansem the Wise.The Sage of Radiant Garden, the professor of many, the I-know-it-all, it's best.I have always wondered why you haven't let me go on with my research and experiments."

"We can't risk anything."

"This research could lead to extraordinary things!Where does the heart come from?What does it take to lose the heart?How much damage can be taken until the heart is shattered?We might get these things to serve under our control!"

Lenzo began to come in.

"Lenzo get back!"

Which life would you live Lenzo? A life of being controled, told what do, trapped in this castle?Or a life of your own control and your life?" Xehanort questioned.

Lenzo looked at Ansem then Xehanort the Ansem again and Xehanort.He began to walk to Xehanort.

"No, you foolish, ignorant boy.My foolish apprentices!"

Ansem soon blacked out.

"Braig, finish it up."

Soon Xehanort's head began to ache and he passed out.He woke up 5 minutes later.

"Hey! Is this how you wanted it?Xehanort, wanna fill me in?"

Xehanort summons his keyblade.

"Do you remember now, or....Wait, did you never lose your memory?"

Xehanort ran up to him and injected his keyblade in his heart.

Braig made a panicked look.

"That's not my name.I'm not "Xehanort"."

Braig fell to the ground.

"My name is...... Ansem."


"Malfunction. Malfunction. Lockdown detected."

Ansem dissapeared.Xehanort rushed for the exit.When he got their he took his keyblade, poined it at the castle and began to partly destroy it.

The heartless and unversed Xehanort had been experimenting on began to summon and call in for some help.Not too soon a few Darksides came and began to destroy the world.Sides of buildings and monuments are destroed.Soon the Darksides begin to leave and the Unverses are gone for now..... but the Heartless stay.

Hollow_Bastion.jpg


End of Chapter VIII​
I thought Xehanort lost his memory, but why was he faking it?
 

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I thought Xehanort lost his memory, but why was he faking it?

He wanted to go on with experiments on with Heartless but Ansem wouldn't allow him.He began to regain his memory and passed out and he woke up and remembered some things.I tend to change things in my fan fics.
 

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This was really exciting. Xehanort isn't merciless at all. Turning his keyblade on all of the guards without hesitation. Braig must of been shocked, to say the least. Lenzo is Zexion, right? A little out of touch with the series, so I happen to ask this silly question. C: Wow, what becomes of the Unversed and Darksides? What will happen next?
 

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This was really exciting. Xehanort isn't merciless at all. Turning his keyblade on all of the guards without hesitation. Braig must of been shocked, to say the least. Lenzo is Zexion, right? A little out of touch with the series, so I happen to ask this silly question. C: Wow, what becomes of the Unversed and Darksides? What will happen next?

Yeah, Lenzo.I was surprised when I found out that was his name.The Unversed were eventually wiped out from Hollow Bastion for now....and so were the Darksides by a few citizens (non keyblade but weapon heros) but average heartless stay shadows and stuff.Hard to say what's next right now.Expect a few new characters though.
 

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Just want to say that I wannna finish this as soon as possible and work on my editing skills and details and ect on a new thread.

Chapter IX and X​


Roxas and Axel sat on top of the clock tower as usual.The breeze was just right.Sunset just the same as yesterday.Roxas took a bite of the sea-salt icecream wondering how can it be any better.Xion hadn't showed up yet and Roxas began to worry if she ran off again like all the other times.30 minutes passed and she still hasn't shown.

"Do you think she ran off again?" Roxas asked.

"I don't know."

Its only a matter of tme before the mirror breaks Axel thought in his head.

Roxas frowned.Roxas began to think about what would happen to Xion if she keeps running off which brought and even more important matter to Roxas.

"What happens when a nobody fades away?Where do they go?"

Axel knew where he was going with this.

"There is nowhere where we're supposed to go.We were never even supposed to exist.We just disappear out of existence.But if you and Xion keep working hard enough, we may get hearts of our own and actually exist."

"Oh", Roxas frowned.

"Well we should probably get going." Axel said awkwardly.

When they got to The World That Never Was, Roxas began to sneak out looking for Xion.He headed to the Beast's castle.It was windy as usual.Roxas looked around in the back courtyard hoping he could get a glimpse of Xion but saw nothing to his need.Roxas looked down shamefully at himself wondering how could he let this happen.

He began to head to Agrabah.He found himself in the middle of the desert where he met the Genie with Xion.Roxas began to walk to the city.Out of nowhere, he saw a glimpse of Xion.

"Xion!" Roxas called.

She had her dark hood on.She began to turn and motion her head then she stopped halfway through. Roxas began to realise that there was somebody else next to her.A taller figure next to her in the same organization coat put his hand on hrr shoulder and shook his head.They opened up a dark portal and left.

Roxas went back to HQ, went to his room, and wrote in his journal:

"Dear Journal,

Alot has been going on lately.I found out I was never even supposed to actually exist.And to top all that, Xion is missing.I saw her in Agrabah but she got away.I don't know why I care so much.Xemnas says we don't have hearts but I feel like I do.I feel like Xemnas and the organization are hiding a lot of things from me.Especially Axel he has been really suspicious lately."

The next day, Roxas did his daily chores wiping out heartless and completing missions. He headed out to Twilight Town to search for Xion solo.He must've been searching for days now.Soon Axel showed and the two searched for Xion and the Imposter.They spotted them and traced em down to the underground train station.It wasn't long until they lost their tail and gave up searching for the day.

End of book.Continues in 358/2 days.Very obvious I got lazy towards the end.
 

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KH Rules, if you ever wanted me to go over your mistakes in your stories, I can spare some time for it. =D For the most part, you story sentences run into each other, and need to be separated. Everything else looks good, and I think I'd like to see more happening with Roxas. Instead of recaps of the actual game, having more going on. Like with your previous chapters of this. Otherwise, I wish you the best in completing this soon.
 
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