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Tevintur: The Dream World (OOC and Sign Ups)



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Lone

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I'm going to post soon. I have been busy lately, I'll have something up in the next couple days either later today or tommorow.

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Ok I posted.
 
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Xeon{Myroku}

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Okay thank you. But just to let you guys know, I may be slow on posts. My laptop crashed on me and I'm using my mother's laptop to get online. I hope I can get it fixed up so I can get on a bit more. But if I can't, well I might have to replace it then. So until then I'm hoping it won't resort to that.
 

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Name: Ryan
Gender: Male
Age 14

Description: Natural World: Has a light blonde hair colour and deep blue eyes. Has a natural body build, white toned skin and a tight black shirt. Sandy brown coloured pants and goes halfway down his ankles.

Tevintur: Has dark deep black hair and a brown shirt. Light green eyes and a muscled body build. Has visible abs through his shirt and tanned body colour. Has black half-jeans and a sword sheaf on his side.

Personality: Natural World: Ryan is caring and tries to solve everything using the tools of peace and reason. Ryan has some smarts but not going to make a professor for a living. Laid back and doesn’t try to make new problems by stressing.

Tevintur: Ryan is not as caring as his real world self. If someone or something keeps on persisting as a problem he takes care of it with force. He can’t stand just sitting down and has to move about. He isn’t very smart like scientifically, but is very street smart and also makes brilliant plans.

Weapons : Tevintur: A long, even blade that has a thin line of crystal through the middle. This crystal can be used to absorb a certain amount of power from attack. (Both physical and magical)

Abilities: Tevintur
Dark Attack: Ryan’s sword starts to spread darkness of it. Then Ryan assaults the enemy.
Black Magic: Unleashes a form of darkness, to Ryan’s delight.
Remnant of Hope: A small flash of light shines and blinds the enemy for a few seconds.

History: Natural World: Ryan lived a normal life. At 13 he was having the most fun he had, had in years. Making new friends in high school and just hanging out with them. His Mum and Dad gave him whatever he wanted and all the freedom he deemed himself fit.
His life changed when he reached fourteen. The water tasted funny and he started to sleep longer. His friends were breaking into more fights and Ryan wasn’t there to stop them. He slept and slept and began to dream of a world. A world that was happy and peaceful. Ryan’s grades started to drop from Bs to Cs and even a couple of Ds. His life started to meld with this new one.
Then one day on the news. A boy, Cyrus had fallen into a deep coma. Of course this didn’t matter to Ryan. He just kept on sleeping. He did notice though, that now the world wasn’t as peaceful and green. This snapped him into focus. “Was it a coincidence that this happens?” Ryan then tried to sleep longer to investigate in his dreams.

Tevintur: Ryan was as normal a kid as you could get. Until he reached the age of ten. Someone noticed that Ryan had some potential in sword play and control over the darkness. He was a little nervous at first but caught on quick. He was discharged from his master at the age of tweleve because he had taken the training 'too far'. Ryan then lived in refuge for the rest of his life enjoying all of the cenery and peacefulness.
Now though a burning hatred was running through Ryan. Ryan was angry that a 'Warlord' thought that he or she could just walk in here and BAM. Everything is brown and disgusting. Ryan constantly fought for his life and wanted to kill the Warlord. He would do so at any cost.
 

SilentTrinity

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Okay so um first off.

bump. People its been three days since the RP thread had any activity, so plz go and get a post in.

second uh D&L your temp its uh...how do I say this....

Um nothing personal but your temp needs improving, especially on the history part and abilities.

So uh yeah....get some help on that temp and redo it and ill check it again.
 

SilentTrinity

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So apparently no one was listening. Sigh.

In any case, I'm giving this Rp til Sunday before I close it.

Thanks guys, for letting another Rp of mine to die, though its really my fault.
 
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